This story is a sequel to When Two Hearts are Daring
This is an AU story where in Rainbow Dash's top secret antics in the weather factory get found out, but instead of jail time she just has to serve community service for the next 120 days. She meets some old friends and perhaps gains a few new ones. She might as well because she won't be touching the ground again for a long time.
Note: Title pic will get up here eventually.
A sequel? I'm in.
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Holy shit you're still alive???!?!!!?!!?
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Yes, my child. I hath returned.
This is simply amazing, Pigeonsmall! Your writing is absolutely captivating. The characterization is perfect and drew me right in. Pacing? Perfect. And of course you included background ponies rather than dragging in a bunch of OC's.
I LOVED this! I hope you continue the story. ^.^
There were only a few grammar errors that needed addressed. I'd be happy to be your editor for that if you'd like.
Random added word there at the end. Fairly certain "prologue" shouldn't be there.
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The best kind of reader!
So I just finished reading when two hearts are daring and the other sequel which hasn't finished yet. How do these work timeline wise? Is this a sequel to the unfinished sequel or does it work differently?
Who is this strange new author who's stories seem so familiar
But yeah, I agree this a more interesting take and its always good to build on something from the show.
In any case, glad to have you back!
More.
Still reading in 2016
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Working on itttt
Ooh boy, this is gonna be good. XD
7254121 I've been wanting to ask the same.
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I'm working on a new chapter now. And basically this is going to be a rewrite of Can of Weather Worms.
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OMG I have been waiting for this for a long time ^^