When Rainbow Dash agrees to go to prom with her friends, she discovers new feelings for Fluttershy when things go wrong.
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This is rather sweet though the story is a bit lacking in description and feels a bit jumpy in places. I'd suggest you work a bit more on discription and the pacing of your segments. You should linger a bit more in each setting don't be afriad type a bit more. All the same not bad for your first attempt just keep on working at it and you'll improve. For now have a like and keep up the work with effort comes improvement!
7212527 Hey thanks for the advice! I'll keep working so the future of this story will be better!
7212531 Thanks!
I'd love to see this finished
7245761 Unfortuantely I haven't much time to work on this lately, but it shall be continued!
Nice story but... What's with the 2nd pov?
UPDATES... please
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thanks for the update been waiting for this
It's a really sweet story, but i think you should work on the description a teeny, tiny bit more X3
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Thanks for an update. Loved reading it. Can't wait for more.
UPDATE UPDATE PUDETA AETDPU!
Update.
I love this fic. Please make more
Nice! Please update.
Wish you updated this, because it’s so adorable
RIP this fic :(