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The Silent King


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Rumble and Spike love each other very much and are equally content with how things are going with their lives. But one day Pipsqueak kisses Spike and confesses his love for Spike, so Spike suggests that they start a herd to try and see if hints work out. Rumble is still skeptical and doesn't know that he can share his love with his best friend he, but he doesn't want to ruin their friendship so he's willing to brave the storm.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 11 )

Holy Faust! My story actually got liked! :yay:

i like it and please make more chapters for this story

Your wish is my command. Madam

I don't like it, I love it! It's really interesting and I like the plot, carry on making chapters for those Who want more!:twilightsmile:

Why so many dislikes :fluttercry: oh well at least their being honest.

7224592 maybe it's not that good...:pinkiegasp:

We'll thanks for you honesty

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Good idea. Not so great execution. You need an editor, as well as longer chapters and slower pacing. Things are going by too quickly.

I'll give you a follow and come back to this story later. Good luck! With some work, I think this could turn into a great story, worthy of Steve's bookshelf.

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