Fluttershy And Discord Get Drunk.

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werewolf212001

werewolf212001 #1 · Jun 12th, 2016 · · ·

something says that octivava is going to be rather ticked that her table got knocked over spilling her drink.

Mister Phoenix

Mister Phoenix #2 · Jun 12th, 2016 · · ·

Wow, Fluttershy must have gotten so druck that she added a other h to her name.

Lunasservant1985

Lunasservant1985 #3 · Jun 12th, 2016 · · ·

7298072 sorry but octavia's not in this story, I liked the pic had no way to edit her out of it.

Lunasservant1985

Lunasservant1985 #4 · Jun 12th, 2016 · · ·

7298095 it only happened twice but it's fixed. Also no I wasn't drunk when
I wrote this.

werewolf212001

werewolf212001 #5 · Jun 12th, 2016 · · ·

7298117

Well even still, it was still worth a shot and it is still a very funny pic.

Mister Phoenix

Mister Phoenix #6 · Jun 12th, 2016 · · ·

7298129 Umm... Your title is still Fluttershhy and Discord Get Drunk. Get rid of the extra H, shy has only one.

cosmicobubisi

cosmicobubisi #7 · Jun 14th, 2016 · · ·

Proofreaders. They'll save your life. Or, at least, your story.

"No no don't try yo hide it, we're all friends here Fluttershy, don't be so u[tight. Just let them out and they'll relax on their own." He said as he softly began to chew on her wings. She eeped and squeaked louder.

Yo- to.
Get rid of the [.

A lot of other typos sprinkled around make it a little distracting, and Fluttershy is jus the tiniest bit OOC, but other than that, it doesn't look too bad! Keep it up!

Lunasservant1985