"With the world so set on tearing itself apart, it doesn't seem like such a bad thing to me to wanna put a little bit of it back together"
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The sun is shining, the birds are chirping, and the thousand or so copies of Big Mac were happily going about their day.
Something about that doesn't seem right. Something is off, and Big Mac doesn't understand how it happened. He'd just woken up that morning and nothing was the same. What to do?
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Nice story!
Uuuuuhhhhhhhh, . . . What? I'm baffled. That was an awesome story, I really enjoyed it.
I feel like this was a silly variant loop from the yggdrasil time loops. Was this inspired by that?
Sleepy Panda, huh? I haven't heard that name in a long, long time. I guess that we're both survivors of the great fimfiction war. Aye, Sleepy was a good general. It's sad that she had to end so soon.
An enjoyable read. I have a few corrections. I'll send them to you.
Sounds like something Discord would do...
Infinite time looooooooop!
Oooo I liked this!
good work
and btw:
You kind of left a large gap in the middle of that sentence
you should probably change that
7207908 I'm not sure what that is
7208432 Yus
7207967 Eeyup
7208827 Fixed. I think
Oh?
Sounds like Big Mac is presenting the facade of being just a regular Earth pony on the outside while he has some big ambitions
7209785 Indeed
7209002 there's still a gap there
maybe it's fim being weird or some thing 
7210086 You sure its not your device cause I can't see it?
7210089 it might be
just thought I'd mention it in case it isn't, cause in the middle of the sentence it just randomly goes to the next line
7210091 How about now?
7210104 ahhh yes, that's fixed it
7208986
Well I'm glad I get to share it with you!
here
Now, before you go take two months to catch up to find what I'm talking about, a brief run down of what the time loops are.
The universe is broken, and to save it, the admins need to find and fix the source of the damage. In the mean time, they set each world to go into a time loop to keep the universe stable. In each loop, there is an anchor that keeps the loop running. If the anchor dies, the loop ends. The only mission for the loopers is to stay sane.
Have fun reading it. It took me at least two months to catch up, but it is definitely worth it.
Nice. I liked it. It was amusing. Confusing, but funny.
Wow . That was great
So, is it a dream sequence?
BTw
That's what you get for having oats and hard cider before bed, big mac!
Crazy story, keep up the good work!
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good story here have a thumbs up
You and Sleepy Panda did a great job on this.
So this is basically that one scene from Being John Malkovich except it's more Being John Mac-ovich. I approve.
This has been reviewed by equus library.
Ha!
Can kind of see the Princess Big Mac a mile off, but that was still quite fun to read.
When I got to the end, I totally expected him to wake up with Apple Mac breathing down his neck.
Another story of yours that I really liked. The central idea is ridiculous, but the fact that it's played straight makes it work. Big Mac's reaction to the mess feels consistent with his character; he slowly considers the problem instead of immediately panicking and running off for help. The ending also worked well to amplify the absurdity of the situation, leaving the question of whether or not this is real up in the air.
A ridiculous idea, executed well.
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You can has review!