All was going good until the statues attacked.

I like the story.It could use a little clean up but otherwise it ain't bad. I'm looking forward to more.

7295887 Thanks. But what do u mean by clean up?

7295896 it just needs a bit of editing like a period/comma here, a little sentence reconstruction there. Small stuff like that to help the flow of the story

7296883 Could kinda be more specific on where. I sometimes have trouble with grammar.

7297649 sorry I can't really be anymore specific do to the fact that they are spread out throughout the whole thing. if I could, I would point them out. sorry I cant be more help than that

7298999 I'll try my best I in the next chapter while looking for some typos in the others.

I like all the pairings that you have set up. I do have to mention one thing about the Mac/Rarity ship: you really did your homework with it. It's entirely plausible, a bit out of the box, plus I know Spike and Mac probably are great friends, and I could see that Mac kinda got his blessing to date Rarity from Spike even though they were never relationship at any time. I could see that roughly about the same time that Rarity told Spike that it wouldn't work out. And with that line, I can see Rarity's deal-breaker to dating Spike: for all he is as a gentleman, ultimately he's a dragon, and Rarity probably wanted a stallion for a relationship and more (i.e. foals--I don't think there are any hybrids)

I also love the Sunbust/Starlight pairing, as well as the Fluttershy/Thunderlane pairings. Seems like Sunburst actually go some balls to ask Starlight out, and as for the FlutterLane ship, who says that only RD gets with a Wonderbolt as a special somepony? I bet that surprisingly Soarin introduced Thunderlane to Fluttershy because of Dash.

I do like the possibility that there could be a dragon/pony couple in the mix after all...even more evidence that the peace between ponies and dragons can stand and thrive.

7337795 Thanks. And if you have any ideas, let me know.

With that, Spike removed his shirt while Ember removed his shirt and boxers."

Ok, who removed the shirt?

I love how the writer made a comment from the old bug Life movie from Pixar or was it Disney whatever you know the one where the ants have issues with the grasshoppers I love being made that joke