My Little Pony: Sora's Misadventures in Equestria

by Codex92

Equestria Girls (Part 3)

Sora, Twilight, and Spike reached the library after following the helpful signs laid out for them. Just from looking inside of the windows on the doors, it was bigger than the Golden Oak's own library, maybe rivaling that of the Canterlot Archives in the castle. Inside was the woman who looked like Miss Cheerilee, a teacher and a librarian seeing as she wasn't in the middle of a lecture in a classroom. Along with all the thousands of books were some computers and printers to print resources for students on the internet, something Twilight and Spike will have a really hard time figuring out how they work.

"Wow. I never thought a school library like this could be so huge," Twilight said in awe. "There must be so many books on this world."

"Ok, don't get all crazy and squeal," Sora teased as he opened the doors. "There's no way you can read everything in here, or find the right books to get to know what the human world is like so every student here can get your vote."

As they walked in, they didn't notice Snips and Snails peeking around from behind the wall, spying on them while staying hidden. They both pulled out their cell phones, snickering like little miscreants as they split up to get some good footage for Sunset, Snails slinking along like a snail and Snips sidestepping as if he were a pair of scissors. The first thing Twilight noticed was the circle of computers sitting in the center of the massive library, new technology that peaked her curiosity more than the thousands of books littering the shelves on the first and second floor.

"What are those?" she asked, approaching one of them and sitting in the chair. She stared at the monitor, keyboard, and mouse, her brain dying to pick these machines apart and figure out what they are, but with the amount of time they have until the portal closes for another month, she just had to look and understand how it functions. She moved her hands, clacking the keys on the keyboard with her balled up fingers, still not used to using her fingers. "How does this thing work?"

"It's called a computer, Twilight." Sora kneeled beside her, gently taking her hands off the desk before she accidentally breaks the buttons if she hit the keyboard too hard. "I kind of forgot to mention that we humans can be technologically advanced than Equestria is. Sure, you may have seen our Gummi Ships, but despite how blocky and primative they seem on the outside, there's a lot more to the controls on the inside."

"Does this run on some kind of magic?" she asked with curiosity.

"More like electricity. And don't ask me how these things are made. I kind of know how to work a computer, but not all the hardware that makes them tick." On the lit up monitor, Sora placed his hand on the mouse, moving the cursor along with his hand, and clicked on a small globe in the corner of the screen. A window popped up, surprising Twilight as he was now on the school's main web page, where anyone could see scheduled events or extracurricular activities for students to join. "And this is the Internet. A world wide web of information easy to access and far quicker to look up anything than pulling a book off the shelf and flipping through hundreds of pages."

"Faster than looking through books? And access to everything I need to know?" Twilight's eyes lit up, unable to wait to find what she needed.

"Or messing around by playing games and chatting with friends on social media sites," Sora continued explaining as he typed in a few words on the school's website, mostly to find anything on Sunset Shimmer and everything she's done aside from winning the school dances. He pressed ENTER on the keyboard and waited a moment for his results, finding a lot of pictures with their enemy, most of them winning the as the dances' princess, or with her awful attitude, queen. "And there's the girl that rules the roost. Winning by threats to claim her crowns, all while being a straight 'A' student and the school bully."

"I can't believe she thinks Princess Celestia is a terrible ruler," Twilight muttered. "She's done a lot for Equestria, and made difficult decisions in the past. And my friends and I are not her pawns. We were destined to bear the Elements of Harmony, and we all knew the dangers...But, what can the Element of Magic do in an alternate Equestria aside from something dangerous."

"Whatever she has planned, there's no way she can activate it without magic. And thankfully for us, the only one with magic is me, but like she said, I can't bring any attention to myself unless Heartless wind up here." Sora scrolled down the page, finding more pictures of Sunset and a small summary of the events pertaining to the photo. He soon stopped at a photo of her grinning as she won yet another dance, entitled "The Spring Fling Dance", noticing something odd about her eyes. Instead of them being a light blue color, they were a bright red. "Ok...This picture looks weird."

Twilight looked at the article after examining the picture. "'Sunset Shimmer, yet again, wins the previous school year's Spring Fling Dance as the Spring Queen. Someone finally found the courage to run against her after the last couple years of the once sweet teen turning into a maniacal tyrant. Where the odds were more in the new girl's favor, she had mysteriously erased her name from the ballot, and even moved out of Canterlot High for reasons unknown. Some students claim they witnessed Sunset abuse her opponent out of the view of anyone from the campus, mostly mentally and emotionally, but the reigning queen responded saying "I was only getting to know my competition and check on how well she was doing in her campaign. It turned out that she wasn't as nice as she appeared to be, and the video I posted about her and her bad habits showed who she really was when no one was looking. I may be mean around the campus, but who would you trust more: me, or someone who isn't honest with her peers, or even herself?" Just as C.H.S. would finally see a new princess at our dances, it looks like Sunset Shimmer will forever be the queen of Canterlot High until her graduation.'

"...She's awful," Twilight muttered, staring at the picture of her smiling for the camera. "Sunset was Princess Celestia's student before me. She was able to learn everything she could under her tutelage. But instead, she ends up running away for being selfish, and I'm sure she made the girl who ran against her drop out after humiliating her."

"That's what I was thinking. But look at her eyes here." Sora pointed at the picture, Twilight taking notice of her red irises when they should be blue. "It's kind of like what happened to your eyes when Maleficent tried to manipulate you with her magic and turn you into a Heartless by letting your darkness take over."

"You don't think Maleficent's here in this world, is she?" Twilight asked, feeling a chill run down her spine as those memories resurfaced.

"I'm sure she would have known about the mirror or found a way to this world through some other way, but there's no way she could have affected her." He pointed at the date the picture and the article were taken. "We ended up having to save her hide from those teenage dragons around that time. Plus, with how injured she had gotten, she must have been out of commission for a while. I don't think this is Maleficent's doing at all."

"Then...does that mean her darkness is now surfacing?" Sora nodded his head. "But...why are they red?"

"Yours turned green. Green is a color describes envy, the same way you felt after you met Kairi." Twilight lowered her head in shame, feeling so stupid for letting Maleficent easily trick her and almost kill them from her darkness and jealousy. "But red is clearly obvious: anger, hatred, loathing, wrath. Sunset's darkness is coming out from her anger, and she must not have been pleased that day when someone tried to steal away her glory. Now that we're here to try to stop her from winning the Fall Formal crown and foil her plans to possibly get back at Celestia, it's bound to resurface."

"And she'll end up turning into a Heartless if it takes complete control of her." Twilight sighed, looking at the screen with Sunset's smug grin and her wrathful, victorious gaze staring at the camera. "...We're going to have to try to save her after we beat her, aren't we?"

"Sadly, we have to." Suddenly, coming from a couple computers away from them, their realization with Sunset's possible doom was distracted as they heard music playing on the speakers. Sora recognized the tune, looking over to the delinquents playing music on the school library's computer, which happened to be the human Cutie Mark Crusaders. The Keyblade wielder cringed and covered his ears while they danced to their song. "Oh no. They actually made the same song the filly crusaders made during that talent show? And it's on the internet here?"

Their saving grace came from Cheerilee, turning off the speakers and unplugging them from the computer. "Girls, how many times do I have to tell you that this is a library? You're not allowed to play music or any video games here. They are meant for research purposes only."

The teacher walked off with the speakers, feeling a bit annoyed at her job more than pony Cheerilee was, but when dealing with teenagers who don't listen, it's a more stressful job than teaching children. "Eh, it's just as well," Apple Bloom said. "We're gettin' a lot of negative comments on our music video."

"No wonder, because it would have been a lot better if you three did the right jobs," Sora mumbled to himself.

"No idea why they're saying my singing sucks," Scootaloo said. "I was awesome." As she leaned against the desk while inflating her ego, the purple-haired pre-teen noticed Sora and Twilight just a few seats down from them. "Hey, it's that guy who knew my name."

"Huh!?" Sweetie Belle gasped as she looked his way, squeaking in shyness as she hid under the desk with a blush.

"Ok, what's gotten into Sweetie Belle?" Scootaloo asked. "She's been distracted ever since we bumped into him."

"Well, ya darn near ran him over while y'all were on your scooter," Apple Bloom said. "Ah don't know why ya bother to keep bringin' it to school when it's supposed to be chained up at the bike racks."

"Yeah, yeah. Whatever." Sora stood up and approached the three troublemakers, leaving Twilight to learn how to use the computer after watching him use it.

"Aren't you three supposed to be in class right now?" he asked.

"We got a free period," Apple Bloom answered. "We wanted to check how our video went after we uploaded it last night. All that hard work, and we got so many bad reviews."

Sora looked at the monitor, the video paused at the three of them on stage, wearing the most ridiculous of rockers outfits similar to what the filly CMC wore when they sang their song for the talent show. "'Epic fail.' 'These girls are tone deaf, especially the lead singer.'"

"Tone deaf!?" Scootaloo exclaimed. "I'm a great singer!"

She took in a deep breath to prove it, only for Sora to pat her head, stopping her from getting in more trouble by screaming in the library. "I don't think you girls are cut out for the music business. But, I'm sure there's something else you might be good at."

"Yeah. He's right!" Apple Bloom said. "Look at this comment. 'Funniest thing Ah've ever seen.' Someone liked it, so maybe we should focus on bein' funny! Ah got a great idea for a comedy routine! Come on, girls!"

"W-Wait, hey! That's not what they-" Sora couldn't stop them as two of the three Crusaders ran out of the library to who knows where. "-meant..." He sighed and sat in the chair, Sweetie Belle squealing in surprise nearly making him fall out of it. Looking under the desk, he found the third Crusader, apparently hiding from him as she scrambled out from under her hiding spot. "...Uhh, hey there. I was wondering why there were only two of the three of you."

"H-Hi..." Sweetie Belle looked down at her feet as her blush deepened.

"You know, you don't have to be nervous around me," he said, getting her to look up at him slightly before looking back down again, fussing with her skirt. "Also, I read your little note you gave me earlier." He ran a hand through his hair, retaining its spiky style even after disturbing it. "It's naturally spiked, by the way."

"C-Cool," Sweetie whispered.

"My name's Sora. What's your name?" he asked, making sure not to accidentally say her name. Like he did with Scootaloo.

"Sweetie Belle." Sora held his hand out to her, the young girl tentatively grabbing his as he shook it.

"Hey, Sweetie Belle!" Apple Bloom called from the entrance to the library. "We're gonna leave ya behind!"

Cheerilee shushed her, reminding her to keep quiet while in the library. Sweetie Belle pulled her hand away, her cheeks having lit up brighter than ever as she ran out of the library, catching up with her friends while Cheerilee groaned in annoyance at the rule breaking troublemakers.

"Well, at least she was quicker to open up to than the other Sweetie Belle. Just a little bit." Now with Sora, Twilight, and Spike alone, aside from Cheerilee at the desk, they could do some research and find out how to win the unanimous vote for the dance by tomorrow. He looked back at Twilight, watching her using the computer, though she still used her fists, her pony instincts kicking in instead of using her fingers to easily tap the keys on the keyboard. "Twilight, use your fingers, not your knuckles."

"I can't help it," Twilight complained, flexing her fingers in front of him. "I still can't get used to these things, and I'm not getting anything useful on this 'Internet' thing."

The teen sighed and shook his head, standing up and walking up to her. "You have to use the mouse too, and click on the search bar. Here, just watch me."

---

Throughout the rest of the day, the two humans and talking dog spent their time researching in the library up until closing time. It was a bit of a train wreck with Twilight busy with her studying the old fashioned way while still learning about behaving like a human. She gave up using the computer and went through books, living in her natural environment of hardbacks in both fiction and nonfiction. She wound up carrying more than she could lift, losing her balance and scattering all the books around. She ended up picking one up in her mouth when she did a good job grabbing her choices for her stack from the shelves, but forgot about everything once they fell. Again, Sora had to remind Twilight she has hands, not hooves, though it is a hard habit to curl one's hands into fists to make it somewhat feel like hooves.

There was another odd incident with the printer when the human alicorn wanted to print out some pages from books and compare them with others. Again, completely clueless to the newer technology when a printer was an advanced version of a printing press, she examined the whole machine to figure out how it worked. She ended up pressing the copy button with the cover still opened, the blinding lights that copied pages from the glass surface spooked her, causing her to fly back and crash into the stacks of books behind her. Sora helped her back up after hearing her fall, giving her a slight tutorial on how to copy what she needs without blinding herself.

As it got dark, all three of them somehow able to go unnoticed as soon as the school was closing up for the evening, Sora, Twilight, and Spike moved up to the second floor of the library. "Ugh. I never thought I would actually do any studying in a school for something important. I've been in the library in that castle in Radiant Garden, and the only time I picked up books was to place specific books missing from a set on a shelf to open a secret entrance." The Keyblade wielder dug through his red pouch and pulled out a couple sleeping bag orbs, tossing them forward as the camping bedding appeared. "I don't think I found anything useful...Except keeping Twilight far away from any biology books."

"What was that, Sora?" Twilight asked.

"Nothing!" he swiftly replied. "Uhh...Any luck on your end after your few mishaps?"

"I think I did find something called a 'yearbook'." Twilight laid a blue book down between them as they sat down on the sleeping bags. "Seems like they use these kinds of books to record moments in the school." She opened the yearbook up and flipped through a few pages, seeing some momentous events from the year they were taken along with some of the popular students in different categories. They stopped on a group photo, the title above reading "Best Group of Friends", and the five girls in the picture looked just like their friends, only without a human Twilight in the group. "Hey. It's our friends."

"No kidding." In the picture, a younger Applejack, Rainbow Dash, Fluttershy, Rarity, and Pinkie Pie smiled for the camera, the location somewhere at a park or outside near the school. They were all happy together, clearly the best of best friends, but it doesn't seem like it today after meeting with Applejack, Pinkie, and Fluttershy. "What happened between them if they aren't together now?"

"I have a gut feeling that Sunset Shimmer must have done something, but we don't have any proof if it's true." Sora had the same feeling as he looked at the photo. "They're our friends, as humans. They should be best friends, but they dislike each other."

"We might be able to fix their problems while we try to win everyone's vote. They might be able to help us win the school over too and floor Sunset in the ballot." Since it was getting late, Sora and Twilight laid down on their sleeping bags, Spike laying down next to the opened yearbook with their friends' human counterparts' picture, eyeing the human Rarity with his tail wagging in excitement. "And let's hope Sunset doesn't discover the darkness her anger can bring."

"Yeah. We don't want this world to be attacked by Heartless." Twilight yawned as she tucked herself in.

"With the portal opening every month, there just might be some hiding around, waiting for the right moment to strike." Twilight and Spike had already fallen asleep, Sora staying awake a while longer as he looked up at the skylight, watching the stars and crescent moon above them. "Sunset, don't lose yourself in darkness. You'll forever become the monster that you're acting like if you let it take control."

---

The morning sun began to rise as the trio making the library their temporary home woke up bright and early. Once they were fully awake, Twilight picked up the yearbook and placed it in her bag while pulling out a piece of paper. They heard Principal Celestia's voice over the intercom, reminding all the students to pick up their ballots for the Fall Formal tomorrow night.

"Ok. Today's the day to win over all the different social groups' votes, and I made a list of points to talk about." Sora and Spike sighed, knowing Twilight would wind up making a list to aid her.

"Twilight, I think all you've got to do is make a good impression with the school," Sora said, straightening out her shirt to make her look presentable for her student body subjects. "Just don't think like a pony and everything should be fine."

"Hey, I'm learning as fast as I can when we only have two days left!...Actually, one day, seventeen hours, and fifteen minutes before the portal closes on us." Sora laughed, gently pushing Twilight to the entrance of the library.

"Ok, Ms. Human Stopwatch. We get it. Let's just go out there and seize the day." After Spike leapt up to Sora's shoulder climbing up his body, he leapt into Twilight's backpack and hid inside. Once they were ready, they headed out into the halls, where there were several students already inside the building, chatting with friends or getting something out of their lockers. While the duo walked down the halls, Sora and Twilight couldn't help but notice that the students were all staring at them, some snickering or talking about them. None of them said a single word to them, and they seem to already be talking about them behind their backs. "This does not look like a good start. And...everyone seems to be looking at you more than me."

"But why? I didn't even start talking to them yet, and I was hoping to get started with speaking to the-" Twilight was suddenly pulled into a classroom with a yelp, surprising Sora before the same person grabbed him and flung him inside. "Hey! What's happening!?" They both turned to the door, seeing the human Rarity being their kidnapper: similarly curled purple hair like their unicorn fashionista friend, wearing a white blouse and a short purple skirt with three blue diamonds on the front left side. "Rarity?"

Spike popped his head up at the mention of his unicorn crush, his eyes turning into hearts as he laid eyes on the human variant of the unicorn. Rarity pulled out some measuring tape and began measuring Twilight's height, arm and leg length, her waist, every part of her until she got what she needed. With a snap of her fingers, her designing genius kicked in as she pulled out a green dress from her bag. Sora leapt back as she slapped the dress down over Twilight, given a complete wardrobe change wearing all green, including her shoes, even giving her a blonde wig that hid all of her hair.

"Yes. Perfect!" Rarity cheered. "No one will be able to recognize you now." She looked at Sora and approached him. "Hmmm...You, on the other hand, I'm not so sure. Didn't bring any outfits suitable for men. But maybe I can trim up that mess of a hairstyle and comb it down."

"Whoa, hey! No messing with the hair!" He backed away, covering the top of his head with his hands to protect his hair as best as he could. "And why the heck are you trying to disguise us?"

Rarity ignored the Keyblade wielder and focused on Spike, the girl noticing the purple dog staring at her with infatuation from inside Twilight's bag. "We're also going to need a little disguise for your dog. He's so adorable!" She began scratching his chin, the puppy panting as he leaned closer. "With enough work, maybe I can make him look like a rabbit."

Spike barked in confusion after Rarity headed back to her bags, wondering where the loving attention went to as he slipped out of Twilight's backpack and fell to the floor. The door to the other entrance to the classroom opened up, Applejack stepping inside as she found Sora and Twilight.

"Twilight! There ya are!" she said.

"Great. So much for the disguise," Rarity pouted.

"Ah've been lookin' for you and your brother," Applejack said, Fluttershy poking her head into the doorway.

"Me too," she said.

"Me three!" Pinkie shouted as she somehow appeared upside down from outside the hall. "Ooh! Love the new look!"

As the hyper teenage girl flipped right-side up and skipped inside, though Rarity seemed miffed at Pinkie's compliment. "Well, I do have an eye for these sorts of things. Not like you even care about my creative genius in the slightest."

"WHAT!?" Pinkie exclaimed, glaring angrily at the spiteful fashionista.

Yet again, another pair upset at each other, and being completely vague on the reasons as to why they were fighting. "Ok, this is just getting ridiculous. Why do you think Pinkie does care about your creative genius?" Sora didn't receive an answer, Rarity turning her head away from Pinkie while the floofy haired girl looked like she was about ready to explode in anger. "...Or completely ignore our questions and we'll come back to it later."

"Why were you looking for us?" Twilight asked.

"You mean you didn't see it yet?" Sora and Twilght looked at each other, having no clue what Fluttershy meant. "Oh dear. They haven't."

Pinkie pulled her pink laptop out, another far advanced piece of technology Twilight has seen, placing it down on a desk. "Well, it's not really all that bad."

She opened it up and played a video that was already set up to be watched, starting with a recording made in the library, and Twilight was in the shot. "Twilight Sparkle wants to be YOUR Fall Formal Princess. Twilight and Sora watched in shock as the voice talking about her was from Sunset Shimmer. What was worse was the fact it was edited to make her look like an idiot, smacking the keyboard on the computer with her knuckles as it froze on a doofy face that was supposed to be her trying to concentrate on figuring out how it worked. It soon switched to when she dropped all the books she dropped and tried to pick them up with her mouth. "But what kind of example will she give for our school if she doesn't even behave normally in a social environment, even unable to take care of herself as her brother does that for her." Then the video showed her getting spooked by the printer flashing in her face, going into slow motion with a closeup of her startled expression. Sora then appeared to help her back up and showed her how a printer was supposed to work. At least Sunset had the decency to hide their identities instead of ratting them out. "Make your vote count, and don't vote for a teenager who behaves like a toddler."

As soon as the video ended, Sora closed the laptop, not pleased by Sunset's "strategy" to win: slandering Twilight and mud-slinging while having recorded them and editing it to make her look dumb. "Not that bad, Pinkie Pie? This is far from bad! Sunset is resorting to doing stuff like this just to win!"

"But how did this even happen!? We were alone in the library yesterday!...Right?" The Keyblade wielder growled, apparently not alone as they thought they were.

"And I'm guessing everyone in the school saw this, right?" The others nodded their heads. "Perfect. And there's no way anyone's going to forget seeing something like that. There's no way Twilight's going to win."

"...Well, even if no one else will, I'll vote for you, Twilight," Fluttershy said. "After you and Sora helped stand up to Sunset for me, it's the least I can do."

"Ooh! I'll help too!" Pinkie shouted as she bounced up and down.

"Don't ask Pinkie for help," Fluttershy said coldly, making the poofy-haired girl freeze in midair. "She never takes anything seriously."

"I can too take things seriously, and this is serious bid-ness!" Pinkie defended.

"Oh, please, Pinkie Pie. You're worse than Fluttershy!" Rarity said, Fluttershy gasping in shock at the hateful comment. "Unlike you, Pinkie, I am able to offer my assistance to those who can actually appreciate it, unlike you, you party crazed child!"

Fluttershy, Pinkie and Rarity began bickering, making Twilight and Sora back away. They were surprised at how spiteful they were to each other, nothing like how their pony friends were supposed to be. Sure, at times there were disagreements, but nothing like this.

"Will y'all just listen to yourselves?" Applejack asked, the trio of arguing teens stopping as they looked at her. "Just get over it and move on."

"Oh, sure! Look who's talking!" Pinkie exclaimed. "You still haven't gotten over what happened with Rainbow Dash!"

"She said that she would get the entire softball team to appear at a bake sale Ah was havin'," the farmer explained. "Ah tell everybody they're comin', and they never showed up at all! Rainbow made a liar out of me! That's completely different!"

"IS NOT!" Fluttershy, Rarity, and Pinkie shouted, all four girls now arguing with each other as they got louder and louder.

Sora couldn't take this anymore. They needed to get to the bottom of their fights, and they were going to give him and Twilight some answers. He slammed his palm down hard on a nearby desk, smacking it loudly as if he actually broke the thing in half with his hand, the smack stopping their fighting as they looked at him.

"Ok, I've had enough of this! Your fighting isn't solving anything, and it looks like it's up to me and Twilight to find out why you're so bitter with each other!" Sora reached into Twilight's bag and pulled out the yearbook she stashed away. He placed it on the table in front of them and opened it up to the page showing them as friends when they were younger. "Look at this picture. This was all of you, together as friends. Even the school saw this and had to put your faces and picture under this title: 'Best Group of Friends'."

"You all looked like the best of friends back then, but now you're like enemies, always spouting hurtful words and spreading rumors about them over your anger toward each other." The four teens looked down in sadness, remembering the moment of that picture taken as they began to feel horrible for what they had done after they broke up. "I think whatever happened to you five, it wasn't by either of you. Sora and I believe Sunset was the cause of your friendship ending like this."

"Yeah, just like she's been doing in this school: separating everyone, ruling with an iron fist, and even spreading false accusations like she did with Twilight in that video she made." That was one thing all of them agreed upon with Sunset, nodding their heads as they recalled many of the cruel things she had done to a lot of students. "Now, without shouting at each other and being vague about why one's blaming the other for what they did, let's calmly discuss this and try to mend your friendships."

"...Well, I don't know how Sunset was the cause of Pinkie ruining the silent auction at the animal shelter," Fluttershy explained first. "It was supposed to be a serious event, and she ruined it by bringing noisemakers and fireworks, startling everybody and scaring all the animals."

"But I got a text from you telling me you wanted it to be a big party, not a silent auction!" Pinkie reasoned.

"I-I didn't send you a text." Pinkie pulled out her cell phone and scrolled through her previous messages, finding the one Fluttershy had sent her about the animal shelter auction being a loud party. "W-What!? But, I never sent anything like that to you!"

"You didn't?" the party girl questioned. "But it has your name as the sender on it."

"You don't think she's been sending me those emails too, has she?" Rarity asked, pulling out her own phone. "Every time I volunteer to help you out with decorating any school function, Pinkie, I get e-mails from you saying you've got plenty of volunteers and didn't need my help, but once it's done, I find out you've done it all on your own."

"That's crazy! Why would I send an e-mail like that!?" It soon dawned on them that Sora and Twilight's theory that Sunset sent them fake messages to get them to break up was indeed true.

"...Then...that must mean that Sunset Shimmer..." Applejack lowered her hat over her face in shame, unable to believe she was tricked and had her friendship with Rainbow Dash end so harshly. "Consarn it, Ah'm a doggone fool. That's why she didn't show up at the bake sale."

"Did you even ask Rainbow Dash what happened?" Sora pondered, only receiving a shake of the farm girl's head as his answer. "Of course not. Guess now's a time to begin apologizing and figure out what happened between you two. Where is she usually at in the mornings?"

---

Applejack, Fluttershy, Pinkie, and Rarity lead Sora, Twilight, and Spike outside of the campus to the soccer field. Standing by herself in the center of the field was Rainbow Dash's human counterpart: her hair as similar as her namesake, wearing a white shirt with a picture of a red, yellow, and blue lightning bolt shooting down from a cloud under an open blue jacket and a purple and white striped short skirt with a pair of black trainer shorts underneath. Sora and Applejack approached the sports athlete while the others headed to the bleachers to watch what would unfold.

Rainbow noticed the duo walking up to her, glaring at Applejack while the farmer looked down at her feet, avoiding eye contact with her friend. "Oh great. The heck do you want, Applejack?"

"Ah just want to talk, Rainbow," she said, Sora stepping out of the way, though staying between them in case fists start flying. "Ah don't want us to go fightin' again."

"Fine. What about?" Rainbow asked, pressing her foot down on her soccer ball.

"...It's about that bake sale Ah held." The athlete growled in annoyance, but stayed quiet as she listened. "Ah was a mite miffed that ya didn't show up with the softball team that day, but Ah got so frustrated that Ah didn't hear from ya why ya didn't show."

"You weren't even there!" Rainbow exclaimed. "You told me the right date, but someone told me that you changed it at the last minute, and you bailed on me!"

"Ah didn't change the date at all," Applejack said, now understanding what had happened to her and the team. "Ah waited right in front of the farm, right after that big game of yours so y'all could refuel after winnin'."

"...So, you didn't change the date after all? But Sunset Shimmer said that-" Realizing the she had listened to the queen of the school when she promised to arrive at Applejack's bake sale, Rainbow facepalmed, dragging her hand down her face with an embarrassed groan. "Wow. I am the biggest idiot on the face of the Earth. I listened to the school bully, the princess of cruel, and I believed her."

"She's been messin' with everybody. Fooled all of us and destroyed our friendship." Applejack held her arms out, now that they've made up for their time hating each other over a mistake and someone else's lies. "Friends?"

"...Best friends." The two hugged, Sora noticing the rest of the gang on the bleachers were happy to see them make up. After rekindling their friendship with their hug, Rainbow looked at Sora, recognizing him from not only how he and his "sister" stood up to Sunset, but also that dumb video she made of her to make fun of Twilight. "So, you're one of the new kids here. Sora, right?"

"That's me. And you must have noticed that slandered video of Twilight, right?" he asked.

"Everyone at school saw it. But I'm with you guys, wanting to take that no good liar out and dethrone that tyrant of a princess from winning the Fall Formal." Sora, Applejack, and Rainbow walked over to the bleachers, explaining to them what had really happened between the two friends and the rainbow-haired teen wanting to help Twilight win Princess of the Fall Formal. "I'll gladly help in any way I can, but before I do, you'll need to beat me one-on-one in a game of soccer."

"Uhh, is that...really necessary?" Twilight asked.

"I need to see how good you are, but seeing as you're a bit of an egghead, I'm gonna go against your brother." The human alicorn grumbled as the human Rainbow called her by that nickname, but grinned as she issued a challenge to an even better athlete. "So, Sora, you game?"

"Sure. Just don't go easy on me." Pinkie pulled out a counter board to tally the scores, blue for Rainbow and red for Sora.

"Alright. First to five goals wins." As Rainbow juggled the ball with her knees, she decided to get a head start, kicking the ball hard into Sora's goal. "One-"

Sora ran past the athlete, the others all staring in awe at his speed as he managed to reach the ball right before it got into the net. Rainbow didn't even notice he had disappeared until she turned to look at the goal, finding him standing there while balancing the ball on his head. Her jaw dropped, unable to believe the spiky-haired teen moved faster than how hard she kicked a ball.

"Nice try, you cheater. Now, let's try this again." Sora bounced the ball up into the air, and as soon as it fell down, he leapt up and gave the soccer ball a hard kicked with a flair of a spin. It flew faster than how hard Rainbow had kicked it, swerving through the air as it reached the other side of the field and slammed into the net, without even hitting the ground. While most of the girls were stunned silent, Pinkie and Twilight cheered, the former not knowing of his true abilities as she moved the card down on Sora's side, the latter excited to see how well he moves as a human. "I believe that's 0-1, right? Your ball."

Sora casually walked over to the other side of the field, grabbing the ball from the net while Rainbow grumbled to herself. "He just got lucky. There's no way he can beat me."

The game began as Rainbow started in the center of the field with the ball, Sora waiting patiently at his goal. Rainbow ran forward with the ball close to her, kicking it in zigzag patterns to try to confused the Keyblade wielder. She managed to trick him by feinting a kick over to one side as he dove over to her false shot. Angling her shot to aim at the other end, she was sure to get a goal, but Sora landed on his hands and pushed back to where he stood. He continued moving and backflipped to the ball, grabbing it with his feet as he landed right-side up. He ran off with the ball past the stunned athlete, Rainbow quickly snapping out of her shock as she chased after him. She wasn't able to reach Sora as he kicked another goal, the girls cheering for him as Pinkie put down another point for him.

"Wow. Twilight, your brother is an amazing athlete," Rarity complimented, taking an interest in the teen. "Is he single?"

"Actually, he has a girlfriend," Twilight said, not wanting to get Kairi jealous with a human girl vying for Sora's attention, or creating an awkward moment between them as Rarity was the human equivalent to their unicorn friend back in Equestria. "They keep in contact with each other, and he's not going to let her go no matter how far away they are from each other."

"Oh. That's unfortunate." Rarity shrugged it off as the two competitors on the field began again. "Oh well. I'm sure whoever she is, she's really lucky to have someone as handsome and strong as Sora."

Rainbow ran forward with the ball kicked ahead of her, heading straight for Sora's unguarded goal. He quickly caught up with her and slid in front of her, stealing the ball and making her stumble in surprise.

"Hey, nice ball," Sora teased as he bounced it on his knees. Rainbow growled and charged at him, the Keyblade wielder running backwards as he continued bouncing the ball with his feet and legs. "Oh, sorry. Did I steal it? Well, go and fetch it."

He kicked the soccer ball up high, flipped back, and kicked it into Rainbow's goal, earning another point. Rainbow grunted in frustration, actually breaking a sweat as she was about to lose at a game of soccer against a new student. With the ball back in her possession, she tried to get at least one goal before she was humiliated. But as she got closer to Sora's goal, he snatched it again, whistling nonchalantly as he rested a foot on the ball. Further aggravating her, he moved the ball as she tried to steal it back: kicking it up in the air, rolling it away from her own feet as she tried to sweep him, balancing it on his head or back. Finally having enough, she stole it and kicked it hard, but instead of it heading for his goal, she shot it into her own, giving Sora another point with the score of her zero to his four.

"Wow. He's really good," Fluttershy said.

"Insanely good!" Pinkie munched on a bag of popcorn that she brought completely out of nowhere, still managing to keep score even with her hands full of popcorn.

"He's pretty good at sports," Twilight said. "Any kind of sport you challenge him to, he'll come out on top."

Rainbow panted heavily, getting exhausted after he riled her up with his teasing. "What's the matter? All worn out?"

"S-Shut up," she tiredly said.

"Ok, since I'm winning, 4-0, I'll give you a freebie, just to make it a little easy for you." Sora stepped aside, allowing her to go past him.

"I don't need your pity! But if you're just going to give me a point, then I'll do it because you're going to lose as soon as I score the rest of the goals!" Rainbow Dash ran past Sora, kicking the ball as she headed straight for the goal.

She was getting closer, determined to not lose by a landslide as she reared back to kick the ball hard. Unfortunately, in her frazzled state, her foot kicked the back of her heel, tripping herself up and falling flat on her face. The soccer ball slowed to a halt, stopping by a few inches away from the goal line. The star athlete didn't get up, Sora walking over to the ball as he lightly kicked it down the field. After a long walk knocking the ball forward, he stopped a few yards away from Rainbow's goal and gave it a light kick, letting it lightly roll into the net, giving him the final point he needed to win.

"And Sora wins a perfect game!" Pinkie shouted as they all cheered, the Keyblade wielder grinning as he walked over to them with his arms behind his head.

"That's the first time Ah've ever seen Rainbow Dash lose against someone at anything," Applejack said. "If there was a Prince of the Fall Formal, Ah'd vote for ya in a heartbeat."

"Eh. I was only warming up. Don't want to show off all my skills before the final match." He looked back at the field, expecting Rainbow Dash to walk up behind him and complain, but the star athlete of Canterlot High still remained laying face down where she tripped. They all ran up to her, Sora turning her over as they looked down at her. "Yo, Rainbow Dash. You alright?"

She was conscious, though her expression was blank as she looked at the sky. "...I can't believe I lost." Sora and Applejack helped the stunned girl up on her feet, Rainbow looking at the Keyblade wielder as she processed her loss from his far more advanced skills. "...How the heck are you that good?"

"Believe me, you have no idea what kinds of training I do." He patted her shoulder, seeing a small glint in her eyes that screamed for her to beg how to do what he did. "It was a pretty fun match though, right?"

"...Well, I thought you would have been a bit more of a challenge besides making a clean sweep if I picked Twilight, and I did promise to help if I lost." Rainbow straightened out the strands of her hair that was out of place from her already messy style, grinning excitedly. "Then again, even if I did win, I'd still help you guys out. But you're gonna have to promise to teach me how you were able to do all that at some point."

"Maybe later." Sora and Rainbow slapped each others hands into a firm handshake. "But I'm warning you. It's not as simple as doing a few laps."

"I'm up for anything I can handle," she said. "Now, let's get something down by Sugarcube Corner. It's still a free period for me, and I need something to drink after getting my butt handed to me by the new guy. It's not that far from the school and we're allowed there for snacks or lunch."

The human members of the Mane Six, now all back together as their problems involving their friendship were solved, lead Sora, Twilight, and Spike down to the nearby buildings toward the bakery similarly named like the one in Ponyville. Unknown to all of them, Sunset and her minions, Snips and Snails, were watching them during their game. The two boys had their phones out and took pictures of Sora and his skills on the field, all three of them surprised to see how dextrous he was.

"Wow. He's a really good soccer player," Snips said in awe as he flipped through the pictures he took, though Sunset knew who he really was and how he got those skills in the first place.

"He's good...I managed to trump Sparkle's chance of winning the crown, but he's going to be a big issue if he takes it from me." She looked at the distracted preteens as they shared what they managed to get from their hiding spot. "Let me see your phones." Snips and Snails gave Sunset their devices as she examined the pictures they took. She soon began to grin menacingly as she found a few very good ones as a plan began to build in her mind. "Oh yes. These will do nicely to deal with him..."

---

At the establishment where the gang went to get themselves some refreshments, the rest of the girls had ordered their drinks, grabbed a table and waited for Sora and Twilight to get their orders. The owners of Sugarcube Corner were obviously Carrot Cake and Cup Cake, the human versions of the pony couple back in Equestria. Twilight got her espresso and headed back to the others while Sora grabbed his. The moment he turned around, he ended up bumping into someone, splashing his beverage against that person's chest as they both fell back.

"Ahh! Sorry about that." Sora stood up to help whoever he bumped into, surprised to see the same teen that helped him up the other day.

He helped him up, the musician chuckling at the ironic situation. "We kinda need to quit bumping into each other." Sora nodded his head in agreement, grabbing a few napkins and helping dry his shirt of his wasted drink. "Thanks. How are you and your sister doing?"

"You saw that video too, huh?" Sora asked as the teen nodded.

"I'm sure the whole world saw it." He sighed and rubbed his head. "If there was anyone I would vote for the Fall Formal, I'd rather vote for Twilight than Sunset."

"Thanks, but with the little votes we know she'll get, there's no way she'll get the crown." Sora noticed that his new, unexpectedly made friend seemed a bit depressed as he mentioned Sunset Shimmer. "You ok?"

"Y-Yeah. Yeah...Probably still tired," he lied. "Waking up so early for school, all the work we gotta do, and managing my band is a bit...stressful. Life of a high school student, am I right?"

"I see...Well, hopefully we can get your band members' votes for Twilight too." Sora waved bye to him as he sat down with the girls, still unable to get rid of the feeling that he knows where that voice came from.

"Sora, how do you know Flash Sentry?" Rarity asked, making the Keyblade wielder balk at the name of the teen.

"...Duuuuuuuuh..." He quickly hid his surprise, now recognizing where his voice came from. He was the pegasus guard he bumped into and talked with back in the Crystal Empire in Equestria. It was no wonder why his voice matched with the stallion's. "...I bumped into him the day we arrived here yesterday. Why?"

"Well, he used to be Sunset Shimmer's boyfriend for a couple years, but broke up with her after the Spring Fling Dance a few months back." Hearing that news made Twilight spit out her drink in shock, hacking violently as she ended up swallowing it down the wrong pipe. Flash Sentry ended up going out with Sunset Shimmer, and despite all she's done in the past, he stayed in a relationship with her and finally ended it a couple years too late. "I know. I'm just as surprised as you, Twilight. She hasn't even done anything awful to him yet."

Sora watched Flash leave the shop and head back to the school through the window. It was hard to believe that someone like him could have fallen for a crazy, power hungry girl, who's actually a unicorn from a parallel world, and managed to find something about her that made him all crazy in love with her. Or, seeing how cruel she had gotten over the years, she was using him just to get to where she is now.

"Who would be crazy enough to go out with someone that evil!?" Twilight exclaimed as she caught her breath from her choking.

"We're just glad to know Flash hasn't been bothered by Sunset Shimmer...at least not yet," Rarity said as she took a sip of her latte.

"Ok, enough small talk. Let's get down to business," Applejack said. "The dance is tomorrow, and we need to get Twilight the votes she needs to be the Fall Formal Princess. Problem is, everyone at school only knows her from that video Sunset posted online. We gotta find some way to get them to realize she's not like that show them the real her."

They soon began to think of a way to win the school over, though fairly and not like how Sunset Shimmer won her way by intimidating the student body. As they were deep in thought, Spike climbed up on the table as he thought too, pretending to be a dog all the while. In order to get the whole school to vote for Twilight, they had to come up with something that will make them all realize what she wants for everyone is to no longer live the rest of their high school days living in fear under Sunset's rule.

"I GOT IT!" Rarity shouted as she stood up, alerting the other patrons in the bakery. The fashionista giggled as she quieted herself before everyone thought she brought more attention on them. "Uhh, I have an idea. Now, this may seem a bit...strange, but what if we all wore these as a sign of unity?" Rarity pulled out several pairs of equine ear headbands and tails, the ears yellow while the headband was blue and the tail striped yellow and blue. "During freshman year, these were incredibly popular and everyone showed their school spirit wearing them. 'Go, Canterlot Wondercolts!'"

"Canterlot 'Wondercolts'?" Sora whispered to Twilight in amusement. "The colors match those suits the Wonderbolts wear, at least."

"But, ever since Sunset began causing trouble, I haven't been able to sell any of them," Rarity continued explaining, tossing a set to everyone. "But, with the five of us being different, we're all Canterlot Wondercolts!"

"And since Sunset divided everyone, then I can unite help bring everyone together by showing the school spirit that has been lost!" Twilight finished. "Rarity, that's a brilliant idea!"

Spike agreed as he barked and tried to leap into Rarity's arms, nuzzling her as his sign of affection and appreciating her genius. "Sounds like a plan to me." They put on their pony accessories with their big plan set to impress the student body and vote for Twilight. "Let's head back to the school. Lunch is coming up, and that seems like a perfect place to get everyone's attention."

---

As the bell rang for lunch, everyone took off their accessories as they returned to the school. Rarity also found some Canterlot High sweaters that were also unsold due to Sunset's rule over the campus, the girls quickly putting on their sizes before they entered the cafeteria and split up. Sora had to take off his jacket, as much as he didn't want to in case Heartless showed up in a massive quantity, but seeing as there was no sign of any for the past day and a half being here, or at all when the portal had been opened since his arrival in Equestria, he was able to take that risk after folding it and placing it in Twilight's backpack.

"You actually look a lot better in black, not blue and yellow," Twilight commented.

"Hey, my Wisdom Form is blue, and my Master Form is yellow," Sora said in mock offense. "Combine both of them, and I look even better."

"Hmm...That actually sounds like an interesting combination for your Drive Forms. Have you ever tried mixing two different forms to make yourself stronger?" she asked.

"...No...but I really don't want to test that theory. Not after that little incident last winter." Twilight cringed, unable to forget the unfortunate transformation that was Anti-Sora. She didn't know if doing such a thing could either make his chances to turn into that dark form even higher. "But, enough with the bad moments. Today, we're going to win everyone's vote for you by the end of today. You know your cue to walk in, right?"

"Yes, F.B.B.F.F." The Keyblade wielder stared at Twilight in confusion with her acronym. "Fake Brother, Best Friend Forever."

"Oh. You have got to stop using acronyms when we all have no idea what it means." Twilight giggled, earning a side hug from Sora as he approached the double doors into the cafeteria, Spike following his heels. "Alright. Let's do this."

He opened the doors into the loud murmuring of students talking with each other as they ate their lunches or hung out with friends before going back to class. He saw each of the girls in position, casually walking over to one of the tables while Spike wandered off to a corner of the room, where Pinkie had placed a radio for the music they would play for their performance.

Once they were all ready, they put on their Wondercolt accessories, their peers around them unaware of them wearing the odd pony ears and tail. Pinkie started things out, thumping her tray on the table in a rhythm pattern: once, pause, then two, and another pause, repeating it over and over. Soon, the others began to follow the same rhythm, stomping their feet or banging cups against the table while adding in a clap between the pause as it slowly began to pick up the pace. Now catching everyone's attention, Spike pressed a button to play the song, the gang getting into position across both sides of the cafeteria.

[Sora, Pinkie Pie, Fluttershy, Rarity, Rainbow Dash, Applejack]
Hey, hey, everybody
We got something to say
We may seem as different
As the night is from day
But you look a little deeper
And you will see
That I'm just like you
And you're just like me
Yeah!

They met up in the center of the room, the students highly confused as the six teens performed for them. They had no clue what they were doing this for, but they began to found it entertaining as the posing group began to split up in pairs as they tried to get them interested, the song beginning to pick up faster than their first verse.

Hey, hey, everybody
We're here to shout
That the magic of friendship
is what it's all about
Yeah, we thought we were different
As the night is from the day
Until Twilight Sparkled
Helped us see another way

The five girls and Keyblade wielder met back up in the center of the room again after trying to motivate some of their fellow peers, dancing in perfect synchronization.

So get up, get down
If you're gonna come around
We can work together
Helping Twilight win the crown
So get up, get down
'Cause it's gonna make a sound
If we work together
Helping Twilight Sparkle win the crown!

Seeing it working, as some of the students pulled out their phones to record them or take pictures, they kept it going until all of them were truly convinced Twilight was a better candidate as the Fall Formal Princess than Sunset.

[Pinkie Pie]
Hey, hey, hands up now
We're sending a message to the crowd

[Sora]
Hands wave up, then come down
We party together, all around

[Rarity]
Generous, honesty

[Applejack]
Laughter, kindness, loyalty

[Fluttershy]
Twilight helped us each to see

[Rainbow Dash]
All that we can be!

[Sora, Pinkie Pie, Fluttershy, Rarity, Rainbow Dash, Applejack]
So get up, get down
If you're gonna come around
We can work together
Helping Twilight win the crown
So get up, get down
'Cause it's gonna make a sound
If we work together
Helping Twilight Sparkle win the crown

As they marched down the rows of tables, Sora approached the doors to the hall outside the cafeteria and opened them, letting Twilight walk in as she joined her friends with their performance.

[Twilight]
I'm gonna be myself
No matter what I do
And if we're different, yeah
I want you to be true to you

Flash had watched them, wanting Twilight to win as much as the others did. He decided to help add some more music to get his band to feel as motivated as he was, playing a few riffs along with the song.

If you follow me
We'll put our differences aside
We'll stick together and
Start working on that school pride!

[Sora, Twilight, Pinkie Pie, Fluttershy, Rarity, Rainbow Dash, Applejack]
Jump up, make a sound (Hey!)
Stomp your hooves, turn around
Start now, make a change
Gonna come around
Jump up, make a sound (Hey!)
Stomp your hooves, turn around
Canterlot Wondercolts
Help her win the crown!

Soon, the rest of the school began to join in the song as they stood up from their seats. Flash provided some more extra guitar solos, Sora placing the ears and tail on him as he played. He soon began to toss more of the Wondercolt pony pieces out to the crowd, the other teens grabbing them and putting them on, getting into their school spirit.

[All]
Jump up, make a sound (Hey!)
Stomp your hooves, turn around
Start now, make a change
Gonna come around
Jump up, make a sound (Hey!)
Stomp your hooves, turn around
Canterlot Wondercolts
Help her win the crown!

While the cafeteria was abuzz with cheering and having fun for once, being the Canterlot Wondercolts they all were, Sunset and her two lackeys walked down the halls after finishing up another sinister plot. They passed by the cafeteria, hearing music as the doors opened slightly, a couple pairs of the Wondercolt ears and tail tossed out into the hall. The bully approached the doors and looked through the windows, her eyes widening from shock, then leering in spite.

"You have got to be kidding me," Sunset growled, watching everyone inside dancing, wearing the fake ears and tail. All the students in C.H.S. were cheerful and now more likely to vote for Twilight, the human alicorn the center of attention as she helped those from other cliques get to know each other, surprising them to know some of them had some similarities they never expected just from their personalities alone. "This is not happening. I am not seeing this right now."

"Jump up, make a sound!" Sunset twitched as she heard Snails singing along to the song inside the cafeteria.

She turned around, finding Snips and Snails dancing, wearing the ears and tail. She began to get more irate, growling louder as the dark around around her began to grow bigger.

"What are you two idiots doing!?" she shouted, causing them to stop and look at their boss in fear. "I am trying to win Princess of the Fall Formal. I am trying to win that crown, because it is more important than what you morons' definition of the word means. We just finished trying to slander Twilight, which is botched because of what's going on in the cafeteria, we finally got the pictures we need to blame Sora and get him kicked out so he doesn't throw my plans in the garbage, and you two are wearing those stupid things and dancing!?"

"...B-But the song is really catchy," Snips said nervously.

Her anger grew as the darkness around her flared wildly, stomping toward them with pure rage. Both boys cowered in fear as they hugged each other, backed against the lockers as they trembled, seeing Sunset's eyes change from blue to red.

"You two dimwits are going to betray me? You two were lucky I didn't beat you to a pulp until there's nothing left but the few brain cells struggling to keep you functioning in what you believe are brains when they are nothing but tiny rocks!" Sunset clenched her fist as darkness began to build around her hand. "You served your purpose, and I'm sick of having you two follow me around! Now, do me a favor, and never be in my line of sight! EVER AGAIN!"

She threw a punch at them, the terrified preteens running away before she hit them. Her fist slammed into the lockers, the overwhelming power leaving a very big dent in the several tall storage units for students to use. Sunset stared at the destroyed lockers in shock, pulling her hand out as she saw the dark power around it disappear. She was left confused, feeling a strange power that came with it after losing control of her anger. Grunting in frustration, she kept her focus on trying to get rid of her competition, though it would be more of a problem now that the students are going to vote for Twilight.

She walked down the hall to at least get rid of one of them with her earlier plan, heading down to the main offices. Little did she notice someone had watched her from behind the corner of an adjacent hallway. Flash stared in complete horror, having overheard his ex-girlfriend planning to stop Twilight and witnessed her destroying school property with some strange power. He walked up to the broken lockers, pressing his hand against it to make sure that it wasn't a trick, but it was all too real with the bent metal sticking against the wall.

"Sunset...What the heck is going on?" He heard a couple lockers not too far from where he was shake, coming from the same direction Snips and Snails ran off to. Walking up to them, he opened them, finding the two young boys having crammed themselves in them, scared out of their minds. "You two?"

"Sunset is crazy!" Snails exclaimed. "Why did we even follow her around!?"

"Maybe it was a bad idea to try to start our freshman year being the tough guys," Snips said as he and his friend fell out of the lockers. "I don't want to get into that much trouble for destroying the school."

"Do you have any idea what's happening to her?" Flash asked them, the two shrugging their shoulder, just as clueless as he was. Since the start of the school year, Snips and Snails had been known to be troublesome, even more so when they joined up as Sunset's pawns to cause more trouble under her command. And seeing these two must have been responsible for that smear campaign Sunset made to keep Twilight from getting any votes. "Tell me what else Sunset Shimmer had you two do to mess up Twilight's chances of winning."

Comments

[diablo4000]

JEEZE Sunset losing herself to the Darkness, forget Demon form she turn into a Heart Less form, and be very deadly!

[BenictheHedgehog]

uh oh, Sunset is in danger from the darkness and she does not know it. and she plans to try to get rid of Sora to do harm to Twilight. though how will they keep him out so that he does not see them all change?

[AetherToast]

7543509
The magic barriers that randomly appear when Sora fights will probably separate them.

[Xavy T Drag]

Pinkie pulled her pink laptop out, another far advanced piece of technology Twilight has seen, placing it down on a desk. "Well, it's not really all that bad."

One of the errors I found, among others. Don't forget to keep it either past or present tense, not both.

[Xavy T Drag]

BTW, why not make the scene with Sunset and her lackies near the end be like that one scene from Hercules with Hades, Pain and Panic?

That would be perfect!

[LucarioFan2066]

the others all staring in awe at his speed as he managed to reach the ball right before it got into the net.

Okay, Sora, calm the heck down before you blow your cover, Superboy. At this rate, your attempt to go "Clark Kenting" will be a miserable failure.