• Member Since 7th Oct, 2014
  • offline last seen Saturday

EquestrianKirin


Sequels1

E

This story is a sequel to My Little Universe: Season 2


Your favorite Gems and Ponies are back! They've hanged about on Earth for quite sometime, and with their winter-long trip over, comes back to the start of spring. They had their fun in Beach City with many adventures, but now it's Equestria's turn! The Gems are now goin places, and its beyond just ponyville. There's all sorts of places all over Equestria, and even beyond, and its time for Steven and friends to check em out!

Pack your bags, everypony, its time for some Equestrian fun!

(Warning; loads of world-building. :derpytongue2:)

Chapters (11)
Join our Patreon to remove these adverts!
Comments ( 86 )

Season 3 is here and I read it, and I got so say I like the first half. I'll wait for second part to come out, I loving it, but I don't know who to trust the Junsui or the old Kirin? oh well I choose the old Kirin.:derpytongue2::derpytongue2: what could possibly go wrong??:derpytongue2::pinkiecrazy::derpytongue2:

EquestrianKirin is back in action :yay:

And so it begins.
Nice start, can't wait to read more.
The Umakumo kind of reminds me of a Japanese legend centering around a creature called the Jorogumo, who was a large spider that could transform herself into a beautiful woman to lure in her prey. Can't help but wonder if that's where you got the inspiration from.

Jeez, I'm late! But anyway, KIRIN!!! My favorite type of mythical pony! Shoulda told me, I had one in stock. But anyway, I love the world building and all the lore, especially ones inspired by rl mythology.:pinkiehappy:

He had a 'goatbeard' on

You don't mean a goatee? Like Discord has?

no messēji o motte,

If I'm not completely wrong, it's supposed to be either 'wo' or 'to' here. I'm not as sure as I should be, but I know it at the very least isn't supposed to be a single 'o' there. Can't remember any words like that, only 'to' or 'wo'. Damn, I studied Japanese about a year ago, and these are some of the basics I should remember...

... You know, I expected Emerald to be in this chapter for several reasons... Or maybe that's just my ego talking since he's my OC and I wish he had more screen time... In any case, I can see a few missed opportunities with him right here. Although, I believe the concern of his gemstone will be addressed shortly, possibly by the other gems leading him to the spring containing Rose's tears.

7217512 it's also referred as a goatbeard, yeah.

He'll come around :raritywink:

I feel like this is shaping up to be a slice of life story. Out of curiosity, will that change in future chapters?

"Hey, Peri! What'chu doing?" Steven asked

I feel like this is a reference to something.
img4.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20131009194349/phineasandferb/images/thumb/d/df/Suzy_is_confused.jpg/500px-Suzy_is_confused.jpg
I just don't know what.

7222824 for the whole season? Well you'll see

Nice. Very relaxed.

7222824 I guess we'll never know where that reference is from.

When they looked back, they suddenly saw that Junsui had disappeared! That was more than enough proof at this point.

"She's gone!" Rainbow yelled.

"She's right there," Ion chuckled, a hoof aimed to the pillows.

I think that should have been Pinkie saying all the dialogue here. That would be a great callback to Rainbow Rocks

I don't normally read the comics... actually, that's a lie. Except for pages and snippets here and there, I have NEVER read the comics before. But I don't need to to know that this was a better take on it.:twilightsmile:

7230245 I'm glad you think so, thank you ^^

Nice to see that some of the issues with that comic were fixed. Although secretly I would have loved to see how those bulls would have reacted to a thirty-foot tall, five eyed, four armed purple titan.
i.ytimg.com/vi/5fpg_pq2miw/maxresdefault.jpg
Seriously, who would want to fight that?
Anyway, good show as always.

Well that was nice and sweet. . . until Scarlet tells some of the other dragons about the living gemstones. I mean, come on, she had to have seen the rock stuck to Lapis's back, right? And I imagine a living gemstone would make a pretty rare prize that just about any self respecting dragon would want in his or her hoard.
Anyways, good chapter.:twilightsmile:

:rainbowkiss: <<~~ My only reaction.

wow that's nostalgia childhood reference it's warm my heart.:twilightsmile: good job in this chapter. :pinkiesmile:

7243450 It warms mine too ^^ I'm so glad you like it

"You just have to keep up," Garnet commented, smirking. Still, Jasper preferred this over what they originally came for, and cracked her knuckles, ready to rumble.

Before they could move one inch in the direction of the bug bear, a huge four fingered hand with massive sickle like claws reached out of the forests depths and grabbed the beast from behind. Garnet and Jasper could only watch in shock as the poor creature was dragged backward, squealing with fright.
Within moments another appendage, this one bearing a single bony claw over four meters long appeared, skewering the bug bear and silencing it forever. The strike caused a splatter of viscous green and black ichor to spray over the two gems, coating them in little drops of the stuff. Neither gem was sure how to react to this new development. And then the creature appeared in its full glory. As big as a dragon, it had a completely alien appearance unlike anything that Equestria had to offer. Huge, sleek, and eyeless, the monstrous creature hovered over the corpse of the bug bear. It opened its maw, its lower jaw parting the mandibles of an insect, and the sight that followed shocked the gems to their core. It looked as though the bug bear was being flayed by a crimson red energy before the bits and pieces were sucked up into the creatures maw. In less than a few seconds, there was nothing left of the bug bear but a bloody skeleton.
Its meal finished, the creature glanced at Garnet and Jasper, causing the two to stiffen under its eyeless gaze. With a snort, the creature began to move away, its slender, snake like form weaving through the trees before disappearing from view as though it had never been there in the first place. The only evidence it had even existed was the skeleton of the bug bear.
Still shaken from the brief but harrowing encounter, Jasper looked over to Garnet and asked, "Did your future vision predict that?"
Taking off her visor and exposing her three eyes, Garnet began to wipe off the specks of ichor before answering, "Let's just say yes and go back to the wedding."
"Agreed."

:pinkiecrazy:
Anyway, good chapter.:pinkiehappy:

7248088 see you're having fun with this :pinkiecrazy: thank you

7248360
Oh yes. . . much FUN.

7248881
IT fOLlowS mE in My DreAMS.:pinkiecrazy:
. . .
Ahem, well anyway, Good story so far.

this chapter you wrote for this crossover just made me shed a tears of joy at the end.:fluttercry: and a funny since peridot don't know what's the good luck package is, when looking for it with derpy that's too cute.:derpytongue2::rainbowkiss:I Love this chapter.:raritystarry::raritystarry::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss:

7248872 Holy Crap :twilightoops: that will hunt me in my Dream, well you won that Evil Laugh.:twilightoops::rainbowderp: For Now:pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:

Matilda and Cranky were both pretty much on barrowed time.

borrowed

And Everybody in human population in beach city got Diabetes Minus the gems, The End.:derpytongue2::pinkiecrazy: Great chapter. :pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

P.S. I love pinkey pie over-dramatic on Lapis tiny velvet frosting treat expose evidence on her face, funny.:trollestia::rainbowlaugh:

I can just imagine Pinkie screaming at the top of her lungs, "THERE CAN ONLY BE ONE!"
Quick question, is the Cluster still an issue in these stories? Because I would imagine that a giant mass of gem shards buried in the Earths crust, threatening to take form at any given moment would be a pretty big issue.
I can just picture Yellow Diamond sending the following message.
Hello puny organics and traitorous gems. At first I did not see the necessity of this message seeing as how I despise Earth and all it represents, but since we are on somewhat good terms at the moment I felt obligated to inform you of the massive forced fusion buried a few kilometers under your planets surface. Given how long it has been since it was created, it should emerge very soon, no more than a few months time, effectively destroying every shred of life on the planet. Ask Peridot if you need to know anything else.
Anyway, good luck with that. :)
Love: Yellow Diamond

7260515 First off, glad you like it.

As for the cluster, I'll PM you about that ...

7260515 I'm with with Dilos1.:rainbowderp: the Cluster is Coming.:pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy: The End Is Coming!!!:raritydespair::raritycry:

Happily going through Beach City, with some special supplies in hoof, Pinkie Pie was happily hopping along through the Beach city amusement park, known as Beach City Funland. Behind her, Pinkie Pie had a number of delicious baked goods she'd been making for a good while.

It took me a few times to realize there wasn't two Pinkie Pies while reading this. This could have been avoided if written a bit differently. Just making sure you're aware that this part could be misinterpreted like that. Otherwise it was an enjoyable read.

7263319 I would have posted this comment earlier but... I kinda forgot.

Aww, that was cute.

Far away, in a different realm entirely, Pinkie Pie felt a shiver run down her spine. Her blue eyes narrowed, and a voice that sounded much more fitting for prophesying the destruction of worlds said, "Someone is having a party without me."

Again, good chapter, although I feel that there was a missed opportunity while Steven was showing Peri how to dance.
Namely:
pre11.deviantart.net/1c9f/th/pre/i/2016/042/f/b/steven_and_peridot_fusion_by_angeliccmadness-d9rdc4o.png

7275191 that fusion looks adorable :3 glad you liked this chapter

Peridot Dancing Like a Boss :rainbowdetermined2:, I love it. :raritystarry: espically when Emerald call her "little Pizza Slice"it's cute and Funny.:trollestia: but I have three questions what, when and how that Emerald get a job? that I wonder.:rainbowhuh:

Login or register to comment
Join our Patreon to remove these adverts!