Learn to love the writing, of telling a story that you want told, and not the recognition that comes with it. When skill and passion atrophy, write for yourself, and in time, you'll inspire others.
To be unable to have a foal is one of the worst fears anyone in Equestria might face. It can plague mare or stallion, destroy marriages, and even cause societal unrest in the most extreme of circumstances.
A reporter knows this, and as such, is able to snag an interview with Princess Twilight Sparkle, who has just recently helped pass legislation that will ensure nopony will be unable to become a parent, should they wish to become one.
Contains: mentions of sex.
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ah, you went the D&D route
uhhh uhhh.. this just makes Spike and Twilight's relationship even more confusing and kind of disturbing...
Meh, I liked it. Although I wonder...Spike sure has a lot of little ones running around... secret agenda much? Lol.
Ahhh man this bring up the memories of you work on Heritage god I miss that I mean I get that you got uncomfortable with but god dammit man is was good thought provoking work.
huh, this reminded me of that one other Spike breeding fic you wrote. Definitely well done, it's nice even without the clop. If i recall correctly, the previous fic made you uncomfortable, so it's nice to see you make an alternate one, even if it's not meant to be like that. Anyways, good job and i can't wait to see what you write next.
So in a few generations how much of the population will be related to Spike? I get the feeling that this could be a bad thing. However this was a great story have an upvote.
Commence read.
Interesting.
Nice bit of world-building.
Quite a coincidence of that bill's code/numbering?
Thing that bugged me was, the last quote not being spaced.
7189603 ...dammit.
I uploaded this close to midnight, so I was a bit sleepy. It's been fixed, thank you for pointing that out.
to. I love grammar.
This is a fascinating concept. The way you explore it is very interesting.
Two other quick nitpicks, though:
Is there any particular reason why the mare's name is Prin Ter Paper and not Printer Paper?
Also, the part of the story where Twilight and Spike are talking back and forth assuaging the meta concern of whether they qualify as family, feels a little clunky and rushed. Sort of like it's been squeezed in there to placate an audience rather than as a natural answer to a question.
7189948 Well, Prin Ter Paper, just because Equestria doesn't have actual printers. They have printing presses, but not actual scanning printers.
As for the other part... yeah, it is a little shoehorned in. I finished proofreading this at around midnight, so I did miss some stuff. I'll go back and try to smooth it out a bit.
7190453 Printing presses, the practice of printing, both of which could easily refer to their practitioners as printers since they don't have computer printers...
Basically, you could easily have the actual word instead of the disjointed version. And hey, considering the controversial nature of basically every other line of this story, I don't think anyone will be rushing to call the name Printer Paper anachronistic.
I liked it. You left the characters that we know, relatively, the same while still giving us something creative and likely possibility. I love when, Spike, keep the positive aspects of his character, and, Twilight, was done very well too.
And, Spike, being with only the most extreme cases was a welcome relief. Like him to be paired with different females but, not for this reason.
Good job!
