It was supposed to be simple. A pleasant weekend at a rural lakefront cabin with her best friends. But when things start going wrong, and blood starts getting spilled, what is poor Twilight supposed to do?
Loved your other stories! Looking forward to this one. Hopeful no one dies, you don't have the "tragedy" tag but things could change. Keep up the good work!
It's just … it almost seems like Cadance is a completely different person.
my first thought was that we were finally going to see how changelings work on this side of the portal. Maybe we still will, this story could go kind of like The Thing where the killer could look like any one of them. (Of course, this would clash with my headcanon that Chrysalis is the username of some goth woman who stole Cadence's identity over the internet, but I'm always open to alternate fun ideas.)
Her dreamy, nature-induced smile faltered once she saw the rack of antlers hanging above the mantle. “Uh. They … collected those from when the deer naturally shed his antlers, right?”
Fluttershy, honey... the fridge is big enough for a deer for a reason,
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“We might have been infiltrated by horrible shapeshifting internet monsters from another dimension.”
Applejack entered via the front door, carrying a cord of wood.
holy fukin shit thats a lota wood a Cord of wood is 128 cubic feet of wood 4'x4'x8' and the lightest wood i could find (eastern white pine) weighs about 2780 lbs a Cord bundle of wood would be a better descriptor as it implies one can carry it without assistance (ie. with out tools like a basket, wheelbarrow, cart or the like) moving a cord of wood would take 1-3 trips with a pickup truck depending on how big the bed is and how brave you are
Luxurious as the cabin was, it was still uncomfortably warm from the day's blazing sun, and slightly stuffy from months of disuse. The whole place smelled rustic: of wood, of dust, and a hint of old leather.
I swear, if Rarity complains... ... Fwew. Rarity didn't complain. I was afraid I'd have to get on her. That old wood 'n' leather smell can be really nice, depending on the wood used.
“It's really nice to be out in nature like this.” Fluttershy entered after Rarity. Her dreamy, nature-induced smile faltered once she saw the rack of antlers hanging above the mantle. “Uh. They … collected those from when the deer naturally shed his antlers, right?” Her voice quavered a little.
“I'm sure they did.” Sunset gently nudged Fluttershy away from the mantlepiece.
“Oh. Whew.” The tension drained from Fluttershy's shoulders.
Aw...poor Flutters. Almost getting her mood ruined like that.
“Alright!” Cadance said, and pocketed the keys. “Now, it's been a long drive, so I'm gonna go lay down for a bit. You guys have fun, and try not to burn the place down!”
Calling it now: Rainbow dies first or Rarity does.
What was that horror game, lake view something or other?Lakeview Cabin is the name of the game.
Is this based off of that?
Loved your other stories! Looking forward to this one. Hopeful no one dies, you don't have the "tragedy" tag but things could change. Keep up the good work!
I am intrigued by the possibilities here.
Also KITCHEN KNIFE stabstab
I'm guessing this is a typo?
Anyway, sign me up for some suspense!
Reminds me of Azumanga Daioh when the girls went to the cabin for the summer.
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Eh, not really? Insomuch as I'm drawing from the same slasher-movie mentality that game probably draws from.
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Eheh. Ooops. Thanks for catching that. I'll get used to this 'writing people' thing eventually.
I like how you write Pinkie so care-free. Hope this story won't end badly...
This will bring so much laughs!
You know, when I read
my first thought was that we were finally going to see how changelings work on this side of the portal. Maybe we still will, this story could go kind of like The Thing where the killer could look like any one of them. (Of course, this would clash with my headcanon that Chrysalis is the username of some goth woman who stole Cadence's identity over the internet, but I'm always open to alternate fun ideas.)
Fluttershy, honey... the fridge is big enough for a deer for a reason,
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EDIT: Also also, is anyone else wondering how Sunset knew that the Twilight she ran into in the kitchen wasn't the real deal?
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This is adorable. And it reminded me of a scene in which Fluttershy is informed that the menagerie in the Royal Garden of Canterlot includes a kangaroo, from this other fic: https://www.fimfiction.net/story/260317/twilight-sparkle-of-the-royal-guard-the-rising
holy fukin shit thats a lota wood
a Cord of wood is 128 cubic feet of wood 4'x4'x8'
and the lightest wood i could find (eastern white pine) weighs about 2780 lbs a Cord
bundle of wood would be a better descriptor as it implies one can carry it without assistance (ie. with out tools like a basket, wheelbarrow, cart or the like)
moving a cord of wood would take 1-3 trips with a pickup truck depending on how big the bed is and how brave you are
I swear, if Rarity complains...
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Fwew. Rarity didn't complain. I was afraid I'd have to get on her. That old wood 'n' leather smell can be really nice, depending on the wood used.
Aw...poor Flutters. Almost getting her mood ruined like that.
Ah, foreshadowing!