Hello and welcome, I am The Forgotten Siren and I enjoy MLP and want to write good fanfiction for you all. I wish to keep this clean and start a new...hopefully
Fluttershy's mom, dad, and brother come to Ponyville to visit with huge news. However, instead of being happy about the event, she is terrified. So, Fluttershy asks her dear friends for help in order to show her parents that she is just as successful as her little brother.
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I wonder what happens next.
How do you Fluttershy's brother is younger than her and not older?
7181122 I know, but this is what I thought would be the episode, granted, I am tweaking it a bit
7181382 I don't. I just think its a good little plot
It needs some editing. Golden filly means a golden female horse/pony, so colt might have been a better word choice. I did think the whole sheep bit was funny.
7182298 thanks, but I was looking for the equivalent for "golden child" Which, it seems a foal is what a baby pony/horse is called
I can't wait to see how all this turns out
Not bad, but I'm kinda surprised you didn't mention Discord, reforming a Lord of Chaos would be super impressive. Unless you're saving that for later or something. The parents were okay, and I like the brother alright. Though for whatever reason, I picture him and Fluttershy as being twins in the show.
Fluttershies dad is a douche!!
7184687 Not gonna lie, I totally forgot about that lol
It says it's incomplete, does that mean there's another chapter before the story is completely finished?
7186805 oops, I forgot about that, well I am finished. However, I am not sure when I will make another story.
Is it wrong, I imagine flutters dad to sound like a big manly Russian and the mom was French.