This story is a sequel to Alexandrite: Ace Attorney: The Harbinger of a Turnabout
Alexandrite—Crystal Pony and Defense Attorney—works at Escutcheon, Buckler, and Aegis: the most renowned law firm in Manehattan. While perhaps not the center of attention when it comes to large, earth-shaking, world-changing events, you certainly do get some characters coming through the door.
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Well, that was quick.
Back to the subject at hand! This chapter was great! You show and build the character's personalities so well, that I mustache you a question:
Where are all the likes this story deserves?
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=P This is going to be a series of unrelated shorts, each one standalone but none of them really worth putting up a new fic for every time. They're projects I'm working on when I hit a blind spot in writing the full fic, and should serve to both get me kickstarted on working on the main story and flesh out the world a little bit, while letting me post some stuff up here to tide anyone interested over until I finish this big 'ol monster.
For reference: The main fic is currently at nearly 27,000 words across, at the moment, 5 chapters. I have quite a bit of chapter 5 left to go, and then I'll have at least 3 more coming. All in all, I'm expecting around a 50,000 word story.
Because of the nature of it (as a mystery), I want to write the entire thing before I post any of it, because I need the whole thing to be cohesive and make logical sense. When I actually post it, though, it'll probably be one chapter a day every day or two, with a few exceptions of short chapters going up 2 at a time.
The dates of the days are inconsequent: It starts with April 20th, then suddenly jumps back to 17th, which makes little sense except if she took care of the bird for a year
Other than that, I really like this. The characters all have interesting quirks and good chemistry between them, the scenario is nicely reminiscient to the original Ace Attorney without being a cheap rip-off, and the humour is so good I laughed loudly a couple of times. Keep up the good work! I am really looking forward to Alexandrite's first big case
7272967 Oh god, you know what I did? I pulled up a calendar, looked at a week, thought "It starts on Friday, goes to Saturday, then skips to Wednesday", but I ended up going back to the Wednesday of the same week on my reference. Thank you for pointing that out, it was a silly mistake! It's fixed now~.
And I'm glad you liked it! This story and all the minis I post in it are technically just side adventures you don't need to read, but I think you'll get a lot more enjoyment out of it when it comes around from having read them, and I'll have my characters down better having written them some.
Edit: Also, if I ever say anything you already know, or if I seem to be repeating myself, kindly slap me around a bit and point it out. Alexandrite has several introductions, between the two stories up, the one I'm working on, and all of the advertising I'm doing, so I may end up blurting out information that seems like an advertisement just out of habit.
7273550 Well, slip-ups like this happen. I think I once used a calendar for something too, but the dates didn't add up. It took me forever to finally find out I used two diffrent months as reference