Princess Celestia and Twilight's parents arrange a marriage for Twilight and Prince Blueblood. Can the two be able to make it work?
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It's an interesting idea, but the chapter itself could use a bit of a polish.
Punctuation is your friend, use it.
GET KINKY!!!!!!!!!!!
Bluelight is best ship
UGH!!! it was getting so good
Can't wait till next chapter, this is just too good!
Well Twilight hasn't exploded into rapidash yet so thats a good sign.
Oooo, I can just tell things are going to get even more interesting, especially with Rarity and Applejack holding grudges against Blueblood. And Pinkie Pie will probably go all Pinkie Pie when she finds out about this whole situation.
Eagerly looking forward to more chapters!
GET KINKY UP IN HERE YEAH!!!!!!!
Ok, now throw in Caramel or somepony to make this story interesting. Blueblood's jerkass side will also hv to make an appearance. Avoid any cliches. Or hv you got something else in mind :)
Nice story btw. Dialogue needs more depth.
780159This is just the parts leading to the wedding. The kinkiness doesn't start till the honeymoon which if she/he doesn't write the you probably could with permission.
782569Ah I see
I can't believe Rainbow Dash of all ponies actually said Twilight getting a stallion would be good for her. I think you should write in somewhere that the the rest of Twilight's friends all have boyfriends or at least date stallions often. That would make more sense as to why they are suggesting Twilight should get a stallion as well and get her nose out of those books more often.
Also, instead of Twilight automatically agreeing to marry Blueblood, I think she should have suggested that they go on a date first and see how things go before she makes her decision. That would have made more sense.
Anyway, those are my suggestions. O hope you consider them, but either way, I still like this story and this ship. Keep on writing.
is it...
#hashtag #Love_it
Oh no. Her friends aren't going to be too happy.
Please some more please
wow... so you like to experiment with Twilight shippings? well know a group just forthat!
767296 YYEEAAHH!!
The sad thing is, Twilight idolizes Celestia to ridiculous extremes that she probably would say yes to any arranged marriage if Celestia asks it of her. I ship Twilight and Blueblood, but I want them to marry for lurve!
sad to say I enjoy this ship, I dislike blueblood snobbing ways, but I always think it an act to keep gold digger who only care for fame and perks away.
an intersting start