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Equestria is an idyllic land, a place of friendship and magic in which all ponies can thrive. But, alas, not all creatures see it that way. The march of progress has greatly changed the way ponies live over the past few decades, and there are some, opponents of the settled order, who see in these changes an opportunity to forge a new Equestria. An Equestria stripped of the very things that most define it.

After years of preparation, a shadowy order is ready to execute a terrible plan to radically and irreversibly reshape Equestria. Can Princess Celestia and the Elements uncover their plot and stop them before it’s too late?

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Hello, all.

This story is my first serious attempt at creative writing in more than five years, and, as such, I'm a bit rusty. I would be very grateful if you would take a moment to leave a comment and any constructive criticism you might have as you read through it. I'm particularly interested in feedback regarding my characterization of canon ponies - please let me know if you think anypony seems out of character!

Best wishes,
Noteperson

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