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PonyThunder


Author of mostly cute/funny one-shots and a handful of heartwarming stories. I also make art! https://www.deviantart.com/doodledonutart

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Rarity and Fluttershy go to the spa and are surprised to find Rainbow Dash enjoying the services. Knowing that confronting her would ruin everything, they decide to do a little reconnaissance...

Vectors used in artwork:

http://plsim.deviantart.com/art/teehee-504504459
http://mlp-vectorclub.deviantart.com/art/Rarity-424887217

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Comments ( 14 )

Poot Rarity. X3

I've only one response...

:rainbowlaugh:

It would've been even funnier if Rainbow knew that they were there and asked for the rest of her appointment to be in the mud room. That would teach 'em.

7221718

Initially where I was going to go with this story was that Rainbow Dash does secretly enjoy that kind of stuff, but decided against it because that's a common trope. I think all three of them stayed in their canon personalities rather well, with the only exception being the random love interest. I wanted to viewers to think it was Rarity the whole time, and then surprise them with something that actually might make a little sense :twilightsheepish:

7221961 I sure thought it was Rarity and I was hoping it was cuz I love Raridash

Comment posted by PonyThunder deleted Mar 3rd, 2021

That was a fun little story. Fluttershy might have been a little bit OOC, except with Rainbow Dash I can buy it. They have been lifelong friends.

"that lost pony looked"
I assume you meant "that last pony looked" ?

7223066

Thanks, I fixed the typo. And yeah, I figured Fluttershy was the most out of character but it was excusable because they're really close.

Well...
I didn't see that coming...
Of all the ponies I'd think that RD would want to get into a relationship with... Bulk was not one of them.

7227234

Spoilers!

Twas the idea. How long were you thinking it was Rarity?

7227296 Honestly, never.
But that was more because I'm not a Raridash shipper.

I loved it. Great story.

gotta love it with the music :)

7264562

Choosing the music for my one-shots is always fun.:rainbowkiss:

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