Long ago, Rainbow Dash as a small filly watched her parents get killed right before her eyes. Ever since, the cyan pegasus long to fight the same ponies who took her parents away. With learning the ways of fighting high in the mountains. When she return to the crime full city of Manehattan she became the masked vigilante known as Batmare.
In the small country town of Ponyville, a mysterious object fell from the the night sky landing the open fields of Sweet Apple Acres. The object turns out to be from another planet, the new parents decide to raise the filly and name her Applejack. Soon, the Alien learn she had amazing powers that helped her fly, run faster then a bullet, and many more. Soon becoming a simple of hope from her home planet to protect the planet she now calls home as Supermare.
In the present day, the two fight for different reasons but still want to take down the criminals around Equestria. With Supermare's main villain Trixie always having a trick up her sleeve, who knows how dangerous she could be?
Co-Written with: zekromthepokemon
What, no romance tag!? just kidding!
MARTHA!!!
7230515 WHY DID YOU SAY THAT NAME?!
Now that I've read the first chapter... alright, you've got my attention. Keep it up!
7230544 There's more than one Martha, Bruce!
Man... That film was a huge disappointment. I'm glad Civil War exceeded my expectations! Apologies to all you DC fans, hope Suicide Squad is good. Definitely going to see the Lego Batman movie!
(reads description)
Well, originally Superman couldn't fly, but he COULD leap tall buildings in a single bound. Also, the phrase is "faster than a speeding bullet"
7230626 which makes me think of something
I'm a Marvel fan, too. I still want more of this. Good story so far, but the proofreading needs a little work. Keep 'em coming.
7232137 I'm sorry no this isn't going to be Rainbow x Applejack shipping. Some other
has his eye on Aj
I like this story but could you please try and get someone to go over your work.
Hey there. Thanks greatly for sharing this idea with us. Excellent job on the action, exchanges, emotional content and future chapter set-up in all the right places. Spike makes a surprisingly good Lois. And, anyway, I respectfully disagree about why half the Superman movies stink. The movies aren't bad because Superman has too many powers; they are bad because, too often, the main villain is a normal human being who would stand no chance in blazes against Superman without resorting to one or more of his obvious weaknesses. If they used more (non-Kryptonian) villains powerful enough to actually give Superman a hard time in a completely fair fight, they might actually be better movies (a [semi-]serious version of Mxyzptlk, in particular, would be powerful enough to pose a good challenge to the entire JUSTICE LEAGUE).
I will hazard a guess and say either Twilight or Pinkie is in the role of the Flash (Twilight because her scientific mind would make her a good analogue to Barry Allen and Pinkie because she has TWICE proven in MLP canon to be faster on land than Rainbow is in the sky), but I will freely admit that either one of those guesses could be wrong.
At any rate, I will definitely be looking forward to more of this as soon as time and inspiration will allow.
7424126 Yeah I didn't explain why I don't like the Superman movie well, it just well they are boring. I would like to see his villains like Brainiac or Metallo, but all we got was Lex and Zod who are good villains, but it would still be nice to see the others.
7424654 Yeah. That's a good point. One I agree whole-heartedly with.
7506550 Dude, I don't like these sort of comments on my stories I'm sorry, but I have to delete it because it just ruins the story for people who are reading the comments first than the story or chapter.
7506713 wait: you can do that? wait, not important (sighs) stupid questions aside, I didn't know you disliked those comments: I wouldn't have posted them if I did: I'm sorry...
7506920 That's fine dude, this is the first time it has happen to me I get annoyed by it in other stories too. But here I thought I would run into one of those commemts in the Power Ponies, Super Villian story I'm writing, The Deadly Three.
Hey there. Thanks very much for getting this last chapter up. I really appreciate you going to the effort. I have to say, great job on the exchanges, action, emotional content, main wrap-up and future story set-up in all the right places.
I have to admit I didn't expect Rarity to be in the Wonder Woman role . Green Lantern, maybe, but not Wonder Woman . In all honesty, I half-expected Twilight or Cadance to be Wonder Woman , but I have to admit that this IS your story and I don't mind being pleasantly surprised.
And just out of curiosity; is the "Flying Green Object" headline foreshadowing for this universe's Green Lantern, Martian Manhunter or something else entirely? Or am I overthinking things?
At any rate, I will definitely be looking forward to more stories in this universe as soon as time and inspiration will allow.
7575215 Well the sequel isn't going to be made but Twilight is meant to be the Green Lantern, and that what the newspaper was about. I have no plans on Martian Manhunter with is odd because when making this story I gave Wonder Woman, The Flash, Harkgirl, Dr. Faith and Shazom all different ponies to play the part.
In the order of the superheroes it Rarity, Pinkie, Spitfire, Fluttershy, and Scootaloo. With Rainbow and Applejack and unicorn Twilight. That's the Justice League in this story.
P.S sorry for any spelling errors,
7575352 Quite all right. And thanks for the answer.
I caught the Batman Begins reference.
HISHE???
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