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BubblePuff


I am a brony and a long time writer. This site will be for my MLP fanfiction, and you can read my other works on Deviantart.com under the name potsticker13.

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Prince Blueblood is spoiled rotten and looks down on his fellow ponies. In order to teach him some humility, Luna and Celestia turn Blueblood into a foal. He is then sent to Ponyville where he is adopted by the same sex couple of Big Mac and Soarin. How will Ponyville react to Equestria's modern family?

*Rated Teen just in case.

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Aside for the fact that the very beginning is a bit rushed, I will say you've given an interesting set up here. Especially considering that it's Big Mac and Soarin that are going to raise Blueblood. To be honest, I've never seen such a set up before. But I think there can be some interesting, if not amusing moments down the road. So keep going, and let's see where it goes from here.

Luna and Celestia smiled. They touched their horns together, creating a bright white light. The light shot out as beam towards Blueblood. When he was hit, there was a bright flash. Following the flash Blueblood laid on the floor, having been turned into a newborn foal no more than a day old.

Isn't that just a little bit...extreme? And is he going to be returned to normal or is this going to be permanent (which to me is very cruel.)

But it’s not like I didn’t drop hints. Like the time I dreamt that I was an Alicorn Princess when Luna had us all in that shared dream, or when I dressed up as a mare for the Sisterhooves Social.

Actually, this made me think that he wanted to be a she.

Good luck with this story, but I will have to pass.

this is a very interesting setup, I hope this is going a great and funny ride.

I can't wait to see Granny Smith do something crazy and see how Blueblood ends up with the happy couple

Cant wait for more. I added this to my favs. :eeyup:

So basically celestia and luna just got rid off blueblood memories and all ...:facehoof: Tyrant celestia at her best.

Comment posted by Mix-up deleted May 12th, 2016

Why did you delete my comment? I don't see any reason to take it out sense it's no offensive torment in it and just wanted to add suggestions for the story.

Looks like Celestia's 'loving' decision to have Blueblood raised properly is going to backfire. I never pictured Ponyville to be full of bigots.

Okay, why is everyone in Ponyville so bigoted and racist? This is the same town that didn't bat an eye at the idea of a donkey and a mule getting married. :ajbemused:

Gonna have to leave another dislike. OOC usually doesn't work unless you know what what you're doing.

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