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Soaring with Freedom

Soarin finds freedom from the prejudice of the crowds.

Dedicated to Soaring and Flint.

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The Bricklayer #1 · Apr 28th, 2016 · · ·

Not half bad, though I must ask were those long spaces in the middle between sentences really needed?

Odd_Sarge #2 · Apr 29th, 2016 · · ·

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I'm not a fan of them, mostly just chose them for a stylistic choice. I wanted to step out of my boundaries for a bit, but yeah I don't think they work well here. Noted.

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