High school student Forte Heldentenor has moved to Canterlot with his parents and as such, has to start at a new school. The school in question is CHS.
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no because he didn't want to talk to her
*not
Also this feels a bit rushed
Info cram, and not to mention the amount of unnecessary info scattered throughout the paragraphs. I understand the world-building attempt, but like others have said before, go slow and blend it all in bit by bit. Make sure the info given is there for a good reason, such as driving the story and fleshing out characters. Good luck!
When re-reading this after a very long time, i am finding an excessive amount of grammar/spelling/flow errors. If you had an editor for this, they should be fired.