The names Jack Stone
Solver of over 1 billion crimes.
Bad guys eliminated: 121
Cars destroyed: 69
Total arrests: 1
Total civilian casualties: Not my god damn problem.
Jack Stone is both the best and worst super cop. Casting aside such silly things as collateral damage and civilian casualties, he catches (or rather kills) the bad guys left and right, no matter how many times Cadence punches him in the crotch.
His morals are awful, his comebacks are even more awfuler, and his grammar is....passable.
Step in to a world
where the 4th wall curls up into a ball and cries like a bitch.
Where criminals and innocent civilians are the same thing!
Where one moment things are all bright and sunny, then Jack Stone shows up and ruins everything in the name of justice!
Are there confusing plot holes and continuity errors? CONSTANTLY!
Is there randomness and an utter lack of focus? BACON!
Do you miss johnny Bravo? Of course you do.
Disclaimer: I guess you don't technically need to read the chapters in order. You might not understand a running gag though.
So in all seriousness, Jack Stone was a character I played in a small video series with a friend of mine. The idea is for Jack to be a parody of every super cop movie/series. I've studied many cliches and tropes, and out came Jack Stone. It also parodies a lot of Mary Sue HiE stories. If you don't get the humor, then maybe this will help...or you just suck, who knows.
If you're liking what I'm doing, do me a solid and favorite, hit that thumbs up and leave a sweet, delicious, bullet-filled comment for me please!
Sex tag for...well there's a lot of sexual humor.
Here's a little something to help you after you've read it.
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Best comments about Jack Stone:
"The FUCK Kinna crazy shit did I just read?..."
"WTF...."
"Jack Stone: the maniacal cross between Horatio Caine, a 90's cop, and that one kid down the street who's probably insane but doesn't admit it...
...I see no problems with this guy's logic for solving a crime."
"His existence offends me..."
"you really don't give two fucks about a plot do you?..."
"Jack Stone is the reason my romantic night with Pinkie Pie happened."
"No one pistol whips like Gaston."
Jack Stone: the maniacal cross between Horatio Caine, a 90's cop, and that one kid down the street who's probably insane but doesn't admit it...
...I see no problems with this guy's logic for solving a crime.
WTF....
A little less "for some reason" and a little bit better sentence structure and you have a quality one shot on your hands.
Edit this pronto.
"Jack “What can I say, I guess crack really...cracks me up!” Jack laughs loudly as the same six supermodels in bikinis from before walk up to Jack laughing as well, and put their arms around him."
You missed a Golden opportunity here.
"Jack “What can I say, I guess crack really...cracks me up!” Jack laughs loudly as the same six supermodels in bikinis from before walk up to Jack laughing as well. With a fourth pair of avaitors resting on his nose those supermodels began wrapping their arms around him. All the while he is laughing louder, and staring straight into Celestias confused face.
7182088 HA!
7182104 legit should have a chapter where twilight is trying to study jackstone and she's trying to figure out how the avaitors are his source of power and where he gets them.
7182114 *Leans back in chair and drums fingers together quizzically*
Badass rank: off the charts.
Looks like the charts been CRACKED
Someone end me please
Also, I literally laughed my way from this story.
Idea for later: Pinkie steals Jack's glasses, only for nothing to happen to her
The FUCK Kinna crazy shit did I just read? Wait... when did I like and fave this... what the hell... I....what?!
7245236 *Brohoof*
Awesome Chris Farley reference with the van down by the river.
7252689 Couldn't resist lol
I saw the cover image, read the synopsis and realized this story is where the magic happens.
This is amazing
I mean holy shit
It's like Axe Cop and his Axe had a baby and that baby was deputized by Jack stone and used as a weapon.
I haven't smiled this hard in so long. I want to have Jack Stone's babies, but then he'd find me and shoot me because I took his babies.
Awesome work! Tracking, fav and like!
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7317536 I may have had a few drinks while writing chapter 1...
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If you're not writing this with a blood alcohol content so high, your blood catches on fire, then I don't know what to tell you. :P
7317561 Did you catch the Death Note joke or have you never seen it like some kind of sheltered monster?
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Oh shoot, it says my response is from chapter 4, which is probably where the death note joke is, but I haven't read taht chapter yet. WHAT ARE YOU DOING, FIMFICTION? YOU ARE FULL OF LIES
But I'll get there and check it out! I have seen death note, but only some of it, so that makes me slightly less of a monster. :P
7317584 Aww thank you so much!
YES! THAT IS HOW YOU OPEN A BUCKING STORY!
Renegade +10
OH MY GOD DARK CHOCOLATE I LOVE YOU AND YOUR WRITING SO MUCH! :D D:D:DD>D:
I love running gags like you don't even understand
I love this man
I want a fungineering degree :D
OH GOD I THINK HE RAGDOLLED
That is the best ending to a chapter I've seen on this whole site. ever.
And I've read Friendship is Optimal :D
I KNEW your story would make me smile and laugh so hard! XD Reading your Jack Stone stories makes me want to write something right now! I might just do that. We'll see :D
7333132 Your comments always put me in a good mood, thank you so much lol
Frickin' hilarious. lol.
It's so beautiful....
wait HE CAN EXPLOIT MAKING BAD PUNS TO MAKE SUPER MODELS TO APEAR BY MAKING A SUPER MODEL ARMY! AHAHAHAHAHAHA!
7425491 Yeeaaahh I was kinda drunk when I wrote it. I personally feel each chapter is better than the last.
7425512 First person to mention it lol
7425623 AHAHAHAAHAHAH! Alright I'll give it a comb for errors XD
I LOVE YOU SO FUCKING MUCH! This story has me laughing my ball off (for the record I do have one testicle, story for another time). I love how much of an idiot Jack is and the references and tropes it parodies are amazing there was never a dull moment with this story. You sir have a like, fav, and my lungs because this story too my breath away from all the laughing.
Hilarious. But I think you misused colt and meant stallion. Colt = boy. Stallion = man. generally speaking.
7485078 That's something that's always confused me because they call all males colts in the show
7485080 And they often refer to the clearly adult cast as fillies and not mares quite often as well.
7485086 So I'm not crazy then, I just assumed I was wrong.
7485089 but they sometime use the right verbiage. But, I still think that you should use stallion and not colt regardless of the what may happen in the show. I also think that Big Mac was called a stallion at least once.
7485089 Meh don't worry about it I understood pretty ok and besides in a story like this it's the least thing people should care about lol
If there's a wrong way to do cop parodies, you're doing it right.
I feel like I just watched Miami Vice starring get Horatio Caine.
Not mad about it. Very funny!
This would be great as like a Robot Chicken piece on adult swim.
1st chapter is still my favorite so far, but love how funny your writing is.
Getting more of a Gaston vibe this chapter.
No one pistol whips like Gaston.
Really digging all the pop culture references.
Jack reminds me of Bojack Horseman occasionally (no pun intended).
This is seriously the best thing ever.
Hooray the absurdity continues.
Jack Stone: the more aviators he wears, the more bull crap that's about to happen.
Meh. Not the Jack Stone I know.
So Dr. Doofenshmirtz?
This is what we get for going past chapter one. I should've stopped at the description. Heck, I shouldn't have logged on today. Another chapter... Sure, why not?
7861175 Well thank you, I appreciate your efforts!
Lmao that Jack Stone.
But the button!
YEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH i.imgflip.com/y678d.jpg
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Lol is that Bo Burnam?