The Cutie Mark Crusaders wonder, what would happen if Fluttershy and Dash got super powers they wonder. They have a laugh and agree that you would expect Dash to have super powers - so what if only Fluttershy did Then SHE would be able to be the hero and save her Dashie. The main thing that stays in the transformation is Fluttershys love of RD.
One normal day after school the trio of fillies had a brainwave and began work on their best ever comic book. The adventures of Captain Flutterpants:
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“Looks up in the sky, its a bird, - its a pegasus - Its an hay-salaid sandwitch!"
“No way, I’m Captain Flutterpants!” Captain Flutterpants exclaimed as she flew past the group of gawping onlookers in her pony underwear.
Captain Flutterpants is faster than a speeding raincloud.
More powerful than one of Raritys Petticoats.
And able to leap tall buildings without getting a wedgie. “Yay!”
Night and day Captain Flutterpants watched over the land, fighting for truth, justice and all that is pre-shurnk and cottony.
Meanwhile in a nearby school,
It was “sticky candy surprise” day at the cafeteria.
“Yuck!” Cried one colts as he eyed the random mass of sweets upon his plate.
Everypony hated it so much they threw it away.
Soon, the trash became raidoactive and came to life.
It emerged from the bin all the students had been dupming their lunch into and ate Applejack.
“Help! The Incredible Hulk just ate up 15 folding chairs and Applejack!”
“OH, NO! Not the folding chairs!” Cried Cheerliee. “This looks like a job for...”
"Captain Flutterpants!"
"Yay!" The yellow pegasus flew down to confront this most dangerous of foes.
Flutterpants lead the Incredible Hulk to sugarcube corner and Pinkie Pie eats it in one go.
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Further authors note:
Yea, sadly I kinda ran out of steam with this but its posted because I thought the idea of it is a laugh.
I wondered if I'd see more of Captain Flutterpants from you... It's too bad you couldn't really expand much on this but the idea of it gave plenty of laughs. I'll never forget the gym teacher getting eaten along with random objects and someone lamenting the loss of the whatever it was that got destroyed and not the gym teacher. "No! Not the folding chairs!"
I had no idea that you're shipping Rarity and Spike now, but um are you really? I might be mixing you up with someone else but I could swear you've said in the past you've never really thought much of that ship... but uhh don't mind me if I was under the wrong impression. It was a cute scene but it could definitely use some fleshing out. Fluttershy trying to hide (not completely) under the water was funny though. I thought the starswirl bit was a little interesting. It was cute n short.
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Thanks for your feedback. I got a few more shorts that I'm trying to finish off on the side that had the potential to be more but didn't.
On the captain Flutterpants story; I know. I tried. And our ideas gave me a few laughs. but when I came back to it I figured I had to at least polish it up and attempt to take it somewhere. After a several scrapped starts I settled on this. Sadly less than hoped for, but long as it gave you laughs then I'm happy.
You know they made a move about captain Underpants movie & its out now or soon. I'll have to see it and the MLP movie.
Anyways. Did you like the first two shorts on Discord and Celestia? Or not worth noting? Nice to know the Starswirl bit was ok
I have shipped Spike and Rarity for about a year actually. After a stint binging on DisLestia and looking for more MxF stories that could align with me I found a Spike and Rarity story that simply sold me on them. Then I found a few more (plus some that I had passed up previously because of that ship) and went and watched a few episodes and now despite AJ being the mare of Rarities affections in the short here, I would only personally ship spike and Rarity with each other. Ember may be a new popular ship for Spike, but I'll probably stick solidly with Sparity now that I've come to like them.
I did use to say that I didn't think much of them as a ship. They are a bit ...odd. I mean a dragon and a pony? But his crush has never gone away in the show and with all the cute moments they have, I'm happy to have Spike get his crush in my future works.
When I get my rewrite for Fall of the Rising done, that will also now have Sparity. Spike gets a growth spurt in the story and a larger dragon can be useful in a fight but gives a few challenges to be explored in terms of what it would do to Spike and Rarity's relationship.
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Oh yeah, I did enjoy those as well. The first one in particular I liked especially when things got serious. That was a funny and sweet touch. The second one was funny too as Discord embarrassed the Princess during the most important moment.
Yes they did make a movie >:) Unfortunately it is no longer in theatres in the US so I'll have to get the dvd at some point. Though I def would not go to the theatre to see the mlp movie... As a guy that probably would not go very well at all...
Idk I've never thought much of it other than an innocent crush Spike has had. I've always preferred either Applejack or Twilight and even Pinkie Pie... but no one else really.
But anyway it's nice to check out what you write, even short bits.