This story is a sequel to Maud Pie Challenged Me To A Rap Battle
Anon was invited by Celestia to partake in a friendly match of rap battling. Anon "graciously" accepts. Things take an unexpected turn, but nothing Anon isn't ready for.
[Description written by Celestia. Co-written by Pinkie Pie]
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Da hell!?
Actually not bad.
7154192 Thanks! I tried too hard for those author's notes, though...
I hope this is not the end of the series
7154254 I hope not as well.
I started voicing these sick bars halfway through.
That shit was phat as fuck.
7154339 Thanks for the compliment.
Also, fat with a "ph" always kills me.
Yass. Please.
7154574 You see, I was going to reply with a few verses of my own, but then I realized how much work that is.
First off, thanks for the comment. It always helps. Second, could you describe "lifeless"? I think I know what you mean, but just to be sure, I have to ask.
Hm... cleverness is something I've always strived for but never achieved. Nw that someone is physically telling me that being blunt isn't as good anymore, I'll make sure to try harder.
Luna was supposed to be in this story. I don't actually remember why she isn't. I've done her a great injustice.
Although it could be pegged as lazy, I use Anon because he's easy, doesn't require any backstory, and everybody knows who he is when he's mentioned.
Was beating Discord really that farfetched? In your defense, his verses could use work, and should've been more in character, but is him losing improbable?
It's definitely the lyrics you can't hear in FiM voices. That's mostly because for this series, I haven't been keeping much in character, and I apologize if it detracted from the reading experience.
More story... more story... I'll try, but I'm not sure what I'll come up with and if it'll take away from the story's purpose, which is being completely silly and dumb.
As for the last verse, I think I should thank you. Although you're withholding an upvote, I think that if you hadn't commented, I would've gone done a different path. I'll try to change it for the better.
7154456 That was a pretty good line if I do say so myself.
Even after this I still don't get why you use Anon. It's a story in the first person, so there is no need for it. To be honest though, I think I agree with 7154574 when he says it needs more story and a bit less rap. Not bad.
7155051 I just used Anon because it's easier and he's well-known. I'll try to fit more story in there somewhere... Thanks for the comment, though.
Please have Luna rap battle next.
(you know you can't say no to Fluttershy) ~hug
Why not have a rap battle with the princess of spitting fire, the dragon lord Ember.
Okay, that was both equally strange and somewhat funny. Here, have a Pinkie!
7155162 I promise, Luna will feature in something before I die.
*knocks at my door*
Coming!
7155275 I haven't actually watched any of Season 6 yet. I haven't met the the Tsundere Lord... yet.
7155286 *Graciously accepts the demoic horse*
Thanks!
7155635 You haven't much. Besides the season's opener, what the CMC is going to do next and a good spike episode.
7155036 I was expecting something related to abortion
7155275 If Conj won't do it, I sure as hell will.
Conj, we're doing Ember. Fight me if you disagree.
7156320 Woooo! We got a sequel!
7156320 Sure we can do Ember, just not next.
7157315 The way this is set up now, I'm not even sure when it'll end.