After an island appears on the shores of there land, the mane six are sent to investigate it and bring back what they find for further study. Finding a hoard of banana's, the group decide to take from it for study and research purposes. Trouble arises, however, when the owner of the hoard arrives.
Ha, classic Donkey Kong.
First Comment!
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I'm just glad you didn't make the Kongs talk. As funny as the animated series was, there's always that appeal for silent protagonists
Of course Pinkie would act like Fatbot on Futurama
Color me interested.
One question; Did you use Donkey Kong Country or Donkey Kong 64? Hoping its 64 cause I love this: https://youtu.be/RcP91tQ4ZSM
7856924 Donkey Kong Country
7856937 Oh well, love both of them anyway
An appropriate quote, wouldn't you say?
I dont think DK will harm them...will he?
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Very!
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~Maaaybe~
7858082 You're a MADMAN!
Can't wait to see what happens next. Great story so far
If it is criticism you desire, then it would be wise to separate the dialogue of different characters in one paragraph away from each other. I made that mistake myself when I first came on this site.
That said, this chapter was hilarious start to finish Pinkie just doesn't learn...
Will other Donkey Kong characters appear in this story?
7870215 I'll try that, thanks!
7870517 I only plan on having DK in here.
I don't think I'll do the other members of The DK Crew justice if I add them in.
7870627 Also, some of the tense in both of your chapters keep changing. You may wanna look over those.
I hope this fight will be awesome!
Suddenly, changelings! ...They're screwed.
Also, you're spelling Chrysalis as Chryssalis.
7926871 That's how its spelled?
Huh. I guess the spell check wasn't as buggy as I thought!
A fight? Ok then but with SUPER SMASH BROS STYLE!
No worries. This was an enjoyable chapter. I liked how DK worfed Chrysalis
Now I wonder about Diddy
More chapters please :)
Seconded, more chapters please. Maybe finish the story at Canterlot, to avoid unneeded stress on your side.
Hope there will be more chapters. I Really Like this story :)
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Like against the music tikis from DK Country Returns
Well, if this isn't a surprise post!
And boy, is our dear primate angry at them thieving ponies stealing his precious bananas! :v
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A real shocker, I know.
HOLY...!
I did not expect this to be updated!
Inspired from the ending of Donkey Kong Country Returns?
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The same thing crossed my mind, and it will be quite the headache for Luna to deal with--in particular, as I foresee her getting cartoonishly squeezed between the moon and probably the mountain Canterlot is on.
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Yeah.
Okay, this is getting really funny.
I wonder what they'll try next.
and this is why 'messing with DK's banana horde is not smart' is an unwrighten rule of the jungle.
(sorry for any misspellings)
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Glad I wasn't the only one thinking of it.