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HiddenMac


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Twilight Sparkle is called to participate with the greatest minds from around the known world in order to find a solution to an ominous threat. Upon meeting her colleagues, she discovers one of them has no business being there. She must decide whether to spare their feelings or call out this charlatan for the good of Equestria, if not the world.

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 8 )

Decent, the puns are killer, but other than that a good read.

Do what you must Flash. Mac has already won.

'Brad': corruptor of the innocent, thief of waifus, scourge of all stallions, and destroyer of nations. You will become unstoppable!

For the last time, dammit, I am NOT a waifu stealer! *harrumphs*

A Doctor Who pony, two ponified versions of real-life scientists (well, I guess animal-ified since for once in a fic somebody does animal forms that aren't ponies), and then Big Mac, presumably Professor of Fancy Mathematics.

Cue tape-scratch:

I almost feel like there's an episode about a background character having hidden depths, but the show hasn't really done anything like that. Of course, Twilight tries to railroad everyone here and just gets humiliated in the process for it.

Seems to me they should have slingshotted the comet into the sun, if that was possible. The 'eh, maybe it'll end up being some other planet's problem' attitude of Dr Whooves is horrible. At least in the sun the comet would be vaporised.

Well, that was an OK short fic. The whole Flash Sentry subplot should have been scrapped though. It doesn't really ad anything to the plot, and feels more like a 'take-that' aside at his character.

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