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Unwhole Hole
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Unwhole Hole
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I truely didnt expect to find this nearly as funny as i am. Hopefully this continues till the end.
Please tell me at some point in this story you explain toasters existence? Shes just too off to be natural.
This has been one of the weirdest stories ive ever read, but damn if it was so entertaining that it xaused me to stay awake for 2 1/2 extra hours to finish it.
This is rare: a 95-thousand word story posted in its entirety all at once.
Well, we'll see how it goes!
What exactly do you wanted to write there? "My loaves" as in loaves of bread? That would be "Meine Leibe!" instead of what you got there.
This is getting more and more bizzare. I like it!
Fluttershy, the daugther of Pony Satan.
7217340 There is an old videogame called Wolfenstein 3D. In it, when you plug a Nazi, they jump up, spin around, and shout "Mein Leben!" or somesuch.
What the absolute fuck did I just read? Completely retarded yet somehow serious enough to not just be wacky Bullshit. I just don't know what I read but damn if I didn't regret it.
Soooo, either Toaster is a actual Toaster made a Pony via a eldritch mixture of the arcane and science or someone tired to either create the perfect sextoy OR superweapon, something went horibly wrong (or right, depends on the perspective realy) and this is the result.
I myself tend to the later.
Also, the parts with Fleur and Pinkies mom were hilarious!
*sing-songs* Moooo~oomy issues~
*wordless cat screaming*
Ouch
Well, in this case, Toaster has a point. I just googled "clown fetish" and believe me or not, it has a name (coulrophilia). So it's probably a thing.
Yeah, bananas have that effect on ponies...
Rethinking one's spirituality, I mean.
A minor nitpick: Don't use "plot" when you mean the pony's behind. It was funny back in 2010, but now it's an old meme.
Getting a little desperate here, huh, Toaster?
Well, I´m past pissed that Toasters father did not get ripped limp from limp or that we never saw Pinkie admit her whore issues came from her mother but that aside, this was an really enjoyable, WTF inducing read.^^
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Ah! That bullshit game, I remember all those nights playing it. Good times, good times.^^ Now this sentence of yours makes much more sense since it basicaly means "My life!"
Huh. They're all insane.
Well played, Unwhole Hole.
I was looking for a quick clop, this pops up in the clop section, and now I'm crying from the feels. 
Well done. This is a lot more satisfying than the unwholesomeness I was planning before and I'm really glad to have stumbled upon it.
"Yulbee Cummingtonite" what is this, Leisure Suit Larry? I appreciate that!
Toaster is out-Pinkieing Pinkie and I love it. You're doing a great job at developing a seriously abnormal protagonist.
I started reading this fic under the presumption that there would be no sanity found within these digital pages.
I've not been disappointed yet.
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Why am I not surprised to see you reading this ?
6 hours that is how long I have been rotating between reading this and playing fallout 4. What has my life come to?
p.s I loved it
Very silly.
Thanks!
heheh
Aww scoots cares for someone she has hope for her
This story is funny. You're a funny guy
7299747 Thank you.
Rarity was mistaken for a prostitute...
I thought you said this was the unfunny chapter.
“What about that Flash Sentry?” asked Fluttershy. “He seemed nice.”
“Yeah, I considered him. Except when I did, I got so many complaint letters that bringing them in nearly killed Derpy.”
ha
You should write more stories like this, all the character were equally off beat, making the whole world feel cohesive. This was a fun little ride while it lasted.
*claps*
I cant imagine amount of random stories you have to read, to write this one XD
A really great story I enjoyed tremendously.
For some reason, this reminds me of the movie "Tank Girl"
This was...very strange. Picked it up because I realized I'd yet to read one of your comedies, and it's...well, it's very you.
Reading it in one go definitely gave me some mood whiplash, going from the funny to the melodrama to giant robots controlled via lewding, but hell that's true of a lot of your fics. Or maybe it's just that I tend to binge your stuff, so I get it all in giant mixed doses. :V Some of the funny sections were downright maddening, the density of puns, jokes, references, and general bullshit so high that it was nigh overwhelming. I approve.
While these early stories of yours aren't quite as polished as 485,000, the bits of interconnected continuity liven things up some.
FIVE YOU LITTLE SHIT
This got me really good.
While this story really does earn its random tag, it is also depressingly heartwarming as well.
My only critical opinion is that the over the top violence seemed rather out of place. Particularly when the 'bad guys' show up, they are actually incapable of being hurt. Just my opinion of course.
Somewhat odd reactions to her, really. Her career is recognized, regulated, and licensed, but everyone seems shocked about it. Obviously Toaster's not helping her own case, but it still feels odd. Ah well, questions for later.
A sheep named Loving, heh. I paused reading just to guess that "Loving ewe" is going to be used.
I smell the darkness lurking ahead.
I can't help but think of another type of creature that uniformly matches Toaster's color scheme and also needs love.
Wow. Toaster is such a good mare to make that stallion understand the sanctity of marriage