Close to You

We all have dreams that we wish would come true. But, as Lyra soon finds out, some dreams never come true.

If you wish to kill me, can you at least make it quick and painless?

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Vargras

Vargras #1 · Nov 25th, 2011 · · ·

How about you actually fill the intended purpose of the story description box, and put down the story description instead of essentially saying "I made Lyra straight lolol"?

Until you do that, you might dissuade quite a few people from even reading.

Gypsy

Gypsy #2 · Nov 25th, 2011 · 1 · ·

straight Lyra you say? straight Lyra is best lyra

Azarune

Azarune #3 · Nov 25th, 2011 · · ·

Was kind of hoping for a happy ending.... But to each their own. Well written though!

#4 · Nov 25th, 2011 · · ·

Seaponies....

Seriously, just a couple mistakes here and there, and the repetition of some words are an issue, but a small one.

Aside from that it was well written, and what the hell, i enjoyed an alternate interpretation of Lyra and Bon Bon, i enjoy straight shippings more, but that's just me

gets all the mares

LewisClarke

LewisClarke #5 · Nov 25th, 2011 · · ·

No flames here dude, I have no problem with this, you've got my stars. Nice work!

paxtofettel

paxtofettel #6 · Nov 25th, 2011 · · ·

39884

Eh, I want people to know what they are about to read before they start sending me comments complaining about how "Lyra should be with Bon Bon" and all that crap.

manzo1239

manzo1239 #7 · Mar 26th, 2012 · · ·

40585 hey umm just a suggestion your story was beautiful in grammer emotion and character, and I know this could be a little much but could you like write a maybe a alternate ending with straight lyra not that it was bad, the emotion was PERFECT its just I felt a little heartbroken so if if its not to much, I Love straight Lyra its an awesome change

paxtofettel