WOOOOOAAAAAAHHHHHH.................Shot just got DARK! The Gore tag is well deserved. Twilight's gone off the deep end.

For the author: are you trying to hint at something with the first Dragon Lord's appearance? A possible descendant, perhaps?

That was fucking perfect!

8078040 With that blasted tree, I wouldn't be in the least bit surprised if it had taken that dragon's only surviving egg after having the ponies destroy the rest as a hostage.

The tree and all it has made is the greatest accumulation of evil that world has, to free the world a far greater evil is needed.

8078040 All shall be revealed in time my good man.

I can safely say that this story is finally itching that dark story itch. Looking forward to the next chapter

Ah, this is so good

Though I had a bit of a funny thought with what would happen if Spike accidentally burped on the tree of harmony.

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tease...

so... someone other that luna projecting someone into a dream?

I feel so bad for Twilights family

espeacily sense she is a crazy killer

8078051 or... that dragon ha d'purple' scales right?

8078228 In a sense, though not in the same way Luna does it.

Some individuals believe that the dream realm is the only barrier keeping the spiritual beings that have left the material plane from returning, also it is their unfulfilled desires that keep the stronger ones around without a anchor to maintain their simulated 'cognitive' processes.

Well, there goes my lunch.

....and my sanity.

And now begins Twilights real test. Can she keep the line between fantasy and realaty from bluring.

8078520 really?

From such a tame thing?

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NO! It comes from the fact that she went from scared to menacing in 10 seconds flat!

Wait.

8080125 i think she was cute there

8080280 I'm currently working on fixing these kind of errors, if you want to pm me the other errors you found in that chapter I'd truly appreciate it.
Edit: upon looking at that chapter, I've done a complete rewrite on it up to my more current standards. It's probably still has errors, but i think its far more fleshed out than it was.

If I were to do this fic over again, I would have done this story in first person. I was talking with a buddy of mine and we came to the conclusion that some of her internal logic isn't coming through in the older chapters. I found a compromise in the most recent chapter for that, but I probably should go through the older chapters and apply that answer to the older chapters to flesh her out for the audience.

8080434 In a way, that was entirely intentional and exactly why I picked the amulet for her in the earlier chapters.

good good twilight, I can feel your anger

I was actually wondering at the end, where was Luna but then I remembered she is still on the moon lol. Another great chapter.

Spooky.

Ok twilight here's your gold head band with a green heart on it and black tank top.

Your gonna need it.

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Twilight's planned for quite a lot, though as the old adage goes "No plan survives first contact with the enemy."
Question is who would be tough enough to be qualified as "the enemy?"

Hope you've enjoyed my story so far! Your play by play comments are really entertaining to go through.

This dream however. Something had changed his sister. Something had twisted her into a crazed homicidal maniac, forcing him to kill himself right there in her room while saying she loved him. That dream had felt so eerily real, like he was actually there feeling every second of agonizing pain she put him through. Wasn't ponies supposed to wake up when they felt pain?

Oh you have no idea

That darkness... oh yas!

Night Get

Night get

That was an interesting dream they all had.