OK, HOW DO I LIKE THIS TWILIGHT MORE THAN CANON TWILIGHT?! THIS IS ONE OF MY TOP FAVORITE STORIES ON THIS SITE!

Did you base Grogar's backstory off of whatever it was in the Generation he appeared?

8068837 All shall be revealed in time my good sir.

As you can imagine, Gen 1 only gives so much in the way of source material. I Incorporated what I could of course, but after that I crafted his backstory from the ground up.

8068837 I think he was a G1 villain.

8068859 He was and what happened to him was as much a disgrace as the entire G1 was

Will this feature the other mane five,her family or the princesses

8068891 Yes, although they will not be meeting each other until much later down the road.

"...DO NOT UNDERESTIMATE ME YOU FUCKING NORMIE REEEEEEE!"
I thought of this reading while this line...
Regardless, great chapter.
Twilight is fantastic.

You know, the episode that showed the different time lines. Since the Original Six won't be the bearers, will there be another group that tries doing that? Like say Moondancer or such group becomes the bearers but would fail at some point.

i kind of want twilight to bring him back to life in the end just to enslave him make him teach her more, and so she can put him in clown suit

Tears of joy were shed at the beauty of this story so far

"I am not weak!"

"Then prove it!"

8068857 I like his origin story, very GoT.

8068837 I think it's because she isn't hindered by a weak-minded fools like Celestia that makes us like her.

8069179 That would be hilarious.

Such a good chapter and story but I fear spike is getting left out a lot.

8069555 Spike will definitely get his time in the lime light. Right now he's still a little infant though.

8069504 Never watched/read game of thrones, but I'm flattered with the comparison. Bastard children were often maligned in those kinds of societies, which is where I drew the idea from.

Don't get me wrong this story is greasy sweet, but spike should at the very least get some attention and I hope it's soon or I may lose interest.

8069555 aye but he will be more important in later chapters or so i assume.

8069728 That'd be a shame. Like I said he'll get his limelight, but he's not really old enough right now. i can't reveal more without spoiling things.

Shadow of doubt, thanks for your vote of confidence

That's understandable

GO TWILIGHT ,YOU CAN DO THIS
show that old goat who's the real evil in this world

This is fucking awesome!!! Love these kinds of stories, keep it up

O, Twilight what will you do? now that your on your own.
No cat, whit tips and tricks to aide you.
No dragon, to buff up and defend you.
No amulet, to silence your consciences guilty.
O, Twilight what will you do? crumble or twist fate to your own.

Twilight is turning into a world of Warcraft villain, keep it up

And thus the training wheels come off/the tutorial ends.

I really like the story. The bad guy are not one-dimensional, the story is original and you put just enough details in it. Continue like that !

...Do not underestimate me!"

I see that Twilight is pulling an Anakin. We all know how that fight ended, don't we?

Glad to see Twilight lose the amulet. It was really stifling her character, in my opinion.

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Yeah, he became Darth Vader.

Now the true test begins young Sparkle.