This story is a sequel to The Price of Harmony
Seventy years after her father's death, Princess Umbra daughter to Commander Bolt and Princess Luna, seeks out a solution. The Griffin Kingdoms threaten war, but her mother and aunt refuse to fight. Unfortunately Princess Umbra who is sworn to protect what her father gave his life for, decided to take matters into her own hooves, claiming the throne, banishing her mother and aunt, and destroying her threat by establishing forced peace not only on The Griffin Kingdoms, but the entire world, and all with her new name, Thundaga.
However, five hundred years later, a pegasus names Cirrus emerges from Ponyville, and with him, a new hope, for he carries a power that he doesn't understand. Now he, an ancient dragon, an evil enchanter, and an ancient hero now must unite the nation and face the tyranny of Thundaga, and spread peace as was fabled by The Third Commander.
Pre-Story Comic The Ballad of Thundaga
Loved the previous story mate, and I'm looking forward to this one.
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thx I hope you enjoy it.
Wow, I didn't see this coming, hope It'll be as good or better than the previous
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I hope so too, from my notes it will be great but I know everyone has their own opinion.
Mmmh as good as i remember Priceless. To be honest tho i was worried where this was heading when i read the description but now i understand, still tho commander's daughter doin that to celestia and luna kinda annoys me, oh and the fact she even use commander's sword as her own that gets to me.
But other than that i am looking forward to more, good work.
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I am too, I've been excited for this one since a few days after I started taking character notes so I guarantee this one will be an interesting tale full of surprises. I hope you will enjoy it.
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Oh knowing your work i am sure i will, even if the charred stone was saddening but brilliant.
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thx I'm glad you enjoyed that one, I was disappointed to put it on hiatus for so long but I was still happy to finish it.
I'm happy you enjoy my work it always inspires me to write more. thank you.
Omg did he all ready bring back star bolt!!!! Update please you are killing me!!!!!
( but no pressure take your time :)
CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER
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I'm glad you enjoy it so far.
Currently I'm at a military training ope so I'm afraid there won't be any updates for another week or so, but I'll have it up as soon as its finished.
Will Thundaga be the only guy in this story who's named after something from Final Fantasy?
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yes, but the name come from almost every RPG there is.
Really good story. I love reading it. I hope for more in the future
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I'm glad you like it so far, still more to come along wit a few surprises
Ok...I didn't expect that to happen. Now who else will rise from the dead, plus how did she "Gem Stone" rise from the dead?
Besides that, Great story. It was fantastic
, keep on writing, your awesome
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Thx I'm glad you like it so far.
As for Gem Stone... lets just say Zine had a hoof in this. although every forbidden spell had a price to be paid.
that all I'm saying for now
7631025 Thanks for sharing and your welcome
I'm already pondering on what might occur for the next following chapters in your series 
I absolutely loved this chapter, I'm rather curious on what might happen in the next chapter
. Keep up the good work, I'm loving it
Also YAY
I'm the first to comment 
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thanks I'm glade you like it
also just to let you know, the next and chapter after are going to be good. just saying lol
7799842 looking forward to it
This was a fantastic read, I absolutely loved it.
I can't wait for the next chapter
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thx
the next is just as good and will be up soon as my proofreader finishes with it.
7846434 Awesome
, can't wait 
Wow, First to comment. YAY
I loved reading this chapter; it was really well constructed to keep me reading without my mind wondering elsewhere. Well done
You did an excellent job in writing this chapter 
Finally, we now know Zine's backstory, been waiting for a while to "hear" his story
I Can't tell you how much I loved this chapter. It was a fantastic read, I loved every single bit of it.
I can't wait for the next part of this story, it's so awesome
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to be honest I was a little surprised anyone liked this one, although it did progress the story it seemed a little dull to me which was why zine spiked it up with plenty of jokes, but then again I tend to look down on simple chapters like this since it didn't contain many of the big moments that take pride when writing (zine's origin story for example). but either way I did enjoy bring in in more decedents of the Main six that share similar personalities. the next will be similar to this chapter but the one after will be intense... I just finished a major segment on that and I cant wait to finish it.
glade you enjoy the story so fare and I hope you enjoy the rest of it too.
7921006 Oh, I will
BTW best of wishes for the next chapters you are writing. 
I'm sure it will be just as awesome if not more
MAN, this was an awesome chapter. You sure know how to write an addicting story
Again you've done an awesome job in writing this new chapter, well done
Anyways, I can't wait for the next part of this story
I'm so sorry for saying the same thing over and over again
, but, I really love your story 
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its ok, I always look forward to comments from readers, even if its often the same thing.
Either way, hearing that people love the story always inspires me to continue on, so even if you say the same thing every time, I will always appreciate it.
It may only get irritating if its an obvious cut and past of the last. lol
I'm glad you enjoy it and the next should be up soon, which will cause a huge shift in the story so be ready.
7941691 Can't wait
YAY
NEW CHAPTER 
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this one and the last were finished within the same week, but my proofreader only had time to do one then and this one a lot later. the next is in its pre-proofreading stage b4 sending it to my proofreader for final proof.
sorry it took so long.
its gonna be good
I think you meant "made" instead of mad
Besides that, I really enjoyed reading this chapter, it was exciting, and it was packed full of action. I especially didn't expect Thundagas reaction at the Wonderbolt academy, socking
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I believe that Thundaga is losing her mind
Thank you for making this story very entertaining and unpredictable. I'm looking forward to the next part of this wonderful story
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thanks for letting me know of the mistake.
I'm glade you liked it, thus fare the story has been good, but I did notice a lack of hatred towards Thundaga that most characters would suggest since she is the villain of the story. so even though it was a bit of a last minute addition, I decided to give both the characters and readers more reason to hate her, not to mention it didn't change the story too drastically for the ending to be vary different and it also demonstrates a little more as to how powerful Their foe truly is.
As for Thundaga's mind, that sudden change will be better explained in the next few chapters as well as the crazy plan that both cirrus and zine will formulate to counter this foe. needless to say I am enjoying this story just as much as you and my only wish is that I could draw what I'm seeing as I'm writing so you could have some awesome art to go with it.
Needless to say as always I enjoy your feedback and comments to this story and hope you continue to enjoy the rest.
7972345 Your welcome
and I will
Honestly, you've done a fantastic job in creating the last 2 chapters and setting the stage for the next one. I LOVE IT
There were a couple spelling mistakes however I still loved reading the story
i don't remember much but can't the element's of harmony reappear or they could make new ones as i really want umbra to live
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sadly the elements of harmony will play no part in the solution to this problem, but then again, Cirrus is meant to be the commander of peace, so one must wonder, we know what the commander of courage (Commander Bolt) would do, but how would the commander of peace handle it, also this suggestion is mention without knowing how Zine or Gem Stone's interactions would come into play. so all I can say is stick around, the fight hasn't begun just yet.
Another fantastic chapter to add to the list, it was a wonderful read
Honestly you're really good in writing these chapters for this story, I literally find it difficult to stop reading. A+ 
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thanks I'm glad you enjoy them. to be honest I try to keep myself as far into the story as the reader that way I wont ever post anything I regret and I can enjoy re-reading it after its finished.
lol I still sometimes skim through my other stories just because of curtain scenes like When Blade was first introduced in The Kings War, when Zeil kissed Zecora for the first time in Never Meant to Be. and other scenes like that. in this story I like to reread Zine's past. as corrupt as it seems, it is just one of those moments that really brings out the characters quality.
either way thanks for the comment and as always stick around, there is still plenty more left to tell.
Just to let you know I really enjoyed reading this chapter and I still think that this story is awesome
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Thx I enjoyed this as well, although this one and the last were supposed to be connected as one, but since DeviantArt (which is where my writing gets the most attention) wouldn't allow the text file since it was almost 10k words, I had no choice but to split it. it didn't impact the story any but it did annoy me since I thought it looked batter as one chapter.
All in all it still turned out great and I'm happy you enjoyed it.
Just one more chapter to go and so far it may turn out the same as this since, I'm nearing 6k words and I want to add an epilogue before ending the story completely.
There is a typo here. It should be peace, not piece.
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Thanks for the help, its been fixed.
8922161 There's also an error in the short description:
The last word is misspelled.
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Thx for the heads up sorry for the late reply. I'm currently on a mission for the national guard and my internet access is limited.
8988188 That's perfectly fine mate.
For some reason, i want to just hop in there and beat the living nightmare outa commander mist.