When "The Great and Powerful" Trixie asked you to be in a relationship with her, you were absolutely ecstatic. However, it doesn't take long for you to realize what the consequences of such a relationship really are.
Returning home from a long trip, you're surprised to stumble upon your friends, Flash Gloom and Gash Bloom. Upon meeting the two dullahan twins, they invite you to play a fun little game in the Weeping Willows theme park. So who is who?
Crystal Cocoon, a changeling princess who has fallen love with the ponies. Centipede, a changeling who wants justice. Chrysalis is just trying to help her kingdom. Celestia hates Changelings. Night Dance was the first changeling. This is their story.
Quite a different take on a story. I have to say that I enjoyed it and wouldn't mind seeing one with Pinkie as the voice...would love to have her bouncing around in someone's mind -- "ooo, grey matter!"
Hello everybody! In this chapter Trixie's speech is in bold italics. I hope you enjoy!
Minor detail I noticed without coffee.
'Great and awesome? Oh, so The Great and Humble Trixie is awe inspirering to you now? Maybe she should stay quiet more often,' Joked Trixie,
He speech is not bold so easy fix, minor typos, but nothing major. But first noticed thing is inspiring as highlighted Otherwise keep up the great work.
7144689 Tulpas refer to the pseudo esoteric tibetan (i think, but at least it sounds right) technique of manifesting an imaginary character on your mind through sheer force of build and training (basically meditating so much you start seeing this imaginary character).
In some mlp boards, it's a popular meme, where people act as if they were in training to be, or actually being able to see tulpa created in the fashion of a mlp character. There are stories about tulpas coming up badly, and becoming true nightmare horrors.
I wasn't saying the story was bad, but rather relating it to something I thought known on the pony fandom to some extent. It kinda came off that way for me. I'm quite sure I'm not the only one. Probably.
Quite a different take on a story. I have to say that I enjoyed it and wouldn't mind seeing one with Pinkie as the voice...would love to have her bouncing around in someone's mind -- "ooo, grey matter!"
Minor detail I noticed without coffee.
He speech is not bold so easy fix, minor typos, but nothing major. But first noticed thing is inspiring as highlighted Otherwise keep up the great work.
7126901 I didn't even notice this stuff! Thank you!
This is a very odd story. Very odd, but intriguing. I shall see where it goes before I pass judgement on it.
Someone botched his rolls crafting a tulpa.
7144653 I. . . What? I'm sorry, I don't mean to be rude, but what?
7144689 Tulpas refer to the pseudo esoteric tibetan (i think, but at least it sounds right) technique of manifesting an imaginary character on your mind through sheer force of build and training (basically meditating so much you start seeing this imaginary character).
In some mlp boards, it's a popular meme, where people act as if they were in training to be, or actually being able to see tulpa created in the fashion of a mlp character. There are stories about tulpas coming up badly, and becoming true nightmare horrors.
I wasn't saying the story was bad, but rather relating it to something I thought known on the pony fandom to some extent. It kinda came off that way for me. I'm quite sure I'm not the only one. Probably.
7150375 Oh. Well I've never heard of it.
Well this is different. Wonder where it'll go
7323460 Where ever the wind takes us!... This is a long way of saying I have no clue right now, since I only work on it once in a blue moon.
Ok, I'll bite. Next part please
7686473 Coming out soon!!
7922318 yay!