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The Psychopath


My very first (self-published) book can be found on Amazon Kindle for 5 or 12 paperback! If you love dragons, give it a look! https://www.amazon.com/dp/B0CSM7QQ2M

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Part1:From man to mare
Part2:From man to mare: chaotic convergence
Part3:From man to mare: an aching heart
Part5:From man to mare: Time to tell

Derry, now Silver, had a little "issue" during Hearts and Hooves day. Both he...erm...she...and Cyclon now have to deal with the thing that "Silver" feared since becoming a mare: being pregnant. As a man, the thought of pregnancy was reserved for women so he never thought that it would affect him afterwards. Hopefully, with the help of the six, she'll manage to deal with eleven months of swelling up, but will the introduction of a little face actually manage to break the barrier surrounding "The hermit"s heart? And will Cyclon retain all of his motor skills and the majority of his body?

(This one won't be short like the previous. After all, "An aching heart" was meant to be a cliffhanger story)


The pic is from HoovesLikeJagger. Cute and cuddly, isn't it?

Chapters (13)
Comments ( 343 )

I LIKE that story preview....

EDIT: I KNEW trollbrain was actually the true Silver....
too bad I figured that out only on the last chapter of the previous story..... stupid epic trollbrain....

EDIT2: wow....I'm actually thinking this fourth story in the franchise is currently the one up to the best start....
and I'm guessing that at the end of Silver's pregnancy, Cyclon will have a lot of broken bones and stuff but still alive

ha... austin powers reference:rainbowlaugh:

And now the awkwardness begins...:pinkiecrazy:

If its a colt he should name him Derry!

IT BEGINS.

AGAIN.

FOR THE FOURTH TIME.

Damnit tell them Silver's name is Derry already. I don't care how many times you say it won't be done, I'm still holding out hope.

That was awesome!
The 'Man to Mare' series is the best comedy I've read that actually has a decent plot behind it.
How long are you going to keep this series going? (or is this the last one?)

760667 I'm planning on making on fifth, which should be the last one.

Fuck...
Well better accept it then deny it and never move on. I still hate you Psycho as much as Derry hates the real Silver for making him pregnant but if I don't accept this then I won't read this so better do it and get over with this.

Fuck you Psycho

761635 I'm not Psycho. I'm just spreading the Illogic with him.:pinkiecrazy:

761638 ...
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But then WHO THE FUCK are you if your not Psycho?

LOL Are you the Giga Sparkle that is trolling Derry?
*realisation*
oh god no, OH god No, OH GOD NNOOO!!!!!

761728 Oh good
You made me worry there.
So WHO are you then.
some guy on the internet who writes storys for entertainment?
HUM...
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761982 That was once before he became The Psychopath, what happend was he became corrupted and evil and joined th world of Illogic with I wanted to join but he got first and now he is Psycho.

DAmn you *shaking fist*

762013
..........................................................,.................................................... O_O
WTF

762015 Corrupted? No. Evil? Certainly not. The Illogic is much different from the Insanity, for that, you can trust me. Silver Dragon has had many things to tend to, so I've gone along the sides of The Psychopath instead.:pinkiecrazy:

762094
0_0 .........
okey

Hey when will the next chapter of The True Psychopath arrive? That was a real good story

762104 You mean the sequel? I still have much to develop on it, so you won't see it now.

762112
How did I know you would do that?

And now for something completely different...

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B.T.W., great start to the 4th chapter of a great series (Trollbrain should be like "U MaD bRo?")

Waiting on the next chapter. Keep up the awesome!!

Hmmm... Should I feel pity for Silver or laugh at her expense? I can't decide...

762800 You sir are a genius! Oh, you poor dear... MUAHAHAHA!

This is the first thing I read after two days without internet

You do not deserve those dislikes my friend. This story is great!

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"Isn't that right little boobyboo?"
In story: boobyboo
In reality: boolyboo

DAFUQ PSYCHO
Explain yourself

Very nice chapter. I see that the trollbrain is still in effect, and that's nice.

Oh, the hilarity is starting early is it? Good...

765672 and my sis told me that she can turn on wifi from her phone... now I'm gonna catch up on some reading

First thing I read among the other stuff I need to catch up on

Silver's jimmies' status:
[ ]Unrustled
[X]COMPLETELY RUSTLED

Derry while childbirth:
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Good, good ending. Did Silver go into unconsciousness after the Doctor said Its a...
Anyway how much have you come on The True Psychopath (trilogy)?

774070 THe true Psychopath? The one shots are just mini-stories. They don't actually affect the main story-line. I'm planning on making a rather huge one-shot depicting Psycho when he became the sisters' foal-sitter up to the point where he became The Psychopath, but it's not for now.

"I swear, if I had hands, I'd tear off your face and eat what's behind.

SOUNDS LIKE BATH SALTS TO ME

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I mean the sequel to The True Psychopath. You know after he made a home-run with pony chrysalis. It was quite clear that there would be a follow-up for it.
I was just wondering how far you have come, But it looks like your making a prequel for the story. Good, I need some backstory

774137 the drug kind that makes u eat peoples face in florida

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