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I had everything a guy could want in life; the dream job, two best friends, and an amazing supporting family. My two best friends and I opened up an automotive customization shop together a couple years after finishing college, and the three of us enjoy all the little things in life. After a decision causes me to lose everything I hold dearly to a dire change of events, I can honestly say I've been having quite a difficult time trying to find both myself and my belonging once again. I miss everything and everyone; yet, this new world keeps me striving to better myself for the ones that live here.

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o.o I like where it's going so far. Take my thumb, sir.

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Also, I possess the first. ^^;

Kinda was hoping all of them would be there...

Also, mechanic in equestria... w00t

Ugh, my biggest pet peeve. Missing tools.

I KNOW THAT FEEL BRO.

Davin is not the only Guy to name his Car/Truck after a Pony: I named my 2010 Chevrolet Aveo after Scootaloo! :scootangel: I even named the Engine the LXV-ScootaDrive! and all because I found out at 2000 RPM, my engine made the same noise Scootaloo's Wings made at the Beginning of "Show Stoppers"!

Good chapter.

At least you've got work, I've had no business lately and plenty of time to write my stuff :derpytongue2:

apologise <- are you kidding me?

Imagine working on a Germane cart with hooves. lol

Good so far, keep it coming.

This was one damn good chapter :rainbowkiss:

I dreamt that I was eating a giant marshmallow, and when I woke up, my pillow was missing.

Good chapter, sad...

fucking brilliant man, fucking brilliant

keep up the good work bro

I disagree with your potrayal of Braeburn. He seemed like a pretty friendly guy in Over a Barrel, with the whole welcome them off the train and show them around town, and his willingness to come to a compromise with the buffalo. Otherwise, I quite liked it, despite you're going along with many of the HiE cliches.

Don't stop! I'm enjoying this so far!

:twilightsmile:

849494 Is it possible Braeburn has a crush on Rarity (or is currently dating her) and he's being territorial?

Anywho, this is getting good.

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If that's the case, than I could see him getting territorial if Davin was hitting on her, but otherwise he seems like to nice a guy to act so agressive. Do you think it'd be attractive to her if he threatened someone for a simple mistake? What kind of message would that send about his personality if he were to almost fight another over simply not paying attention?

853171 Rarity started it. idk maybe it'd be different if she wasn't being rude about it, and Braeburn came outta nowhere and acted like that.

Why is Braeburn in Ponyville anyway?

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I was about the ask the same thing.

EPIC! Love it! Liked and faved!

No chapter for another couple week...:fluttercry::flutterrage:

Liking the story so far. :twilightsmile:
Kinda sad I won't get to see an update for a while though, oh well, it'll just be better when it does update:pinkiehappy:

This is developing nicely. We already have two shipping options and he gets along with most ponies

Well, that explains Braeburn... or at least his(?) attitude.

ERMAHGERD CHANGELINGS!

It's unfolding nicely. Need more mechanic in-jokes... lol guess I'd be the only one getting those :facehoof:

I think Braeburn mode will change for the better if he had his head smashed in with a hammer:pinkiehappy:

Gavin, I've heard that before (Apollo Justice)

Wow, no thank you for Lyra? Maybe Davin was just trying to get out in a hurry.

There were one or two spots I found difficult to read. I'd go back and look but I'm tired. :rainbowwild:

Looking forward to seeing how things start to play out, and eventually unveil that obvious changeling of Braeburn...I think?:rainbowhuh:

The aurora disappeared and it dropped to the bathroom floor.

The word you're looking for is aura.

“This doesn’t even make any sence!”

That doesn't make sense.

Bon Bon facepalmed and groaned.

Facehoofed/facehooved. Whichever one it is.

oooohhhh Evil braeburn is a changeling or something evil!!!!!

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Thank you for pointing those out! It was late when I posted the last chapter:facehoof:

*proceeds to edit mode...*

Fix'd! :pinkiehappy:

957119 green glowing eyes and two places at the same time AND two of them at the same time?

If he isn't a changeling then i will eat my socks

This is by far (and then i mean really fucking far) the best human-in-equestria-turned-pony fanfic i have ever read. There is so much room for major events: rarity and lyra love rivalry, baerburn/ David showdown about rarity, realization of David once being human, David and lyra/rarity ship, David meeting the flim flam brothers and their super speedy cider squeezy 6000 (i beg you, on my bare knees. MAKE. THAT. HAPPEN!!!), David making some kind of major engineering reform/"discovery" to equestria, David meeting celestia and last but not least, this changeling plot you have started here

Keep up the good work bro and know that you have a fan

Wouldn't it be funny... if Braeburn was a complete douchebag, and his changeling counterpart was the nice one? :rainbowhuh:

Male changeling? :rainbowhuh: Or just another attempt from Crysalis to take over Equestria? :applejackunsure:

Whatever, moody Braeburn/Rarity situation aside, the story is coming along great! :pinkiehappy:

Yay! I love updates! Keep em coming! I love how this is panning out.

Yes, it is possible to have too much fun writing this thing. You're gonna OD man! :rainbowlaugh:

Finally she kisses him! Took you long enough Lyra!:flutterrage:

Great story so far! Looking forward to how you have the changelings come into play!

This story is amazing so far :pinkiehappy: but the tags could probably use some tweaking since there's the subplot with changeling's and some romance between Davin and Lyra, just sayin' :twilightsheepish: Can't wait to see more :pinkiehappy:

I don't know if it was changelings, don't they have GREEN eyes? Not blue?

You should make more use of internall dialogue for Davin. Don't just say what he's done, take more time to tell us why he did it, and how he felt about it afterwards.

I love seeing updates for this!

Can't wait for more!

Shit went down. Davin does have a bad habit of sacrificing himself for his friends. He'd give Dash a run for her money in the loyalty department.

This is interesting though. From the previous chapter I was just thinking he got in a drunken fight with Bronze and got his horn broken off. This is way more interesting (plus he won the fight!) and dem changelings man...

1002096 They look blue to me...:trixieshiftleft:

Hooray update!

So far so good! Just keep doing what you are doing. :twilightsmile:

Besides, if loosing my horn and my ability to perform magic was the

loosing my horn

loosing

loosing

loosing loosing loosing loosing loosing
One does not loose their horn! They lose their horn!

Y u so common loosing/losing mix-up!?!

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:facehoof: Guess I'm just going a little too hard on the O's. Now I feel like an idiot. Whoops. :twilightsheepish:

Thanks again for bringing this to my attention Sparklight. Back to Edit mode......

Um... great chapter and Davin has the right idea zzz

Damn good chapter. Too bad for Cherry Jubilee though, a week in changeling captivity has got to suck.:fluttercry:

As for Lyra- Took you long enough you silly mare!:flutterrage:

Ahem. Good story. Great progression. Pip-pip cheerio, and all that hulabaloo.:ajsmug:

i just fukking cryed

Nooooooooooo! i went to click for the next chapter...but it wasent there! THIS...IS...THE..WORST...POSSIBLE...THING!!!! :raritycry::raritydespair::raritycry::raritydespair:

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