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HiddenMac


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Big Mac has always had trouble expressing his feelings, especially when it comes to love. His pursuits always end in failure due in no small part to his shyness. He decides to write his secret love a letter to declare his feelings, but fear takes the best of him. His sister takes it upon herself to send the letter, but a question remains: who is his mystery mare?

Chapters (14)
Comments ( 17 )

Well that was certainly some read bait.. Who tf was it?! Or did u write with no intent of an actual mare?

H-holy crap! What...what an amazing chapter! I've never laughed so hard all week! You sir just earned a Like and a Follow from the Brony fandom's most elusive weird brony dude!

That dude being me, by the way.

Big Mac it's time to move away, since this involves Mares, your only chance is to plead guilty, and throw yourself on their mercy. In truth the best you can hope for is to be buried in secret so your grave will not be desk desecrated.

Choose your own ending, how unexpected. After Cheerilee was the only one to get two separate letters I figured it would go that way. As I don't generally ship that, I'm happy to see other options.

Big Mac, I'm sorry. You may be the most majestic stud muffin in all of Equestria, there is no surviving now. Your only hope is find zecora and have her turn you into a different pony.

Once you finish the choose-your-own-ending, you should have a chapter where he admits to loving somepony that the letter didn't actually get sent to.

That would such a cute story, Big Mac with the butterfly wings flying with Fleetfoot.

Drinking cider, destroying trees, and dating her brother. I wonder which one will drive AJ up a wall the most? :rainbowwild:

I can't see anyone falling for RD. Her ego is so huge, she has enough love only for one pony: herself. :twilightoops:

Good chapter. I kind of wish for a future story following this alternate ending now xD.

I was rooting for probably Twilight the most since the beginning of the story, but this was so worth it. Even as an alternate ending. :twilightsheepish:

Make sure to never leave her Mac.

Anyone else think this was wayyy too short?

I'm sure Luna already has pirate role-playing ideas in mind.

only to find that he couldn't express his voice; talk doesn't seem like it's the answer.

Luckily he has a choice...

Damn you... :trollestia:

I know that this says complete but I am a little sad that the rarity isn't going to be done I would have liked to see it especially sense apperently she liked him sense they where both younger

I liked all the pairings but this one.

Just realize that in terms of family you could be more closely related to a random person in your home town than Pinkie or Marble would be to Mac even if they are related.

Depending on country 1st or 2nd cousins are legal for marriage. Pinkie is much more distantly related than that.

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