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A pegasus has traveled to Ponyville in order to escape his past and his troubles. Unfortunately they have seemed to follow him to his new home. As disaster approaches, he will learn that all it takes to make a difference is to take the first step but he must face his fears, and his past along the way in order to save his new friends, Ponyville, and even Equestria!

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Comments ( 5 )

Just a trial of my first fanfic ever to see how it goes! Please let me know what you think so I know whether or not to continue.

Great first fiction! I loved how you used so much description. Can't wait for more, and TRACKED!:pinkiesmile: No matter how bad others say of OC fictions, I'll always remember this one.

I'd advise not using the pony generator as cover art. Many dismiss stories that use pony generator pictures as lower quality and automatically dislike them without even reading it. If I were you, I'd change the picture to something else. Anyway, I liked this one. :pinkiehappy:

801870 Thanks for the input! I really appreciate your support. I recently found out how much people dislike OC fics and I wasn't sure if I should even bother.

802027 Thanks for the suggestion! Being (extremely) new to this, I appreciate any advice I can get.

Comment posted by Mysterious Stranger deleted Mar 26th, 2013
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