• Member Since 28th Mar, 2016
  • offline last seen Oct 23rd, 2017

Shadowboltwriter


I am a fun loving brony that also enjoys writing stories.

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IMPORTANT UPDATE: this story is getting a huge rewrite, thus the cancelled icon. This is the new story: https://www.fimfiction.net/story/362476/a-ponyville-outcast

An accidental encounter with a certain six mares allows one stallion, whose lived next to the Everfree forest for years, suddenly gives him the opportunity to change it all. But all isn't well for him with a dark and tragic past still haunting him and his new life being tormented with uncertainty and one evil mare. Can Twilight and her friends, and maybe a few other ponies, do anything to help him?

This story begins some time before the season 4 finale.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 10 )

I kinda wanted to see how this played out, but the writing quality is too cringey for me... Sorry bro, but I'm out.

~Crystalline Electrostatic~
2:6_5/21/2016

7233901 that's ok, I've never posted the stories I've written before so quality isn't something I excel at. Although I did say I like to hear feedback so that's nice to hear I can improve on something.

I agree, this chapters wording could be a lot better, but other than that good job.:pinkiehappy:

:moustache:random moustache!

7338311 I do like to try and get detailed with my work so I'll make sure to look into that.

7339032 thank you, I'll remember that if I have a question

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