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It is the morning after the Royal Wedding, and Twilight Sparkle wakes up to expect it to be like any other day, until, instead of Spike, she meets a little dragonNESS named Spines who claims to be her number one assistant. She then finds out that her friends, everyone in her village, and pretty much everyone in Equestria, even the two reigning princesses, are all the opposite gender. What's more, they're claiming this is how it's always been. Even more so, her "coltfriends" turn out to be harboring romantic feelings for her! Will Twilight be able to solve this conundrum to change things back to normal, or will she be forced to adapt to her new lifestyle? Will Twilight's friends (lovers) bring their beloved egghead back to her senses, or will she be driven to do something everyone would regret?

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Comments ( 55 )

I smell shenanigans. I'll wait for a second opinion before reading.

Habadashery. Tomfoolery.
This is interesting... :rainbowhuh:

Well this should certainly be fun... Unfortunately it's late, so I'll bookmark this for tomorrow. :twilightsmile:

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I love the American Mcgee Cheshire Cat, so of course I had to use that picture. Sorry about that. :rainbowlaugh:

:rainbowkiss: This looks like it's going to be good.

This should be hilarious.

PREPARE THE POPCORN!

I'm watching this one... :rainbowderp:

Also, you should make your chapters longer, they feel rushed and aren't taking full advantage of the comedic potential that dwells within them.

The chapters feel a little short. You could probably get more out of these meet-ups.

Still watching.

Ok, Great premise set in a mix of canon and Conner Cogwork's On a Cross and Arrow. (I hope you got permission :pinkiecrazy: )

I have to down rate it though. While the idea is good your execution needs a lot of work. Try reading this post on showing. It's really helpful information.

Also, your chapters are painfully short.There's really not a problem with short chapters, but these are barely a page, if that. This story deserves to be expounded on a lot more than what you have so far.

Very short... but i like the concept so far

funny but very fast paced add more filler and detail

Chapters longer; at least 1k words.
Otherwise, this is be promising.

Liking the concept so far. Use of present tense takes a bit to get used to though. This is gonna be fun!:pinkiehappy:

756021 "On a Cross and Arrow"? Oh dear, I didn't think of that... :twilightoops:

Also, I'm actually writing this during a hectic moment in my life, so I might not work on it very fast, which might be why it seems kinda rushed. I really wanted to put this idea in my head out on a limb to see what people think of it, and since everyone here seems to like it :pinkiehappy:, I'll keep pegging away at it, trying to make the chapters longer.

I sense crazy Twilight in the future....

Hmm, this looks interesting, hope to see more.

I can't wait to see Rainbow Blitz appear!
:rainbowkiss::heart::rainbowkiss::heart::rainbowkiss::heart::rainbowkiss:
Also Elusive is one of my favorite colts with Rainbow blitz and Dusk shine
:rainbowkiss::heart::rainbowkiss::heart::rainbowkiss::heart::rainbowkiss:

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or maybe the everfree had a small fire in it near the poison joke and the cloud wafted over pony ville before heading up to canterlot!

And the only reason twi was unaffected is because um..... spike sometimes belches smoke in his sleep so she sleeps with an air filtration spell over her bed!... that makes sense right?:scootangel:

if not might be another story seed for me to contemplate.... an entire town of drugged ponies, oh the possibilities!

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it could be a alternate reality or a dream

1023470 Yeah, well, in this story, Discord's a girl named Eris. That's the only spoiler you'll be getting. Whether she has a role in this story shall be seen; I just got to get to it. (OxO)

I bet you the real twilight from this universe used a spell to switch places with the twilight from the girl universe so she could have some girl time with her friends in girl form.

MOAREEEEEEE! It took a freak load of time too...

Is Discord a girl now? I kinda want to see that.

1116321 in this universe everyone BUT Twilight is gender swapped so yes Discord is a female named Eris

Do we get to see a romance with Twilight and Trixie?:trixieshiftright:

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Hopefully not, I hate Twixie shippings.

1117118 That is an interesting idea. I'll have to see where I take this story.

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Ah, but it won't be a romance with Trixie. It will be with...

The Great and Powerful Presto!*

Also, is it possible that Prince Artemis* of the night may have some feelings for his saviour?

* The male names have been taken from Conner Cogwork's 'On a Cross and Arrow' and 'On a Whisper of Wind'

I love this, I hope this gets updated again soon

It's different from the norm, putting Twilight into the male world, so that's a bonus. I find the present tense of the story a little odd, just used to most being written past tense. It seems a bit fast and the writing could be slowed down to make things flow a little more, instead of zagging around like greased lightning or whatnot.

Please make more! :twilightsmile:
I'm planning to write a gender-swapped story of the new episode that's out, which is the crystal empire. But my grammar wont be excellent. :ajbemused:

great story, i shall wait for the next chapter(if there is one):twilightsmile:

when will the next chapter come, the suspense is killing me.

Comment posted by Amethyst Sword deleted Apr 16th, 2014

wouldn't that mean ore OCs have swapped genders

ex: amethyst sword=diamond shield

is there going to be more love this story

MOAR:pinkiecrazy:OR I WILL KILL YOU! It's driving me crazy! MOAR!

i think the story is cancelled until (when and if) the author comes back even then its not garentede

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