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When They Leave

After a long day spent with a good friend, Button Mash needs to get ready for bed.

An abridged version of my night yesterday, because this was literally the only thing that made me feel okay to think about today.

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RNBW #1 · Apr 7th, 2016 · · ·

*Hugs*

Foals Errand #2 · Apr 7th, 2016 · · ·

*hugs*

kooarbiter #3 · Apr 9th, 2016 · 1 · ·

your prose is actually pretty decent, but

you know, if you want to make a story about your own personal experiences or what not, that's fine
just not where I poni, especially because it seems like you just swapped the names of people with pony names and had like 2 or 3 nods to ponidom, and the rest is your self insert depression imprinting on an established character
I didnt know that this was this kind of story, i expected something different
oh and add an au tag pls

Thunderblast #4 · May 15th, 2016 · · ·

Great story, but it took me longer than usual to piece together exactly what was happening.

MixMassBasher #5 · Nov 11th, 2019 · · ·

Well that's dark...

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