New chapter!

7304242 Yayyyy!!!

everypony, make them all fall down on their knees and worship her, nothing but sex and pleasure and gags and bondage and obedience, total, absolute obedience, and no consequences ever

Would be interesting

Five months to go.

what will happen in five months

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what will happen in five months

Trixie's six months of servitude run out.

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oh, ok

fortunately, she has Spike coming to aid her...though he may need a little more charming to accept everything....

Oh dear, is this foreboding of Twilight going off the deep end again? Wanting more slaves because she thinks she 'deserves' them?

Now that is devious. The ability to make than cum whenever she want. Me likey.

7304456 There's a difference between wild sexual fantasies and actual desires - Twilight may fantasise about having everypony under her control long-term without consequences, but she knows there are consequences - what's happened with Trixie here is an example of an unexpected consequence - unthinking neglect leaving a pony feeling unwanted - a lesson she already had a chance to learn with Zecora.

So long as she actually cares about the ponies as individuals, rather than as props for her fantasies, she has limits on what she can fix, and on how far she can afford to go.

My money is on Spike being Twilight's personal scheduler, he's already her assistant and keeps track of most of her other stuff. I rather enjoyed this chapter, watching Twilight give in to her old habits even temporarily is quite enjoyable to witness and I love how she didn't remove that "Cum" command at the end lol I really hope that sees some later use on Rainbow it's quite enjoyable X3

Why did celestia heave twilights guards assemble in the armory? I really hope its not for a nefarious reason. Im realy enjoying seeing them all happy.

So good.... always a pleasure to read your writings.
Wintermist if I could ask a question. How far does Twilight's wanton-ness for micro-management go? I recall in FiMC that AJ and Rarity both want to be still attracted to colts, so they obviously have maternity plans, even if distantly in the future.
Would Twilight's want-of-control make her want to micromanage her friends pregnancies?

7304731 For likely harmless sexy-time shenanigans.

if you can stop Pinkie Pie telling you.

Tch, good luck.

She was going to have to tell him about all her lovers, this time. He was going to be confused, and upset. Particularly about Rarity. As for her becoming a Princess... she had no idea how he'd react to that.

Provided you explain it calmly and he has time to process it so he doesn't freak out, well I should hope.

They were going to have to talk, too. With Cadence, she could tell her more of the truth, but she still probably shouldn't let her know about the charm. Twilight couldn't help but feel guilty at the idea of hiding something so important, but instinctively, she was deeply reluctant to reveal what had been happening. Anypony that knew of a spell so powerful would surely have to do something about it, and the last thing Twilight wanted was another tussle over the charm.

Agreed. We already had that arc.

Oh, for Celestia's sake, she was going to have to tell her mother and father about her ascension, too... and Shining Armour!

Armor. Though I suppose it's the difference between British and American spelling.

Celestia just shouldn't be allowed to be having this much fun at her expense.

I disagree!

Celestia had promised to show Twilight some of the secret passages, too. At first, Twilight had hesitated, but the more she thought about it, she more she'd wanted a way to the bedrooms of the Princesses without altering the entire castle that the three were sleeping together.

Wise move.

She was beginning to find that being a Princess involved a certain amount of pragmatism.

I should think that's something you want to have anyway.

It also involved having personal guards.

Yeah. Saw that coming.

Why, if Twilight scorned the idea of having guards - at the very least, for her suite in Canterlot Castle - then they would feel as though Twilight didn't respect them, or the work they did to keep the Princesses safe. They would feel as though Twilight was personally telling them that she didn't need them. They might be right, of course. Twilight was well known for having defeated many enemies of staggering power, and that was before she'd ascended to become the avatar of magic. Why, with the power she now held, personal guards would only get in her way. Everypony could see that.

Celestia's loving this.

Twilight consulted her pocketwatch again

What, no wristwatches?

"I would never address you with anything but the full respect for your station, Princess Twilight!" he barked. A thread of dust trickled from the ceiling.

Think you can be a bit louder? I don't think they heard you in YAKYKISTAN.

"Because you are precious to Princess Celestia and everypony knows it, Princess! To protect you is to protect her, Princess!" Before Twilight could think of a reply, Autumn lowered his voice a notch to merely thunderous, and added, "I remember when you were a filly attending Princess Celestia's school, Princess. I will fight to protect you from all harm!"

Really?

"...Princess," he said more quietly, roughly. Straightening to attention once more, though not daring to pull his hand away from hers, he announced, "I am truly honoured to join your personal guard, Princess! I promise you, I will not let anything happen to you or those you care about!" Rough sincerity filled his voice, and his jaw tensed as he rigidly held his composure.

You're a good stallion.

"I once met a guard, and - for a minute, I thought he wasn't ever going to go back to his family." Because I accidentally wiped his mind so thoroughly, he didn't care about them anymore.

*wince* Yeah, that.

Autumn tensed, then slowly relaxed and declared firmly, "I understand, but I won't hold back in doing my duty, Princess. Thank you for your kindness and consideration!"

Heh. I think imma like this guy.

"Yes, Princess!" he bellowed. "For every guard here today there are ten that were willing, Princess!"

Damn.

A woman stepped into the room, and closed the door behind her. Her skin was deep blue, a shade darker than that of Luna's body. Two large bat-like wings lay folded against her back, and in place of a mane, she displayed a wing-like crest like a mohawk. Her armour was glistening blue-black, and stark yellow eyes with slit pupils gazed from beneath the brow of her helmet.

A Lunar Guard? Interesting.

Maybe if she ordered clearly, 'Be a nervous wreck,' Obscura might become less nervous out of sheer confusion.

Worth a shot.

Jerking in surprise at the question, Obscura shook her head rapidly. "Princess Luna's personal guards. We would never tell anypony anything about it."

Good.

Obscura blinked again, a look of confusion on her face, before she spoke slowly. "Princess, you and the other Elements of Harmony - you brought our Princess back to us. We waited a thousand years for her, and you brought her back. The real her, the way she used to be. I don't - how could you not understand that there is nothing we wouldn't do for you?"

Nothing, eh?

"I am sorry, Princess Twilight. I do not know what you are suggesting, and I would never betray any confidence my Princess has placed in me."

Hm...

This was what Celestia had described. The weight of a pony's heart in your hands.

Just as easily lightened or crushed.

In return, Twilight had stood posed, nude, while Diorite had shaved her for Celestia's pleasure, then Twilight had masturbated Chert, Diorite's cousin, to orgasm all over the guard-captain's bare tits.

Oh wow.

Diorite nodded, having anticipated the question. "Yes, Princess. I am one of Celestia's most experienced guard-captains. I have been present for every major engagement that has occurred in Canterlot city in recent years, and I have seen you in action. I respect your achievements. You will need a practised hand to guide your new guard unit, which will require considerable guidance and oversight to establish from scratch. I firmly believe that I have the skill, the knowledge and the ability to create a professional guard force in your service, Princess."

Useful.

A trace of pinkness darkened the grey of Diorite's cheeks as she replied, "I couldn't say anything about that, Princess."

Apparently, yeah.

"But - I don't have a personal scheduler," protested Twilight.

And trust me, she'd be scheduling the scheduler by the end of the week if she has her way.

Trixie jumped, her hand jerking away from between her parted legs. A small ceramic razor clattered into the granite bath, sliding to a stop among a thin film of damp suds. Jerking to her feet, Trixie tried inadequately to cover herself, and the half-scraped away foam between her legs. "Mistress! I - Trixie wasn't expecting you!"

Um...

"Yes! Yes, of course! The magnificently sexy Trixie is just fine! Nothing to worry about! Punish this lying bitch, Mistress, bend her over and spank her till she isn't blue anymore!" A look of furious realisation came over Trixie's face as the words kept coming against her will, and she clenched one hand.

I'm, confused.

"Trixie was shaving herself so you'd pay more attention to her! Okay, Mistress? That's what she was doing." Her tone was sulky.

That's it?

"You haven't even fucked her yet! You made Trixie be your submissive sex toy, and you won't use her? She's beautiful! Isn't she? I know you've had sex with all your other slaves, and then yesterday I saw they were all shaven, like you, so I thought maybe if I..." Trixie stared angrily at the floor.

Oooh, right.

Once again, and appropriately for her new station, Twilight had royally screwed up.

Yep.

A clump of soapy bubbles slowly slid down Trixie's thigh, and dripped onto the floor. Eventually, in a quieter voice, Trixie murmured, "You don't like my body, though."

Hardly.

"Let me finish. The thing is, Celestia and Luna, they have to stay here in Canterlot, at least most of the time. My friends all have reasons to stay in Ponyville, and even Zecora will be needed in the Everfree forest. But you - well, I thought you could stay with me. Travel with me, back and forth. So, you'd get to be with me the most, actually."

Interesting.

"You're not doing anything that can't wait, are you Rainbow?" Twilight interrupted smoothly.

"Uh - no, just building up an appetite for lunch. You want to do something?"

Yes. You.

Zecora immediately froze in place, then, with small, mechanical steps, turned to face Twilight. Sinking to her knees, no longer able to care about the livid lust flooding her body, she recited blankly, "In a mindless daze, this slave obeys."

Even tranced she rhymes.

"Yes, please, Mistress! Trixie would love to be fucked senseless by a Princess!"

I think you would love to be fucked senseless regardless of Twilight's alicornhood.

Oh, dear. It was just about possible she'd sexed Trixie to death.

I find this inexplicable amusing.

loose strand of white hair

I think it's more silver.

Rainbow lifted her head, her eyes widening. "Twilight - Mistress - mercy!"

"Cum," Twilight told them.

In other words, nope.

Five months to go.

And thus, the countdown continues.

This is really fantastic, I hope you continue this arc for a while.

Y'know, I would love to see Twilight in a bad, or no-nonsense mood sometime. Like, she and Celestia are sitting at a table, talking about Twilight's ascension and preparations, and Celestia's being her teasing, frustrating self. Out of nowhere, Twilight then orders Celestia to drop down to her knees, crawl under the table and eat Twilight out, as a means of shutting her up for a bit and some payback.

Even better if someone enters while Celestia is pleasuring Twilight and they're trying to remain unspotted. Or it could be Luna and she takes care of Celestia's needs by pounding her ass or pussy :p

Or she can just order Celestia to walk to her side of the table, bend over it while Twilight remains seated, and keep explaining while Twilight spanks her and plays with her.

7304904 The idea of what will happen to her slaves if they fall for someone else will need addressing, and it's coming. But the short answer is that if they got pregnant, Twilight would deliberately busy herself with something else and stay as much out of the way as possible.

Because you are precious to Princess Celestia and everypony knows it

Okay, so it's not exactly a secret.

The second guard had been a neat pegasus, pale blue, called Zephyr.

Who would have thought Fluttershy's brother would amount to being a royal guard some day!

"Lately, Princess Luna has been happier than she has been in months and we all know it's because she keeps sneaking away to visit you, Princess!"

Very much not a secret.

The door swung inward, admitting a golden-armoured earth pony. She was pale grey, with a cobalt blue mane and tail, and moved with brisk efficiency. Stopping in front of Twilight's tiny writing desk, she saluted crisply, and said firmly, "Guard-Captain Diorite, reporting for duty, Princess!"

Hoo boy, this will be awkward.

Well, it could have been worse; it could've been that guard she charmed. Or worse.... Flash Sentry.

Poor Spike. Wonder how he will take the news.

Oh, the irony of comparing this chapter with your new story.

7304389 Well, at the rate it's going, I'm sure those months of servitude will get an willful, unspecified extension.

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As for Celestia's side of things, something that could be fun is her alluding to the things that would've happened if Celestia had won the final confrontation. I believe that since Celestia was caught of guard a bit by suddenly regaining knowledge of the charm, she didn't really plan the things she did with Twilight for the long term. I mean, she didn't expect it to last somehow. That's why Celestia messed around a bit with letting Twilight have sex with other ponies.

With the final confrontation on, she could've been planning how Twilight's life would be after her loss, for the rest of her life or at least major parts of it. She could teasingly tell Twilight that she would've had Twilight marry her, or at least move in with her, so mindless sexslave Twilight could be at her beck and call. She could talk about all the depraved and hot stuff she would've done to her if she lost. The goal of this teasing would be to make Twilight horny from thinking about being under Celestia's control which would give Celestia some fun. Twilight's furious punishment afterwards would be worth it :p

I've also been thinking about Cadance, and imagine if she had a kind of spell that lets her see who someone is in love with. Like, she arrives a day or two before the corronation, to catch up a bit with Twilight. While Twilight is building up the courage or waiting for the right moment to tell Cadance about her lovers, it's not exactly rocket science for Cadance to figure out that Twilight is in love. Cadance casts the spell without Twilight realizing, and a small flies out of Twilight and flies on it's way to the object of her affections. Excusing herself, Cadance would follow the heart to AJ, since she was the first. With that settled, Cadance is on her way to the dining room or whatever when she sees a second heart fly by, which goes to Rarity. Thinking nothing more of it than polyamory between the three, she makes her way to dinner with Celestia, Luna and Twilight.... only for two hearts to impact Luna and Celestia some time later :p. Or imagine if the spell casting just sends out a bunch of hearts at the same time. Cadance's expression would be hilarious :p.

Still wondering if we're going to see some TwiDance and how it'd fit in with Shining Armor being a thing

Seems like it's all getting back into the swing of things. Looking forward to more.
Keep up the good work. Deus tecum.

I love the way you're writing Twilight's thoughts, it all feels so natural and in-character, and everything is overall so well-written that it's a real joy to read

I really can't get over hot fucking hot these stories are, fantastic job!

I feel bad for Spike, he's going to feel so betrayed. Also, installing a 'cum' command into Rainbow and Zecora? Yeah, that totally won't come back to bite her. All she has to do is say 'come in' or something like that while they are around and bingo, instant orgasm. That could be really embarrassing.

Phfff. This is where the rest of the story is.....

Loved FIMC and am really looking forward to getting around to reading this.

I really enjoyed Twi interviewing the guards.

7330139 I'm glad to hear it. It was something of a risk, devoting so much time to a pack of OCs, but it was important for Twilight to understand that these ponies are real people, each with their own reasons, rather than animate furniture.

well.... that was a very interesting ride^^ I love t when Twilight takes Zecora under^^

I kinda wonder when she'll use Celestia again though^^ and if shes ever going to put Luna under again too. Mindless, hypnotised Luna has got to be the hottest thing there ever was on this site ^///^

Continues to be one of the best (if not the singularly best) mind-control fics on the site. I'm personally not super into the dramatic themes, but the current level of them is just about right, so these opening chapters in the sequel have hit the exact midline I prefer. Yet unusually for me, I'll probably continue following it when it (given the Dark-Drama tags, inevitably) veers out of my wheelhouse, since the quality is so high and the content so niche.

You're doing good work, Wintermist. Keep it up, etc.

Your Trixie is perfect! Everyone seems to want to change her mannerisms when they write Twixie, especially if Twilight is dominating her. I've never seen the point, Trixie without her ego is hardly Trixie at all. And it's clearly possible to have an egotistical slave, as you've proven. Full marks, A+, Kudos, Looking forward to more.

Somehow I forgot to comment on this chapter when it came out, so I just wanted to drop by and say that I really loved it. It's great watching Twilight really let loose with her power, not to mention that poor Trixie finally gets some real action! You've done a fantastic job with Trixie's characterization in this fic; just the right mix of indignant/haughty mixed with submissiveness, both forced by the Charm and grown through her experience around Twilight.

Out of curiosity, what's the general direction of this story? Is this mostly, as the title implies, Twilight wrapping up her control, facing the implications, and sexy fun times, or is there going to be some conflict (other than Twilight worrying about her deal with Trixie)?

7423542 Twilight is Canterlot's new star! There's lots for her to deal with, enough to keep her busy past midnight to morning's first light. If you're thinking of serious trouble though, there isn't a glimmer.

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Dat tease.

7423614 So bacon pony is (not?) in the near future too?

Okay. Now that I'm caught up, I hate being caught up...
Found the first story a few days ago, and now I'm stuck WAITING for the next chapter!
I REALLY need to quit marathon reading...

You think Twilight would loan Luna to me once in a while? I could ask REALLY nicely!

7438253 "You think Twilight would loan Luna to me once in a while? I could ask REALLY nicely!"
>gets charmed.
> "You're happy to just have seen Princess Luna. You'll be a good and happily complacent worker."

7438827 Awww... That's just mean...
But I wouldn't doubt that's what would happen.

7438827 I'd expect something more along the lines of:

"I don't lend my toys, but I'm happy to let them play with each other sometimes." and an offer to charm you.

How can anyone be so sadistic yet so caring at the same time? I feel like a paradox like that would trigger Midnight Sparkle or something.

With three guys now in her direct employ, I imagine it's only a matter of time before they too are charmed. Diorite seems especially inevitable. I'm actually really interested in the excuses Twilight might conjure to charm other ponies, even if not for her direct slaves. For example, she might catch the Cakes in a bad fight, charm them to remember how much they love each other, and then watch their make up as her personal reward. She might also find a way to reward Spike for his loyal service. There are just so many possibilities.

Trixie had to know what she wasn't being fucked because she was attractive and available. She had to know this mattered.

Trixie had to know THAT THE REASON she wasn't being fucked WASN'T because she was UNATTRACTIVE

7594921 That's how S&M works. Well, how it's SUPPOSED to work. Not what you see in movies and crappy novels.

I'm going to do that a lot more in future, Trixie.

in the future

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Both are correct

Two interviews later, Twilight was beginning to feel a little frazzled. The second guard had been a neat pegasus, pale blue, called Zephyr. He'd told her about his part in the battle for Canterlot against the changelings, and with rigidly repressed nervousness, had explained that he'd always felt indebted to her for her role in uncovering the treachery of Chrysalis. Now he had the opportunity to repay her.

Oh... Twilight's personal guards, and Zephyr. I really, *really* need to make sure that my RPG players run into them next time. Gonna be full of laughs when players (who know who Zephyr is) run characters meeting his ego for the first time :)

It wasn't fair. It wasn't fair that dominating and fucking her slaves felt so good . She wanted more, and more, she wanted to fuck Spitfire, and Lightning Dust, she wanted to fuck the maids, Vinyl Scratch, Octavia, anypony, everypony , make them all fall down on their knees and worship her, nothing but sex and pleasure and gags and bondage and obedience, total, absolute obedience, and no consequences ever -

Oh no, how terrible and unfair it must be to want to enslave and fuck everypony and also be entirely capable of doing so for at least three different reasons. Twilight, you're going to have to try harder than that.

That aside, the sex scenes have taken a big step up in this sequel! They were by no means bad before, but they felt kind of separate from the mainline plot. Now the mind control is more smoothly integrated into them.