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Personally, I think Cutie Mark Map would have worked a whole lot better WITHOUT the brainwashing cabins, and the girls having their cutie marks forcibly removed. Since it basically turned Starlight's view into a straw man's argument.
And Starlight Glimmer keeping her own cutie mark was a Noble Lie, basically a contradiction that was needed to keep a community afloat, she realistically did need her magic to remove cutie marks, it's logical to assume she intended to remove her own last.
It was downright ANNOYING that everyone abandoned their world view as soon as "attack the messenger" was in play. (Even more annoying at how the entire changeling species all became nice people on the spot because they were offered more food.)
Trixie/Luna best BFFs. Seriously, you know how much I've been gushing about those two, and their interaction with eachother. I really want to see more between them, and have Luna manage to get Trixie to warm up to her, and open up to her, so that Trixie learns to 'like' a different pony aside from Twilight. Have a proper 'friend' who is not a certain pink pony who is friends with anyone, whether they like it or not.
I'd like to imagine that her face to face with her own self surprises her, but knowing you, your interest will be in having Trixie 'struggle' with herself, instead of finding a common ground with her former self :p. Hope you'll surprise me though.
Glad to see an update...hoping Starlight doesn't become part of the group
I really wish these were shorter and thus more frequent.
Looking forward to more Trixie shenanigans.
We have waited something akin to 256 days (I think) for this update.
I can honestly say... "The Torment was long-lasting."
Slutty Princess Celestia in pig-tails. Why yes, the world does need more of that.
Aw yeah!! I'm so happy to see you writing again!
Let's get to the goodness right away.
This has been nagging at me since chapter 9, when we saw Trixie studying her old diaries. Why does Trixie's old self figure into this at all? I can see why she fears she'll revert to her old ways like a person with a chemical imbalance going off their meds, but why is Luna suggesting that Twilight could let the old Trixie argue with the new one?
That process made sense for Twilight and her friends, who had been reset to an earlier state and allowed to progress from there for several weeks, resulting in two branching tracks of memory and the resultant personality changes that needed to be reconciled. But there is no such discontinuity to be bridged in Trixie's case. The deal was that after the punishment period is over, Twilight will lift the current compulsions and Trixie will once again be allowed to decide when she wants to leave – nothing about restoring Trixie to her old, pre-charmed state (if that's even possible without erasing all knowledge of the past six months). The one who will make those decisions is future Trixie, not past Trixie!
Whyever should past Trixie have any say in this matter? Her contribution to this future decision has already been made by her being the starting point for Trixie's development into the future Trixie that will make the decision, and that's all that past Trixie gets – because that's all anyone's past self gets. My own past, six-year-old self decided that when I was grown up, I would have ice cream for breakfast, lunch, and dinner. Am I going to let that little twerp rule my life now? Heck no! I'm having ice cream for breakfast, lunch, and dinner because I grew up to be a terrible person, not because I owe my stupid six-year-old self anything.
Hot damn, I do so love altered perception of reality in MC fantasies.
I thought that it would be difficult to recapture the amazing shenanigans of "Punishing a Princess", now that Celestia had been through it before and would suspect overly outrageous scenes of being faked, but this is just as good! Allowing Celestia to question her own perceptions yet be unable to tell what, if anything, has been altered – That's so hot!
(My little fucktoy just can't let go of her self-image as the important, neigh, indispensable Princess, without whose gentle guidance the entire country will fall apart. Well, she's going to learn otherwise, whether she wants to or not. Let me be clear, the only way you will be allowed to meddle in politics is if Luna becomes indisposed or she specifically asks you to handle something she genuinely can't. She's not allowed to ask you to handle something out of pity for you, nor out of mere nervousness for herself. Only a genuine emergency counts; something that can't be put off, truly cannot be handled by Luna herself, and can't be put right later. And that's how it's going to be until- … Well, I was about to say "Until I'm done punishing you," but… given that you're you, and both of us are alicorns, that could literally be forever. So, let's just say, "until we return to Canterlot," shall we?)
Surely you must speak in jest,
for though you may enjoy the show,
I would not put it to the test
that any guest would see it so. </zebra>
For some guests the best welcome would surely be to vigorously fuck them instead of yourself, and there may even be some rare exceptions where it's the right choice not to fuck anyone at all, but greet them with a nice cup of tea, for example. At least to start with.
The entire scene with Zecora and Celestia was amazingly hot, and Celestia putting her Olympian stature and strength to use in the role of a single-minded, brutally efficient fuck-golem was an awesome mental picture. I hope Twilight will explore this idea further at a later date.
I really liked the developments between Rainbow Dash, Lightning Dust, and Twilight. The fact that it's Rainbow, of all ponies, who calls her out on it; Twilight's internal wrestling with herself, as she faces the consequences of her actions; her instinctive recoiling when asked to submit, even temporarily, to somepony else as punishment; and Lightning Dust's reactions throughout. All of it was outstanding character development, and a lot of fun to read.
This should really take a futa turn at some point, have Twi start breeding some of her lovely slaves
8976185 Sorry to preemptively disappoint on that one, but I'm not intending futa to be part of the story. Certainly not breeding, at least.
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Old Trixie would get to argue with the new one for the same reasons as for Luna way back in that remote cabin. Just as it is not fair to the old Trixie to unilaterally permanently alter her, it is not fair to the new Trixie to unilaterally permanently alter her - as Luna emphatically pointed out back then, removing existing commands is every bit as much of a change as imposing new ones. Luna resolved this by having the pre-Charm version of her and the still-Charmed version of her argue about it until they came to a mutual agreement, at which point the resulting changes became unambiguously consensual. Having already gone through that with Luna, that model is the obvious solution for Twilight to use with Trixie as well.
In short, future Trixie won't exist until the decision has already been made.
Plus, if Twilight just removed the commands without such a reconciliation procedure, she'd be likely to put Trixie in the same predicament she unintentionally put Rarity and Zecora in.
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Agreed, Trixie and Luna is my favorite part of this chapter.
As for Trixie's eventual face to face, it's actually going to be partly inspired by a scene I wrote (in a PM, so don't bother trying to find it). I'm sure Wintermist will expand on it and change some things, but parts of it have already been showing up in some form. I don't know all the details that will go into the final official version of the scene, but while there's no way past Trixie will just accept everything without argument I think it's safe to say that Trixie is smart enough to realize that if she wants to actually convince her past self of anything she'll have to appeal to things her past self cared about. Whether she succeeds, and what decisions she makes... even with the caveat that it's just from my version of the scene, that would be spoilers.
Well, I'm certainly glad to see the whole infiltrator bit brought up again, Twilight realizing that someone got into her notes. And I'm even more looking forward to seeing her turn the tables on Chrysalis once this comes to a head.
But first we can look forward to OurTown and seeing the resolution of Trixie's... internship. I'm also very curious to see if Starlight's cutie mark removal spell can hold a candle to this actual Princess Of Fucking Magic (pun intended), instead of the show's Princess of making buddy-buddy.
*Squeals at the sight of a new chapter*
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Part of me honestly hopes Trixie's old self will at least demand to be freed of overt control. Something to shake up Twilight just coasting along.
Of course, the confrontation with Starlight will likely end up forcing her to confront their similarities. This Twilight and Starlight Glimmer are not that far removed from one another, down to the need for control and dominance. It's not even a manner of "This could be you!" but "This kinda is you!"
Mmm, golems as robots. Love golems so much; they get underused in fantasy settings.
Worth the wait!
So worth the wait, too bad I had to skip past all the fun bits due to time constraints but I'm loving the story progress, and I'm betting money on a certain Starlight being the one behind all this
I believe chapter 14 marks the first arc to be resolved, relatively speaking. Welcome back :)
Something's seriously troubling her.
Eh?
Ah.
Oh, that.
Oh, that's a poor choice of words.
Technically, she didn't do a thing to you directly, that was Snips and Snails.
I really love this story.
The one answer we all hate saying and hate hearing even more.
Now I kinda want her to meet an alternate version of herself so she can do just that.
Smart.
Oh dear.
Smart.
To be fair, it really is insanely hot.
I mean, she IS part Earth Pony, and the tallest pony in the land, it makes sense.
Oh, hi.
Technically, that's Fluttershy's bit.
And more fun.
You kinda do. At least she's self aware enough about it.
I love ambiguous phrasing.
That's kinda the idea.
Priorities, Rainbow Dash.
Fight, fight, fight, kiss, kiss, k-
-iss. Oh. Well never mind me then.
That's the idea.
I kinda prefer Lightning Bitch.
Her plan exactly.
Starlight Glimmer and Our Town.
Mmm, another fun chapter. I have a fetish for table-turning and dom/dommes being toppled for a bit, so it's always fun to see what new things Celestia is up to. Of course, I think I'm also a bit more into the bondage and restraint part more than most folks, so I was a little disappointed Twilight didn't get tied up or gagged for her spanking, but good chapter regardless.
I like that ending, I'm looking forward to getting back to a bit more...malicious? mind control in a bit <3
I want to see more evil mistress Twighlight.Shes so sexy like that
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Hay Twi gets to have some fun with starlight.
Love seeing this updated, keep up the awesome work.
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You do know that such a thing hasn't happened, right?
Fantastic! I had been missing this story so much. I hope it doesn't go as long without an update this time.
9002356 As a matter of fact, I've got the next chapter in proofing already. Project 'make these chapters shorter, ffs' is actually getting somewhere this time.
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I just want you to know I love Trixie so much in this fic, she's by far my favorite character and I just want her to be happy and appreciated.
Definitely a great way to reintegrate with this story! I'm really looking forward to how Starlight will turn out. When you teased her in the last chapter, it was still back when she was a villain! But now much has changed, and I can't wait to see what you've planned for that.
Also, I have to wonder if Maud will show up at some point...
This chapter is all about competition.
Trixie vs Luna
Dash vs Dust
Dom Twilight vs Sub Twilight
Oh, looks like Dom Twilight won, and the other battles are ties :-)
Right. Brat Celestia is also fighting ... actually, she just loses. :-)