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Chapter, go!
I can't wait for the next chapter. As I've told you, I find Ember's bits where she muses about how ponies 'work' to be highly entertaining and would love it if she does some more of it. Of course, with Twilight there to actually answer questions (when she's not dominating Ember into submission) those musings will probably be cut short a bit.
I wonder how Celestia will react to Twilight having had sex with Ember. Shocked? Surprised but wary since Ember knows of Twilight's dominance? Maybe it was her plan all along to give yet another jab to Twilight? If so and Celestia is indirectly responsible for Ember spying on Twilight's lovemaking, Twilight would just 'have' to find out and punish Celestia.
Of course, Celestia wouldn't risk such a thing with proper precautions, because of how much of a chess player she is, so I'd wonder what those precautions could be
Queue EVIL Laugh
8156213 I honestly hope ember joins the harem. It would be most glorious.
8156242 Celestia probably expected that to happen the entire time.
Curious which image inspired you to include her.
when should we expect the next chapter?
Exquisite as always. The waiting begins again.
So, When you pulled back from publishing this a few days ago for restructuring, It has to be admitted, the final composition was worth it. Great story, events, Celestia's quiet teasing... And now Dragons. dun-dun-dun
I'd like to ask, about Spike, since Ch 5 connection problems, Am I supposed to imagine him as a lanky not-quite-teenager in appearance?
Gods, I love your writing, Wintermist.
YES, DRAGON LOVE!!!!!
oh...uhh sorry excited...
The good: Finally a new chapter
The really good: kinky sex
The bad: It ends
The really bad: It ends when it's just about to start
The worst: waiting 2-3 month for the next chapter
Well fuck school I got shit to read!
Well that was a great chapter. I'm looking forward to ember... Maybe she gets the charm put on her to forget what she saw. Or maybe she throws herself at twilight's will and begs to be dominated like the bitch she is. That would be great. But it's all up to you my good sir.
Also "yes Twilight she's gonna be here in one hour."
"damn you woman! "
8156213 Finally! After so long! And you have Ember in here! That's even better!
Been a while, but I'm as anxious as ever. Celestia's teasing and ruling from the bottom, so to speak, continues to fascinate and entertain. It's almost like the white princess is a drug dealer, taunting Twilight to purchase the latest batch. At times its even hard to tell whether or not this teasing is malicious or not.
The talk about the piercings and it's implications of Twilight indirectly guiding the kingdom to follow her own sexual preferences makes me wonder. The list of those in Twilight's thrall seems to grow on a daily basis, be it for business or pleasure. I imagine the day is not too far off when Twilight's influence has expanded to the point where she can just take any pony in the streets at her leisure. Yet being a lesbian, what does this mean for the stallions? Will she fuck Mrs. Cake in the middle of the store and force Mr. Cake to watch and feel happy about it? I recall a previous talk where some of the mares expressed a desire to one day marry and have kids. Would Twilight really let them go, or would she just force her mares to share themselves between her and their stallions? It seems the temptation of the charm would make such a prospect too enticing to ignore.
Ember's observations and confusion over lack of an obvious leader was equally fascinating, especially regarding Celestia's hidden power. I absolutely love the way you've made her so subtly intimidating.
Considering the timelines and Spike's inevitable summoning to compete to be the new dragon lord, I can actually see Celestia encouraging Twilight to use the charm to arrange a marriage between Ember and Spike as part of a more permanent alliance between their races, using the temptation of the charm and the justification of a greater good.
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Ah, but Celestia is sort of backing up Luna now as acting as Twilight's conscience. Celestia won't stop Twilight from using it 'needlessly' like Luna might, but she advises Twilight to really think about it, or use the charm in a certain way for better outcomes. So far, she hasn't suggested it herself, so I figure Twilight would have to be set on using the charm on Ember/Spike, before Celestia would pitch in.
Then again, if the dragons found out about the mind control....
8156544 It definitely seems like charming Ember will be a reflexive response, tempting as it is as a fix-all solution, just as Celestia described it. Plus, while Celestia might advise against needless charming, there's no reason to think she wouldn't encourage it for some greater good, like a permanent end to hostilities between dragons and ponies. It also would fit really well how, despite being a slave, Celestia is actually using Twilight to rule two kingdoms.
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Well, despite all her teasing and such, Celestia doesn't 'want' to rule. She actually a big submissive (if I'm seeing everything correctly) and is happy to hand over power to Twilight.
And if you recall, Twilight still hasn't gotten her magic under control again. Casting the charm might be a really bad idea. Heck, the beginning of the chapter talks about how Twilight basically is without her charm now.
8156609 I get the feeling Celestia likes being a malicious submissive. Also, you kinda made my point. Casting the charm right now might indeed be a bad idea, but isn't a protagonist screwing up royally the stuff of good drama? Casting a faulty charm might require extra casting for damage control.
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If Twilight is backed enough in a corner, she would try to cast the charm, no matter the consequences. My first impression with this chapter idea was also with it ending in charming Ember.
But in this case, Twilight is smart enough to realize the potential catastrophy it could cause. If she fails, in any way, relations between the country are shattered, with possible war. If she succeeds and it comes out later, there'll be war. There's too many variables to decide, and Ember hasn't done anything but keep watching, which at least gives Twilight the idea that there's an interest.
This is everything I never knew I wanted of Ember. And I'm not even talking about the clop here.
8156665 I think it was more that the situation was so shocking that Twilight just forgot to charm her and experienced a comedic brain fart. Now Twilight will have to answer a few of Ember's questions, hopefully without giving away the charm's existence. However, if anything goes awry, Twilight will most certainly charm Ember and then go to Celestia for help.
This chapter in a nutshell
8156371 Well, I'm working on it currently, but I have admittedly slowed down a bit as the chapters grew longer. Say four or five weeks, roughly.
8156414 Yes, that's about right for Spike.
8156679 Writing Ember is really interesting. She sees things differently from the ponies.
8156359 It can be found on DeviantArt. Shy Ember, by FallenInTheDark.
A wonderful, wonderful chapter.
Loved it, as always.
The teasing at Celestia and Luna's eventual decorations continues! Maybe it's because it feels like a while since your last instalment in the series but I agree with Erebus in that this felt like a particularly well polished chapter.
Good luck with your competition submissions!
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I especially loved the bit about the collective noun for ponies being a hug. Someone should let her know that ponies tends to differentiate it a little more than that.
A group of earth ponies is called a herd.
A group of pegasi is called a flock.
A group of unicorns is called a hedgehog.
8156720 More interesting is that Twilight can now dominate Ember without the charm, which is going to be pretty mind-blowing for her - she pretty much has to go through with it now, but she doesn't have the safety net of Ember needing to obey her, so she has to be mindful of the possibility of pushing too far - yet if she doesn't push far enough, the consequences will be even worse...
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I'm hoping Ember becomes a submissive but doesn't join the harem. It's already unwieldily big, with a dozen or so ponies. They're already in competition for her time as is.
Also, she's got Rarity. Why not give Spike some way to find a happy relationship?
8156940 That is good as well. Either way I'd be happy.
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This? This is that good shit. I am so comically in love with this chapter.
The plot reddens
Oh dear, Embers going to be all, Im so wet, please train me, and Twilights going to be all, No, not until you show me what you can do with that long, thick, flexible, sensitive tail of yours.
Where Celestia just has to whisper in Embers ear. I have an Entire dungeon to play with.
Not what I expected!
I sense imminent charming or training. Great chapter.
Such a mean ending.
Makes us sympathise with Celestia :(
Oh I SOOOO Cant wait for the next chapter now!
8157094 That was simply terrible and in poor taste.
I loved it.
Well I never expected Ember to come into this, but it was a pleasant surprise.
MY GOD I CAN'T BELIEVE TWILIGHT SAID THAT. But I'm pretty sure that Ember will take her punishment like a good little dragon before our glorious Purple Empress.
Great chapter as always Wintermist! Well worth the wait for this expansive chapter. I can't wait for Ember's Punishment next chapter I'm sure that it will be most delicious
Oh i do so ENJOY THIS! please let Twilight charmed Ember, cause this chapter make me want to see more!
*Comes home from class and looks at inbox. First thing I see. Loud squeeing*
You're doing this on purpose.
Is slightly taunting the mare who can basically make you a doll with 3 words really a smart move?
I see.
Cadence?
... Ember?
You did that for the sole sake of fucking with her.
Dragons usually respect power and strength, bare in mind.
To be fair, she presumably was able to fight Torch and win so, understandable.
That's cute, you think Celestia and Luna wouldn't stop said country.
Not quite Celestia, but, whatever you say.
Ohohohoho you have NO idea. She may not have conquered Equestria, but she conquered the Princesses, that's for sure, and their conquest was NOT silent.
Nice work.
i see a very charmed Dragoness in the future. and that might actually be a good thing, since dragons are naturally magic resistant, charming Ember would help Twis control training. its why she always practiced new spells on Spike. a drgon his age would have D ranked resistance, while a dragon Embers age...probably a C rank...
Wow, you manage to live up to my huge expectations. Honestly, this series is one of my favorite books.
Please, for the love of all that is holy, do not go so long without an update again.
I really want to know how wasting a whole load of manpower collecting enough food for a full-grown dragon and making your lover go nearly brain-fryingly neurotic with stress, and then aggravating that with a prank spoon, is considered funny.
Aside from the continued antics of the slave who clearly isn't a slave, this was a very enjoyable chapter.
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Celestia should really get some punishment soon, don't you agree?
I can't even put it into words how well you're writting each of the characters. They all act so natural, so completely intone with their personalities from the show, and I would say that you make them even more interesting and developed than the show does. Your writing abilities are truly a gift, and I'm so glad that to see that you're still updating the story. Fantastic work!
8157693 Honestly, I wouldn't put it past Celestia that she gave Ember that room with the secret tunnel on purpose so things would play out exactly this way x)
8160255 For the love of Emeria, yes. Like, I love Celestia being in control, but this doesn't feel like a story about Celestia being in control. When we had that chapter of everypony taking a turn with the sun-princess, I really liked how her reputation and that aura of respect contrasted so well with her utter helplessness. It felt like glorious come-uppance for all that reasonable request horror.
Instead, we've just been getting more of the same villainous, insidious and bitchy Celestia from the first volume, except this time she's nominally submissive. Like, I do genuinely enjoy this story, but Celestia makes it hard.
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I do agree that Twilight has been getting soft on Celestia, letting her get away with things that cause her troubles. But on the other hand, Celestia continuing the game of chess between them, just as a submissive this time is very interesting to me. Twilight has to outsmart, outplay and outwit a godess and she's having success at it. It wouldn't be as fun if Celestia just rolled over and obeyed all the time.
Twilight has to work for Celestia's submissiveness, and that makes it worth it. And hey, the more Celestia acts up, the more punishment she gets :p
8160361 What if Twilight made Celestia forget very basic knowledge, and made her depend on herself to do basic things? Even certain social-norms (believed or assumed)?
I don't get the warning, can someone explain?
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Could you be specific? I don't recall a warning :p
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I think Twilight would have more fun tricking Celestia than having the charm do 'all' the heavy lifting.