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Omg I love this story all ready <3 can't wait for more chapters :)
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Awww thank you. Feel free to share it around, I base the growth of my stories off the comments and views. I am, however, working on the next chapter of this.
7105448 awesome! I'm super excited to read more chapters :) a story this good will grow in popularity fast
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hmmmmmmmm....
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Hmmmm?
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I'll be watching this one. Let's see how it goes...
Hoping for more; this seems interesting!
Very interesting...
Aside from that I sadly have no idea what to say.
I'm curious where it goes.
But I have a question: Will Gutter Grime have a major role in the future or will he just be an short episode?
You seem to have some punctuation errors and other small things all over the chapter.
Nothing too bad, but it could still be improved.
Maybe you should look for an proofreader.
Despite some sparse minor grammatical chapters, this is a really cool story. Fluttershy didn't make much sense to me, but I'm looking forward to seeing where the story goes if it'll be continued.