Trixie Senpai FOREVER!!! Ship Trixie with anyone and you'll make your fic 500% cooler/awesome! Also remember to give the golden mares some love! Mayor Mare, Cherry Jubilee, and Harshwhinny!
After being freed from the Amulet, Trixie returns home to the Pie Rock farm to find Limestone at Holder's Boulder.
After a rough confrontation Limestone and Trixie get into a bad situation that forces them to both think about what they'd done in their lives and their feelings about each other in what could be their very last moments.
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Great story but one thing:
Isn't supposed to be patient, not patent?
Awesome story, now I'm on to frostbite.
7149474 Aww PikaPakiChu.
Yes, you are correct. Patient is the correct word.
since it is already finished I'm going to read it a little bit later, I have to learn for a test too, but I'm sure I can already leave you an upvote, I love your writing style anyway, everything else hardly matters. I mean I only can think of reasons that wouldn't be fair anyway.
7150111 Well then I look forward to your thoughts on th e story after you read it.
finally I have the time to read the prologue
I think I can manage to read the second longer chapter today too.
As weird as it may sound, I love it if you have moments like that one in your storys. (I'm speaking about Trixie falling of the cliff), it is like the moment with Apple Jack hitting Applebloom, it just adds a certain......let's just say I'm always very concentrated if something like that happens. (sometimes I even start to think in english and somehow forgot some words in german that I use rather rarely, I mean of course I don't forget my main language^^)
oh they already were together? well that's fine too.
Nice story, and because of the grey whatever I like to think they were saved too.
Not bad, I maybe expected to see the reaction of her familly or something like that, but for a one-shot it was pretty good. Okay not really a one-shot but I don't count the prologue, however I usually read no one-shot if it isn't at least a bit interessting to me, and yours is one of the best I had read so far. I think it has to be since I already like your writing, or at least your sense of....drama?