I like all thing MLP and kirby. Otherwise I don't really like to talk about myself much.
When John Greywood wakes up six feet underground he finds himself at a loss at his surroundings. Now he must deal with silly ponies, annoying villains, and one very unpleasant cat as he works to find his place in this strange new world. Oh and he's also a member of the undead, but when has a tiny detail like that ever been a problem for anybody?
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Hmm. Interesting. It's a good premise, unique as well. (As unique as a HiE story can get anyway.) The only thing I think really needs to be said is that you need an editor. I can ignore the grammar and structure errors to look at the story itself, but not everyone is going to want to. for now though, I'll be watching this...
thats an appropriate response to finding out your dead
Interesting first chapter, but please get a proofreader.
Please tell me he eats brains...
Please....
(•_•)
Well leave to a cat to get hungry and do what it wants.
Vegetarians are actually still omnivores not herbivores. Vegetarians still eat some forms of animal flesh, it is the damn vegans who are herbivores. Also aren't ponies omnivores to some degree?
Congrats on pretty much copy-pasting the beginning of mogworld
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The beginning of what?
oh oh oh what if he sucks up residual magic in the air to stay together
What? How was that a horse pun?
7179994 Uhh... Maybe the fact that The Living Tombstone made some Pony Remixes is relevant?
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I'm sorry but that doesn't qualify it as a horse pun.
7626631 I know, but that's likely the closest reasoning I can come up with.
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Yeah, no one wins when you have to reach that far for a joke to even make joke sense. Especially if it is a pun.
“MWHAHAHAHA!” The insane unicorn mare laughs before pointing at me. “Now, my evil, undead minion, go and destroy these interlopers!”
WHAT!?
“I’m not destroying anyone!?" "Well, atleast until you pay me to do so."
Ooh, SpongeBob reference
MOAR!!!
That wasn't bad and it definitely is not a copy paste of Mogworld. Felt more like a Prachett storyline just without all the extra side stuff he puts in.
Not that that is bad. The story seems fine.
Oh the rage I’m out of chapters
