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Starlight Glimmer has been working hard to amend for her past and apologize to everypony she's wronged. However, there is one mare who just won't be satisfied with a simple "I'm sorry", a hug, and a valuable lesson in friendship.

That mare is Twilight Sparkle. She has traveled the very fabric of time and space tracking the mare who messed with the course of her world and sent it into the tail spin that has taken so much from her and everypony else. And she is going to make her pay.

Starlight has to flee those seeking the powers and knowladge of time travel inside her head while drowning in the guilt of what she's done. Meanwhile, Princess Twilight has to survive Captain Sparkle, her marauders, the Equestrain Sky Guard's elite Starbolts, the Queen's personal protégé, countless factions warring for control in the failing kingdom, and Celestia knows what else in order to save her new friend.

An Ashworld timeline (from the Season 5 Finale) fic. Contains: multiverse, epic pony war, cyberponies, alicorn Sunset Shimmer, violence, some time travel BS, deaths of major characters, language, and a bit of gore.

Cover Photo by thegreatfrikken

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 13 )

The Derpibooru page you set for the source has the actual origin listed too: http://thegreatfrikken.deviantart.com/art/The-Worst-Future-579339605
Anyway interesting idea and I'll throw it in my read later list.

7235664
The alternate timeline with nothing but a desolate plain of ash from the season 5 finale

The is a suspicious lack of Starlight Glimmer in this story about Starlight so i suggest a rename, "Celly goes evil in an AU story" (again)

a mere 10 miles from Johnnesburrow

I see what you did there.

7251405

Well I needed to get the Twilights and their entourage out of Ponyville and on track to saving Starlight's flank first so...
Plus, the next chapter is going to be about her... treatment.
And 'Tia isn't evil she's just having issues :trollestia:


7252032
One of my better puns

7255888 That it is.:raritywink:

Kinda reminds me of Jonesboro, Arkansas, which was about an hour's drive (or thereabouts) south of where I used to live when I was a kid.

Aww, that's a shame. This story was really starting to get good.

7505907
Sorry but I might come back to it some day.

How would this story have ended?

8927750
Not a clue. Which is why I abandoned it :rainbowderp: :facehoof:

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