FUUUUUUUCCCCCCCCKKKKKKKKKKK......That...was...phenomenal. Practically a work of art. I don't usually go for straight clop and no plot. But this, this was a delectable treat that I very much enjoyed. And spike's quips always had me laughing. I loved this. Bravo.
Great and all but this chapter is way too long. You seriously couldn't have split this into 3 or 4 chapters to be a little more consistant with the length of the other chapters?
Spike out, though most likely Spike has probably worn the two of them out instead. ——)Oooh
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of green flames that shot from his nostrils, instantly giving away his excitement.
especially if he knew Rarity as well as he thought he knew.
The moment they enter the tiled room,
When they finally reached the tub,
the water already coming up to under their knees.
Spike looked up just as the mare begins to place it over his eyes.
The mare’s shudder and purr as they brush their bodies against his softer underbelly;
their efforts were soon rewarded as they felt the flood gates come pouring open.
As his twin spires breach the surface,
The two mares got to their knees and sat down between his legs.
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couldn’t help but notice the beautiful Fleur standing on the sidelines,
“Ladies,” Spike called out to them.
Spike moaned happily, feeling his members being covered in their soft pliable boob flesh. (New paragraph) “How is that, Master,” Octavia asked.
moaning as they pressed their sensitive nipples against Spike as well as each other’s. (New paragraph) “Mmm, now this is nice,” Fleur moaned in a needy tone.
Tears welling in her eyes as she cried out in the strange mixture of pain and pleasure;
“Very good,” Spike smiled up at her as he brought his hand back to rest on her right cheek.
His tender touch seemed to work as her anus easily and eagerly began to swallow his fingers,
resting her head on Tavi’s shoulder.
watching as her friend’s hands ceased their ministrations on her chest and pussy.
The surprise action caused the fashionista to throw her head back and gasp until she quickly recovered as she looked back down at her friend with a lustful smirk.
That unspoken vow seemed to work as Tavi could no longer contain herself.
She released an almost silent mewl as Rarity removed her arms from her leg from her leg, letting it fall back into the tub.
the latex fabric then soon passed her hips soon pasted her hips before she finally pushed them down her legs, revealing her
by the end of the night, I promise.”
neck and collar bone, covering every inch of flesh in her grasp
her pussy was on fire; begging, pleading to be touched and pleasured.
Comment posted by Luckyfanisaac deleted Jan 27th, 2022
Holy shiiii.... God damn that was good, very well done, a few mistakes here and there. But all in all very nice!!! I need to clean my nose now
FUUUUUUUCCCCCCCCKKKKKKKKKKK......That...was...phenomenal. Practically a work of art. I don't usually go for straight clop and no plot. But this, this was a delectable treat that I very much enjoyed. And spike's quips always had me laughing. I loved this. Bravo.
My only complaint is that sometimes you switch to present tense.
dammit. why didn't he get all the mares. oh well, still hot as fuck.
Great and all but this chapter is way too long. You seriously couldn't have split this into 3 or 4 chapters to be a little more consistant with the length of the other chapters?
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Very hot though some parts did get a little repetitive.