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When Pinkie Pie, the trickster mage finds a mask in the middle of the Everfree Forest. She runs of the Twilight for some assistance. Although the makes is very similar to Pinkie's Trickster mask, things don't seem right about it. (My Little Mages was created by Didj (originally said ponibooru, what is wrong with me) on Deviantart. It was just some of the character for FIM turned into humanized versions of the characters and made the world more magical. Any one who has seen the image may know where the fic will end up (if so please don't spoil in the comments)).

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 22 )

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It's the artwork that was done by a brony for a fan based series he was going to make. However he only ever designed the characters. I have simply looked at the characters and there professions and started trying to write this story.

Finally! Someone else going with the mages. Look forward to more!:pinkiehappy:

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Glad you like it. I will try to make the next chapter as soon as possible. I have a lot of work to do ATM moment so it might take some time.

epic son of a bitch that pinkmena dianne pie is.:rainbowlaugh::pinkiehappy::pinkiegasp::pinkiecrazy::trollestia::moustache:

First of all, get a proofreader.
Second of all, I think the chapter accidentally got cut off at the end.

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Firstly. Proofreader?
Secondly. I just wanted to get the 4th chapter over and done with. I feel like what I did in that chapter was wrong and I only wrote because there is no one else I could think of that is connected to (Killing) in such a way.
Still I'll take your comment as constructive criticism and thank you for your help.

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I think it's safe to say you didn't like that chapter :raritydespair:
Nah. It's ok man. I'm not very proud with that chapter myself. I don't like the fact that it featured them in it but it was all I could think of. Sorry. :fluttercry:

Hmm well written, but you NEED an editor to correct grammar and spell check.

That aside the story and concepts are very original. This is hardly a cupcake copy cat and stands on it's own quite well without being overly gore filled. However you could've expanded on the explanation in magical terminology.

Over all it's pretty good, just have some errors to fix.

You killed Octavia, you killed Octavia! :twilightangry2: Whu, how, but, I don't even, never mind. SO that's what a muffin mancer is, she can perform any spell by sacrificing a muffin, interesting. A cupcake. That mask possessed Pinkie and turned her into Cupcakes Pinkie, didn't it?

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Even though it's obvious? Seriously, how did they not suspect Pinkie? She loves cupcakes and can probably be quite artistic with them, geez.

I thought Vinyl was a sonic mage?

The ending felt like a bit of a cop out

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