What does she use it for?
Inspired by the mention of it in S6 Ep. 3, Gift of the Maud Pie.
Chapters (1)
- Member Since 10th Feb, 2014
- offline last seen May 21st, 2021
Michael Hudson
Original Works. It was a good run.
Michael Hudson
Joined 10th Feb, 2014 ·
Offline
Join our SubscribeStar to remove these adverts!
Join our SubscribeStar to remove these adverts!
Stats
Page generated in 0.096 seconds
Total duration
673 users online
897,626 hits today, 2,054,621 yesterday
FIMFiction
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Follow & Support Us
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
How? Digga, just how did you do that? It has been 5 maybe 6 hours since the episode came out? Color me impressed.
A bit confusing, but I liked it nonetheless.
Ooh, Suri, you are so dead.
Damn, quick! Interesting take on the Maud Sense. Nice back and forth between present and past. I like this one.
7088810 Thank you, and fixed. Also, I do agree that it is an interesting concept, and that 1k is not enough. However, I am not going to be the author who fulfills it potential, just merely one hoping I can inspire others to think on the topic, and entertain through the short tale of a character's power.
7088815
Oh, I get it now.
After a quick reread, I finally realized what the story was about. Thanks for the help!
Holy crap! You're fast as silvak? You might as well try to out-speed silvak in a contest. That will be a great challenge indeed.
This calls for a writing contest! OF SCI-FY/DARK FAN FICTION!
Or a write co-op, either way if this is too sudden for you than so is this fic.
BRONY PHILOSOPHER AWAY!
I think you meant 'a pony like'
7088844 Fixed, and thank you.
7088816
...huh. I like this idea.
7088851 You are welcome, this was a very good fic, so thank you.
An interesting topic, that it is. My only hangup was one of confusion.
With this bit, what is Limestone trying to say?
7089077 She got rejected and told she was ugly, and because Limestone already knows that she is going to be stuck on the farm, with MAYBE Marble, she is afraid she'll be alone forever unless she falls in more than sisterly love for Marble. This is made all that more difficult by her being a lesbian here, hence why the pony in Maud's mind is a mare.
7089095
So it wasn't me reading this wrong when I thought of a potentially romantic involvement between Limestone and Marble?
Also, side note: I'm pretty sure I read somewhere that Limestone is the oldest of the Pie sisters. I'll try and cite my sources if I get the chance.
Edit: Twitter post from the writer of Heathbreakers, Nick Confalone.
7089117 It would be useful, though I may leave it as is even if you do, simply because it keeps coherency by making Maud the oldest.
Maud sense... It appears to be telepathic at the start, an imge, in idea, that imprints onto her mind and allows her to find them like a magnet.
And then, she uses her power, the power to drain life, positivity, laughter and wonder from her target, bending their psyches as she rends their will. Then without a word, they are under her power, a deep, evolutionary submission reflex. Something that tells them that they have been marked to change their ways.
If they do not, they will suffer in silence, as their soul is petrified from the inside out, their minds slowing, weakening, losing function as synapses freeze.
A lobotomy from eye contact.
7090040 That is dark. I'm kinda afraid of Maud now.
7090362 Maud knows where you are. Pinkie knows and get inside without trouble.
One is content with brining joy. One loathes her curse.
Both a different side of the Pie coin.
This was quite good, both the story and MidnightFMare's observations on Maud sense.
I hope you'll consider doing more, either one shots or a novella.
7088830 How long is this contest open, I ask? I wanna knoooow!
7738499 Ha!
I wish. I only asked if they wanted one, I didn't actually get any response. Sucks for every reader I guess
I don't know why, I just thought everyone would jump at the opportunity. Maybe if you made amateur writers do it, it can still be fun. No write offs I guess
7739514 Ok. I'm working so much right now, I probably wouldn't be able to do it anyway. Working on a story on a website called Quotev, along with LOTS of other stories.