Maybe I'll upload something here. Maybe I won't. I haven't written fanfiction in a loooooong time.
Every Hearth's Warming Eve, Twist gets a brand new pack of crayons. There's only one that she uses though, and that's the blue crayon. It was the color of her Mommy, after all. Why shouldn't she use it? It may not be her special talent, but coloring always makes everything better, doesn't it?
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Don't take this seriously. I wrote this in the early morning, looked back at it and shook my head and sent it out for editing. Then I published it. I have no idea what I was thinking, but hopefully ya'll will like it.
786144
Tis fine....don't really like the cover art, but tis fine. I love this
Damn. This was really good. And creepy.
It was interesting, the writing a bit flat here and there, but otherwise a fine read. I kinda saw where it was going at the cutiemark, where I admittedly snortled a bit upon realization of who this was, but still, a nice warm little story.
Oh hey. On an unrelated note, I tried writing another story. So...yeah. ...Please don't hate me.
786379 Damn you trolls. DAMN YOU.
786379
lolz
I ain't even mad
786407 When your gonna say that altleast use thisencrypted-tbn3.google.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcRsEVE0nlZgWr344yPN-4xM8MrWtaYgHbJxejBqGG__vHE8WAY6gw
786387 Why U hatin' brah?
I guess her mother was pretty
Blue
Da ba dee da ba die!
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D'aww. I saw it coming, but after the description, I at first thought the mother was dead.
I also thought her mother was dead. The ending really startled me! Poor Twist and her father!
Also, you got the taste of crayon just right... I mean, I think that's probably what they taste like, anyway.
I'm not sure whether to laugh at that final line or not, haha. It suddenly turned to a comedy for me, even if I did know from the 'screw' part. Aside from that final line, which was a brilliant way to end, the sadness throughout was very well done as usual, subtlety and all that jazz. I might read this a few more times to pick up on the great visualisation used in it, I usually neglect it. Trying to say screw with a lisp is going to keep me busy for a while.
But yeah, pre-recorded message of 'you are amazing' which must be tiring to hear after a while from me. Looking forward to whatever other minor characters are ahead in your analytical train of awesome.
Thanks for all the comments! Yes, even the annoying spam ones.
786368
Yeah... definitely not my best work, but I thought it was at least good enough for publication. Glad you liked it, at least.
Good story, and need to chirp in that I also thought that her mother was dead. It's only because you left it so ambiguous, so really I think we're just expecting the 'dead parent' trope.
Annnnnnnnnnnyway, the best part of the story was when she was drawing the picture and how the father felt. That part hurt, very well done!
If this ISN'T one of your better works, then I'd LOVE to see what you would call your "best works." The beginning and description are left vague enough to where one would have to read the story in its entirety to get the message. You did an astounding job of giving more colour to otherwise meaningless background characters of the show. And, you've also made an interesting correlation between a screw and the twist of a candy cane. Bravo, Sir!
That was pretty interesting. All I can say is good read.
Sad Twist material?
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
My heart can't handle it!
*marks to attempt to read later*
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Don't expect much is all I'm sayian.
btw, thanks for the watch!
Good job, definitely fav. Brilliant story, though the 'screw' part completely missed me. I'm annoyed at that, really.
When you said that it looked 'abandoned', I thought that the mother was going to be the last one there, sat in her ward in the haunted hospital or something like that...
~and another one bites the dust, about 768,000 words left on my long list of things to read!
Whoa. Chills.
You had me thinking she was dead and then... THAT. Well no wonder Twist never gets to see her
Wait a minute... Is twist's mom screw loose?
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