Spike has grown into a handsome dragon, catching the attention of a lot of mares. Rarity and Rainbow Dash will battle against Pinkie Pie and Fluttershy for Spike's affection. Meanwhile, Twilight and Applejack hide a secret from their friends.
7578482 Thank you, I'm glad to hear that! I want to make sure that updates not take longer than 3 - 4 months.
7582368 If I did, then I really didn't mean to. I don't remember the movies that well. I'll try to put in some references if I can and maybe I did reference Jurassic Park and I just completely forgot.
Call me silly but I think sincerely Fluttershy already has a bit of a leg up on all of them, including Pinkie. I get it that Spike has fantasies of all of them, but the one that really showed it was that when Spike was remember his 'unfortunate [YMMV] incident' with Roseluck; he's a virile young dragon after all. But He specifically was fantasizing Fluttershy in that imagine spot, and honestly it seems that he's the most comfortable around Fluttershy. It's probably because he's a bit shy as well, so it makes sense. Of course he has Twilight around, and personally, Pinkie's pushing a bit too hard for my taste. Of course, let's not forget that apparently Spike went from crush to just a good friend with Rarity, which is messing with Rarity a bit--the classic scenario of liking him now that he's possibly with somepony else when earlier she kept her space between she and Spike.
I hope that you're able to update at your earliest convenience, but I'm more aware of how real life commitments can be.
I liked reading what you had to say on Fluttershy, Pinkie, and Rarity about their relationship and interactions with Spike. Makes me happy to read comments like these
I hope you are enjoying the story so far! I am still working on the next chapter and while I do have some real life commitments, I can still put A LOT more time into this.
The truth is, I'm being a lazy butthole BUT I will not give up or cancel this story.
Also another thing that I actually noticed (this haven't seen it with Twilight and Applejack specifically, but it's hinting that they are paired together like Pinkie Pie and Fluttershy, and RD/Rarity. And I emphasize they are PAIRED, not SHIPPED; paired and shipped are two entirely different things) was that Applejack wasn't there, but I'm assuming she shows up in the next chapter or pretty soon. In addition, by the way Pinkie was handling Spike even with the 'come hither' moments, I have to wonder what mares other than the Mane 6 could have a bit of attraction for our recently maturing drake...I'm pretty sure that all of the girls pretty know that Spike's a enviable commodity that happens to be single.
Also, have to be said...I'm pretty sure that the Filly 6*** may want to have a shot at Spike as well. Sure Spike's younger than the mane 6, but I have to assume that he's older than the Filly 6, proabably a couple of years at most.
****Filly 6 is Apple Bloom, Sweetie Belle, Scootaloo, Diamond Tiara, Silver Spoon, and Dinky in my mind. This could be after Crusaders of the Lost Mark, where DT and SS finally bury the hatchet with the CMCs after the CMCs get their cutie marks. Dinky comes along since she's blank flanked but still good friends with the CMCs.****
Twilight and Applejack are indeed paired but not in the sense of the other four mares as these two have no romantic feelings for Spike ;)
I'm not gonna place much focus on these two as compared to the others but they will get the spotlight at some point.
And a lot (but not all) mares do see Spike as a potential mate now that he looks like a adult. He may not be a full grown adult because of a dragons longer life span but he is no longer viewed as a child. A gender imbalance is both a blessing and a curse.
That is the main reason why Rarity never took him seriously as she thought it was a child's crush but he may have more mentally mature then he seemed like. After all, not much is known about dragons, the only piece of information we know for sure is that they can live a long time (I based this off of dragons in real-life fiction).
It wouldn't be odd if a certain group of blossoming young mares with newfound urges start to take notice of Spike very differently. They know him personally so they will be comfortable around him, maybe even brave...
But, I have already locked down who Spike will end up with. His interactions with the others mares who will not be his mate(s) is just for fun.
Of course, Spike is going to have to deal with a lot more from mares attracted to him as a certain week may be coming up soon. ...Is it getting warm in here?
do you really mean that three year wait
3 years huh damn that's a long time but okay
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I was making a joke on how long it took me to get this chapter out and that the next one was gonna be up after a absurd amount of time.
Sorry, I shouldn't post when I'm tired
More like DDs?
7576827 ok just wanted to make sure and in all honesty I would of waited if you weren't joking you have a pretty good story
Dumb quest but must ask is thap Jurassic park refetence when rarity said I really hate that mare sometimes ? just curiuos
Look mom, I'm late posting again.
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Thank you, I'm glad to hear that! I want to make sure that updates not take longer than 3 - 4 months.
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If I did, then I really didn't mean to. I don't remember the movies that well. I'll try to put in some references if I can and maybe I did reference Jurassic Park and I just completely forgot.
Meanwhile Applejack and Twilight are getting very comfortable and relieving some stress.
Call me silly but I think sincerely Fluttershy already has a bit of a leg up on all of them, including Pinkie. I get it that Spike has fantasies of all of them, but the one that really showed it was that when Spike was remember his 'unfortunate [YMMV] incident' with Roseluck; he's a virile young dragon after all. But He specifically was fantasizing Fluttershy in that imagine spot, and honestly it seems that he's the most comfortable around Fluttershy. It's probably because he's a bit shy as well, so it makes sense. Of course he has Twilight around, and personally, Pinkie's pushing a bit too hard for my taste. Of course, let's not forget that apparently Spike went from crush to just a good friend with Rarity, which is messing with Rarity a bit--the classic scenario of liking him now that he's possibly with somepony else when earlier she kept her space between she and Spike.
I hope that you're able to update at your earliest convenience, but I'm more aware of how real life commitments can be.
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I liked reading what you had to say on Fluttershy, Pinkie, and Rarity about their relationship and interactions with Spike. Makes me happy to read comments like these
I hope you are enjoying the story so far! I am still working on the next chapter and while I do have some real life commitments, I can still put A LOT more time into this.
The truth is, I'm being a lazy butthole BUT I will not give up or cancel this story.
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Thanks
Also another thing that I actually noticed (this haven't seen it with Twilight and Applejack specifically, but it's hinting that they are paired together like Pinkie Pie and Fluttershy, and RD/Rarity. And I emphasize they are PAIRED, not SHIPPED; paired and shipped are two entirely different things) was that Applejack wasn't there, but I'm assuming she shows up in the next chapter or pretty soon. In addition, by the way Pinkie was handling Spike even with the 'come hither' moments, I have to wonder what mares other than the Mane 6 could have a bit of attraction for our recently maturing drake...I'm pretty sure that all of the girls pretty know that Spike's a enviable commodity that happens to be single.
Also, have to be said...I'm pretty sure that the Filly 6*** may want to have a shot at Spike as well. Sure Spike's younger than the mane 6, but I have to assume that he's older than the Filly 6, proabably a couple of years at most.
****Filly 6 is Apple Bloom, Sweetie Belle, Scootaloo, Diamond Tiara, Silver Spoon, and Dinky in my mind. This could be after Crusaders of the Lost Mark, where DT and SS finally bury the hatchet with the CMCs after the CMCs get their cutie marks. Dinky comes along since she's blank flanked but still good friends with the CMCs.****
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Twilight and Applejack are indeed paired but not in the sense of the other four mares as these two have no romantic feelings for Spike ;)
I'm not gonna place much focus on these two as compared to the others but they will get the spotlight at some point.
And a lot (but not all) mares do see Spike as a potential mate now that he looks like a adult. He may not be a full grown adult because of a dragons longer life span but he is no longer viewed as a child. A gender imbalance is both a blessing and a curse.
That is the main reason why Rarity never took him seriously as she thought it was a child's crush but he may have more mentally mature then he seemed like. After all, not much is known about dragons, the only piece of information we know for sure is that they can live a long time (I based this off of dragons in real-life fiction).
It wouldn't be odd if a certain group of blossoming young mares with newfound urges start to take notice of Spike very differently. They know him personally so they will be comfortable around him, maybe even brave...
But, I have already locked down who Spike will end up with. His interactions with the others mares who will not be his mate(s) is just for fun.
Of course, Spike is going to have to deal with a lot more from mares attracted to him as a certain week may be coming up soon.
...Is it getting warm in here?
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Yeah, we definintely are in the heat of the moment, even if we're a bit early...
...I'm not sorry.
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Don't be....because I won't be sorry.
New chapter coming soon!
1 - 2 weeks out!
Soon? More like VALVe time, amirite?
I just need a few more days
For realsies this time.
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Drat, I thought I was doing good with those spelling errors. I'll definitely look into someone for proofreading.
OH MY GOD, PATH OF CLOUD NOTICED ME