Spike has grown into a handsome dragon, catching the attention of a lot of mares. Rarity and Rainbow Dash will battle against Pinkie Pie and Fluttershy for Spike's affection. Meanwhile, Twilight and Applejack hide a secret from their friends.
There's a lot of small errors that at times can be rather jarring, the writing isn't bad or anything mind you, but you could really use someone to proofread this.
This is intresting
There's a lot of small errors that at times can be rather jarring, the writing isn't bad or anything mind you, but you could really use someone to proofread this.